Experience Another Calamity; See Another Flashback. (Edited Ver.)

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's POV:

I saw the new boy come towards our place to take his seat behind me. When he passed beside me, I felt WEIRD. Not good WEIRD but you know, the WEIRD feeling when you are about to sense trouble and I don't reall like the way he looks at me. 'The new guys in this school are really weird!' I thought.

'First, I just found out an hour ago that I am a descendant of a woman who caused the world of magic to turn upside-down and in order to bring everything back to normal, I have to marry one or all of these guys.' I thought as I eyed the three of them with a sigh.

'Second, I have to act creepier than the usual madwoman that I really am. I have to practice these weird stuff that they call 'spells' and I have to keep out of danger, not to cause anything that can break the DEAL we made. Well whatever!' I scoffed at my seat, 'Then the recent event - A new student came with the same vibes with these three.' I thought with slumped shoulders.

'I just don't see how my life can get weirder than this one right now.' I tried to distract myself as class started.

DONGHAE'S POV:

'Well, she just sighed. HMPH!' I laughed to myself as I heard her deeply sighing behind me. 'Does she really find us TOO BOTHERSOME? I mean, she used to enjoy it before...when we used to be all togther.' Now it was my turn to sigh.

'Ok, whatever. Let's leave it at that, but I guess it won't be so hard to make a choice though. AISH! Whatever!' I ruffled my hair in frustration, 'What the hell?! Did i just- Maybe...Ok, whatever. DONGHAE, don't fall for her charms.. you may as well know what kind of troubles you would face once history repeats itself. It'll just create greater headaches, a greater pain in the head. ONE ACCIDENT was enough to prove that SHE was never meant for us...For me.'

I then turned myattention back to the class. 'I guess I need to get a grip of myself.'

NICHKHUN'S POV:

'What a bother! They just had to get in my way! Tch.' I thought as I bore invisible holes at the back of those three Lees. 'I could just have her and finish whatever I have to! WITHOUT ALL THESE DISTRACTIONS!' I thought while staring at HER from the back.

3RD POV:

The English Class finally ended.
Everyone looked exhausted as if they were just given a mountain of paperwork.

groaned "Just for one teeny-tiny homework, you groan?! C'mon Princess, we'll make it easier for 'ya." Joon joked. shot him a cold glare. "Well, can't you be less happier to have us by your presence? You TRAITOR." Donghae smirked.

"Well, well, I never said anything to a political outcast like you; You passed the rightful judgement that you DESERVED." Nichkhun replied, smirking. Oh boy was he mocking Donghae's nerves.

Noticing that the tension is starting to ar

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Vampirexy192 #1 Dec 9, 2015 06:44:47

Chapter 11: Oh yeah, I know I comment too much on this but I just wanna add, no need to emphasize too much on every word that seems unnecessary like you give in a bold font or capital letter and reduce the 3 period symbol. It just dragging your sentence. Probably it was a habit to put three dots at the end of sentence. xD Maybe, I assumed. It's okay, everyone make a mistake that they unconsciously did. Even me, myself ^_^ But if you still keep it, it's fine. Everyone has their own styles to write. :D

Vampirexy192 #2 Dec 9, 2015 06:39:34

Chapter 11: First of all, I want to say that the colors actually distract me. I don't mind, it was colorful indeed but I would suggest you do not use yellow color because I couldn't see the word clearly. >.> And I preferred if you name the female main character so you wouldn't have to keep it blank in all you story. Also, the thoughts of a person and the person conversation should be distinguished. Like we can tell that it was her thoughts or she was talking. People's point of view is already considered as expressing their inner minds or thoughts. Unless that person voiced out her opinion in her head loudly as if she was talking to herself. That is different. Like you use this for the "conversation" and thoughts, you can use 'this' or in italic words. Oh! Btw in Chapter 11, the protagonist brother had changed from Baro to Jinyoung? o.o What just happened? That actually confused me, I don't know if you had mistakenly written that. Moreover, it was difficult to you know telling their perspectives especially the Lee's brothers. I was rather puzzled because it seems jumbled up to me. Therefore, the flow of the story is a bit disrupted. I'm just giving my comment not because of I hate it, I just want to point out the mistakes so you can improve and become better. :D I hope you don't take any offence from this. However, the plot story was interesting like I can feel European or Victorian kind of style. Classic and vintage. Hahaha. As well as the mystery behind her amnesia and the history of their descendants. :)