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Designer: paulmccartney

 

Reviewer: Xiuminbaozi99

 

Date: 00/00/00

 

First impression: 8/10
This piece of work didn't give me a strong first impression, good or bad. At the first glance, things looked all over the place. I really like the soothing aura this work gives me through the mellow color scheme and character position though.

Poster layout: 7/10
You did well to arrange your fonts and the character, but everything else, the textures and stocks, throws me off. They are well chosen, but they seem to be poor incorporated, resulting in them looking randomly slapped on. It would be a lot better if you blended them more carefully and soften the edges so that they look like they melt into each other. 

Font: 4/5
I really like the font you chose, and how you kept the colors simple. You did a great job positioning them with the girl in the middle. The transition between the texts are also nice. However, the only concern I have with the font is that I have no idea what the last word says. Perhaps use a different font that is easier to comprehend for the viewers can improve the poster. 

Character layout: 5/5
You definitely nailed the character layout. The girl is well chosen and placed at the center of the poster. It is the most eye catching element on the poster. The girl stands out from the rest. Great job. 

Color scheme: 5/5
I really like the color scheme of this poster. It leans toward a more velvet color which matches the girl's dress perfectly well as well as the shapes you have to the right.

Mood: 3/5
Other than a calming feelings,  I don't feel any other significant moods to this poster. There is a tinge of sadness but not enough to be noticed by general viewers. 

Overall looks: 7/10
Overall, the poster is well made, but there are some areas you can take a look at and improve. One thing that I noticed was an awkward area in the bottom right corner where it looks like something had been sliced off. Another thing is that the poster looks very messy. The different things look like it was stitched on. You need to find a way to make things look more natural.

Total score: 39/50

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Rover_Orphaned #1
Chapter 74: Hey,
Thanks for the review. Especially considering it is a long read and not your particular cup of tea. Now that the story is already a few weeks old, I agree with you and a few other reviewers that it dragged on a little too long. But overall, not too shabby for a first attempt. ;) I've credited you in the foreword. ^^
XOXO Mirre
amaeteur #2
Chapter 76: thank you so much for the review! :) i was a bit nervous when i clicked open the chapter... hahah
and yes i think thats a blending error, i dint notice it at first HAHAh thank you for pointing it out!!

once again, thank you for the review! will come back for more in the future~ :)
FlowerySpeech #3
Chapter 71: Thank you for the review :D
paulmccartney #4
Thanks for the review! Picked up :D I don't actually have a shop here, but I have a gallery on a different site, if you'd like me to link..? If not, I can just post it on my profile. I don't know...:/
Once again, thanks! :)
sognatore-xo
#5
I requested a graphic review not sure if it went through though.
amaeteur #6
hello! requested and upvoted. looking forward to the review! :)
paulmccartney #7
I've submitted a request! :)
Jinhwanderer
#8
Chapter 70: Hanbin didnt struggle with the workload per se, but with himself and his lost passion. It is a story that would be pretty difficult to understand if you didn't follow ikon/team b in their survival shows and if you didnt experience the struggles that came with it, since it is canon. I do agree with some of your points though. And as for Jinhwan, I know he is a huge mystery but I wanted to leave it that way to have the readers feel the same as Hanbin. He, too, didn't know much about the boy.Btw, what do you mean by sidebar? And thanks for the review. I'll credit you when I get on my PC ^^
tsinaee
#9
Chapter 68: thank you so much! i'll work hard on this, your opinions and response really helped me :) thank you again!