The Search And The Upcoming Ruckus. (Edited Ver.)

Forget Me Not: Journey Of Memories
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**DURING THE SEARCH**

~ and Donghae~   3RD POV:   It was still awfully awkward and silent between the two as they rode the free transportation lent by the hotel to their customers. Both exchanged sighs and tried to start a conversation, but they just end up opening their mouths yet the words never come out. Donghae drove while sat beside him, staring out the window.   'Why can't I spout anything of sense right now?!' Donghae furrowed his eyebrows as his grip on the steering wheel tightened as each second passed by them, agonizingly. 'Why am I so affected anyways?! It's not like we confessed anything to one another, did we?' puffed her cheeks gently, feeling her body warmth.   'I just hope she'll remember me soon.' Donghae thought, sighing. 'I just hope I'll remember WHO HE USED TO BE IN MY LIFE soon.'  thought. The car came to a slow stop in the parking area of what seemed to be a government establishment.     DONGHAE'S POV:   "S-so -ah, this is the UOC HQ, or to be more specific: Unidentified Object Specializations Committee Head Quarters." I said, trying not to stutter, but I had an epic fail at that. "Uhm, are we gonna ask them directly about my feathers or we still have to aske them first about any strange occurences?" She asked, fiddling with her fingers and I can notice how hards she's trying to escape my gaze. 'Why are we LIKE THIS now, Princess? I MISS YOU SO MUCH.' I sighed. Snapped out of my thoughts, I felt a sudden tap on my shoulder.     "Oppa, I know it's still strange to be talking THIS CASUAL with you, but you know...Letting out loud sighs are a VERY BIG MINUS to your TOTAL HAPPINESS in life~" She cheerfully beamed at me. I can't help but smile. "Hey, c'mon. I guess I just had a bad morning, no big deal. So...friends?" I asked, holding my hand out for a handshake. "FRIENDS." She replied while shaking my hand happily. We then went to the main desk. A tall girl greeted us.     'S POV:   "Annyeonhaseyo, Choi Sooyoung imnida. How may I help the couple?" She said with a cheerful tone. 'Guess she isn't THAT bad. It's just her LONG LEGS bother me so.' I thought. Seriously, they talked about some stuff regarding recent events, mysterious occurences and unidentified objects sighted throughout MIRAI. "You can start looking around. Call for me when any of you may need assistance." WIth that, she left us. Her clacking heels made me ponder, 'Obviously, for someone who has an average height - who wouldn't be jealous of a tall girl like her?' I sighed as she led me and Hae-oppa to a library-like area of the UOC HQ.   ~Joon and Jiyeon~   3RD POV:   They quickly arrived to the nearest police station in the vicinity. "So Joonie-oppa, what now?" Jiyeon asked, trying to keep still while Joon's eyes checked the place for any hidden spells or traps set by SPIES. "Spies? I don't think so today oppa." Jiyeon interrupted his train of thoughts and then grbbed onto his hand, pulling him to the main entrance.     'Aish, this girl~' Joon smiled to himself a she took secret glances at Jiyeon. 'I wonder why it took so long for me to realize that I already had liked her since then?' He smiled and held Jiyeon's hand, causing the girl to turn and stare at her oppa. "Hmmm~?" She eyed him strangely, making Joon arch his right eyebrow. "Wae?" He innocently asked, pretending as if nothing ever happened. Jiyeon just smiled and said, "Nothing~"        They were greeted by two people who were idly sitting on two chair on the main desk. "Op-oppa, they seem like they don't wanna be disturbed." Jiyeon whispered as she tugged on Joon's shirt, signalling for them to back away and find another place to start with the search. Just as they were about to go out, the guy who was sitting in the desk noticed them and yelled out, "OI! YOU THERE! STOP!" As soon as they heard his voice, they froze and stood there. "Yuri-ah, looks like we have some new cases up!" As he call
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Vampirexy192
#1
Chapter 11: Oh yeah, I know I comment too much on this but I just wanna add, no need to emphasize too much on every word that seems unnecessary like you give in a bold font or capital letter and reduce the 3 period symbol. It just dragging your sentence. Probably it was a habit to put three dots at the end of sentence. xD Maybe, I assumed. It's okay, everyone make a mistake that they unconsciously did. Even me, myself ^_^ But if you still keep it, it's fine. Everyone has their own styles to write. :D
Vampirexy192
#2
Chapter 11: First of all, I want to say that the colors actually distract me. I don't mind, it was colorful indeed but I would suggest you do not use yellow color because I couldn't see the word clearly. >.> And I preferred if you name the female main character so you wouldn't have to keep it blank in all you story. Also, the thoughts of a person and the person conversation should be distinguished. Like we can tell that it was her thoughts or she was talking. People's point of view is already considered as expressing their inner minds or thoughts. Unless that person voiced out her opinion in her head loudly as if she was talking to herself. That is different. Like you use this for the "conversation" and thoughts, you can use 'this' or in italic words. Oh! Btw in Chapter 11, the protagonist brother had changed from Baro to Jinyoung? o.o What just happened? That actually confused me, I don't know if you had mistakenly written that. Moreover, it was difficult to you know telling their perspectives especially the Lee's brothers. I was rather puzzled because it seems jumbled up to me. Therefore, the flow of the story is a bit disrupted. I'm just giving my comment not because of I hate it, I just want to point out the mistakes so you can improve and become better. :D I hope you don't take any offence from this. However, the plot story was interesting like I can feel European or Victorian kind of style. Classic and vintage. Hahaha. As well as the mystery behind her amnesia and the history of their descendants. :)
exolovechick
#3
yea i was surprised to see exolovechick i would recommend to name the main character but other than that, i am looking forward in reading this fic :)
rukehna #4
scared the crap out of me when i see my username lol
yoonaaegyo
#5
Its realy funny because my username is also yoonaaegyo but otherwise I am looking forward to reading this fanfics :)
ILoveKitCats
#6
Chapter 19: this story is so mysterious . i must keep reading to know the ans .. jinjja daebak !!
chimaniecricket
#7
always sj15forever!!!!
x3Yoongiex3
#8
Chapter 125: i just finished your story & really liked it (:
jonginies #9
okay! ^^
Little-Red
#10
@kpopaholic121: SEE YOU AT THE OTHER STORIES CHINGGU~ :D