Syndrome

Description

 

Luhan's been trying to find Sehun for 3 years.

But it seems like Sehun doesn't want to be found.

 

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And even when he seeks the help of Seo Joohyun, 

Luhan is always one step behind.

 

 

 

Foreword

My name is Luhan and I'm looking for someone.

That someone is my best friend, Oh Sehun. He's a bit taller than me with honey blonde hair. 3 years ago, I made a huge mistake. I got into a car accident and since waking up from the coma, he's been ignoring me ever since.

Why? I'm not sure why.

Have you seen him by any chance? Could you pass him a message for me?

Stop avoiding me. Stop pretending to be out when I call round. Stop ignoring my texts. Stop ignoring my calls.

Don't pretend like you're dead and talk to me.

Please.

 

 

(Written 3 years ago)

Luhan-hyung! 

Thanks for this vacation trip, it's been the best just being with you. 

You haven't gotten angry, not even once and it's been wonderful spending time with you. But even still, I worry about you. When you're angry, you're emotional and when you're emotional, you're reckless. Don't let me worry too much, okay? I won't be able to keep an eye on you forever! 

Saying that all though, I'm really happy here on this holiday and I wish we could go for more vacations like this when we have the time. Seoul is suffocating sometimes, isn't it? Maybe we should leave? But until then, at least we can support each other. I'll always be with you.

Even when I'm not around, I'll be watching and thinking of you. 

Oh Sehun will be watching because I love you, hyung. 

I'll always love you, hyung, and that will never change.

 

 


 - CONTEST ENTRY -


 STORY TITLE : Syndrome

 RATINGS : PG-13


 WORD COUNT : 10,066

 COMPLETED : 16/05/14

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shipsails #1
Chapter 1: I can never imagine watching someone I love die before me ;; Idk why but I thought of this happening to me since car accidents aren't that rare. Some people call these scenes cliche but this somewhat still hit close to home for me. I loved this so much <3 If I could upvote this, I would. Keep writing authornim n i promise to come back when i have enough karma points xD
rilavipblackjack #2
Chapter 1: My eyes got watery and my heart clenches as if this actually happened in real life :'(
AnUnusualTwist
#3
Chapter 1: This was so bittersweet, but it was also really beautiful. I really enjoyed this!
JEONJUNGK00K #4
Chapter 1: this. Im crying my eyeballs out at 1am is this even real for Gods sake. Its ing sad to read how Luhan was there when Sehun took his final breath and to be honest, i am very very terrified when im riding a car ((not for the short distance, just the long distance)) and this story just scared me a whole lot more idek i just want some safety????
aichan1596
#5
Chapter 1: Ahh~
I cried. A lot. This was so sad yet beautiful. I want to have a bestfriend like them :')
Onepenny #6
Chapter 1: Aw jesus that was so so sad :( Beautifully told.
ikanadia95
#7
Chapter 1: This is too sad and i'm cryingT.T..hunhan's so sweet..love them and love you author-nim for the story..it's beautiful.,
SweetCandyXXX
#8
Chapter 1: i normally would say 'i have no idea what to feel right now'

But i know how to feel.

I dont even know if this is a feel.

I feel so ed.

And not in the good way.