Wolf-Primal Insticts: Pars 1 & 2
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Genre: Drama, Werewolf
Characters:Exo, Luhan, Kai, Kyungsoo, So Hee (oc)
Status: Completed
A new transferee to a school in a new town, who tries to keep his secret hidden.
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Title (7/10)
I think another tiltle will fit more into the story. the title doesnt give a good impression to start readng.
Description & Foreword (18/20)
I think foreword is somehow short, dont you think? however, it kind of matched well with the plot. It made me curious.
Originality (9/10)
It doesnt really resemble the MV, but it made sense.
Storyline: (18/20)
You added many scenes that fit the story, and that made it look good.
Grammar and Spelling (10/10)
I cant find mistakes! OMG! but you can use advanced vocbulary later on.
Characterization (9/10)
You used many characters, and I know it's not easy to develop them all perfectly.
Flow (9/10)
I felt some flow changes. You should add some scenes in part 1.
Personal Enjoyment (9/10)
I usually don't review and wolves fanfictions, and this was my first. In fact, I didnt want to review it in the beginning. But, it was assigned for me, and I am lucky it was; because I really enjoyed it! I think I am going to open up for werewolves hahaha.
Overall (89/100)
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