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Designer: FlowerySpeech

 

Reviewer: Xiuminbaozi99

 

Date: 01/11/15

 

First impression: 8/10
My first impression of this poster is very good. It is interestingly designed, the textures suits the mood and was very well chosen. The one thing that threw me off is the slightly awkward positioning which I will discuss later. 

Poster layout: 8/10
The poster layout is good, but not great. There isn't an eye catching element on here, thus gives out a kind of messy vibe. It would be a lot better if you added something that immediately grabs the viewer's attention. 

Font: 3.5/5
The current font looks fine, and it matches the poster well. But it would have been better if you made the title stand out more, whether it's by adding a more defined shadow, deepen the colour, or increase the size of the font. 

Also, maybe it's just me, but I find to quote on the poster to be too small and difficult to see. What's the point of having the text there if no one can see it? 

Character layout: 4/5
I have to admit, this character layout is pretty unique and not often seen. I like the idea you have going, but I find it to be too well balanced, meaning that the spaces are taken up evenly which brings me back to my other point, there is no eye catching point. 

Colour scheme: 5/5
The color scheme is very well chosen. Everything is in harmony. The only suggestion I can make is perhaps make the colours higher contrast for a more brightened and 'active' feeling (this poster seems to be action themed).

Mood: 4/5
To be honest, I can't feel a specific mood from this poster. However, it's not a big deal because I don't think you intended for there to be a strong feelings to occur (light hearted, horror, angst, etc). From the radars and beams, I can tell that this is more of an action themed poster. 

Overall looks: 8/10
The overall of this poster isn't bad. It is fairly pleasant for me to look at. There just need to be a touch of a unique component in here, such as higher contrast colors, exagerated font or certain items, and perhaps even more negative space. I really like the theme and your character positioning idea.

Total score: 40.5/50

Thank you for requesting from us! 

 

As a graphic reviewer, I would have preferred it more if you have filled out all the information in the form. Regardless, I completed the review. I hope I have given you some critical suggestions. 

 

Good luck with your future works, come again!

 

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Rover_Orphaned #1
Chapter 74: Hey,
Thanks for the review. Especially considering it is a long read and not your particular cup of tea. Now that the story is already a few weeks old, I agree with you and a few other reviewers that it dragged on a little too long. But overall, not too shabby for a first attempt. ;) I've credited you in the foreword. ^^
XOXO Mirre
amaeteur #2
Chapter 76: thank you so much for the review! :) i was a bit nervous when i clicked open the chapter... hahah
and yes i think thats a blending error, i dint notice it at first HAHAh thank you for pointing it out!!

once again, thank you for the review! will come back for more in the future~ :)
FlowerySpeech #3
Chapter 71: Thank you for the review :D
paulmccartney #4
Thanks for the review! Picked up :D I don't actually have a shop here, but I have a gallery on a different site, if you'd like me to link..? If not, I can just post it on my profile. I don't know...:/
Once again, thanks! :)
sognatore-xo
#5
I requested a graphic review not sure if it went through though.
amaeteur #6
hello! requested and upvoted. looking forward to the review! :)
paulmccartney #7
I've submitted a request! :)
Jinhwanderer
#8
Chapter 70: Hanbin didnt struggle with the workload per se, but with himself and his lost passion. It is a story that would be pretty difficult to understand if you didn't follow ikon/team b in their survival shows and if you didnt experience the struggles that came with it, since it is canon. I do agree with some of your points though. And as for Jinhwan, I know he is a huge mystery but I wanted to leave it that way to have the readers feel the same as Hanbin. He, too, didn't know much about the boy.Btw, what do you mean by sidebar? And thanks for the review. I'll credit you when I get on my PC ^^
tsinaee
#9
Chapter 68: thank you so much! i'll work hard on this, your opinions and response really helped me :) thank you again!