His Promise

HEAVEN SENT

When Kris comes home from work the next day, no-one bounces up to him and hugs him again.

No-one comes. No Suho.

He calls the boy’s name.

No answer.

Suho is gone.

***



Kris parks his car on the sideway and gets out, pausing for a moment before he crosses the street and walks to his destination.

There it is.

Black.

Cold.

Hostile.

The ruins of his house. The place where his wife and his kids died.

He walks closer, carefully entering the ruins.

The living room.

The dining room

The kitchen.

The bathroom.

The room where he slept with his wife.

The children’s room.

He looks at it all. Looks what is left.

It’s not much and it hurts. It hurts to be at the place where he lost his family and to see his old home so completely destroyed. Nothing is left. Everything has burnt down, is nothing more than cold ash.

He kneels down suddenly, digging a bit in the ash before pulling out a tiny doll.

The doll has lost one eye, it is dirty and sooty, the hair has almost completely burnt. It’s the doll his youngest daughter used to play with.

He presses the doll to his chest, his heart, the one thing that survived the flames and starts crying again.

But it’s liberating. He’s still grieving but he’s not suffering anymore. He knows he can go on with his life now. He’ll never forget them, at least not as long as he’s alive but he is able to leave the pain behind and live his own life.

He thinks he can feel a wave of comfort and reassurance wash over him and knows Suho is there.

Always is. Always will be.

Just like he promised it.

END


 

 

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ephemeral24
2431 streak #1
Chapter 13: congrats Kris for finally moving on, it was tough and it took a long time but what matters is that he's free to live his life again now...

thank you for this authornim! it was beautiful!
ephemeral24
2431 streak #2
Chapter 12: I KNEW THIS WAS GONNA HAPPEN! HUHUHU
ephemeral24
2431 streak #3
Chapter 11: Kris finally starting to move in from the tragedy warms my heart... he shouldn't have blamed himself for so long since he shouldn't have blamed himself from the very start!
ephemeral24
2431 streak #4
Chapter 10: isn't it dangerous to look up Suho's past life? aren't there gonna be implications???
ephemeral24
2431 streak #5
Chapter 9: poor Krisㅠㅠ
ephemeral24
2431 streak #6
Chapter 8: heaven hierarchy is pretty interesting
ephemeral24
2431 streak #7
Chapter 6: at least Kris was more amicable to Jun the next morning... the anger and disbelief would've been very tiring for him tbh
ephemeral24
2431 streak #8
Chapter 4: a sassy guardian angel!
why is he even drinking beer? Suho pls
ephemeral24
2431 streak #9
Chapter 2: Kris is desolate... what a tragedy he had to go thru
Himlo_ko
#10
Chapter 13: OMG! This is wonderful author-nim! I-I cried TT^TT
Poor Kris...