First Bite...

Melt My Frozen Heart

Lay POV

The first thing i notice when i wake up was dark! Like really dark...the room was a mixture of black and red...i look around and notice how empty this room are..i was now lying on a big bed..really big bed..where the hell am i?...where is Luhan?

“Lulu...” i look around and didn’t catch even a glimps of my twin..where is he..

“Luhan..” i called a little bit louder...and then i hear some movement in the corner of the room..it gave me a shock...i get out of the bed..

“deer??” i walk toward direction and was meet with the Suho guy who was appearantly sleeping on the small rocking chair..he look different when he was asleep...wait!!! its Suho...where is Luhan..what happen to him

i started to panic and walk slowly backward..i move toward the door as fast as i could and open it..the hallway was quiet that i tip toe so that no one could hear me...tears threatend to fall from my eyes...

“Luhan....where are you” i mumble to my self and tears slowly blur my vision...where is he...he said he never left me alone...is something happen to him

Suddenly i felt someone behind me and when i turn around he was there..he smirk to me and look at me straight to my soul

“you know....its not a good thing to walk alone in this palace” Suho grab my hand and drag me to follow him..

“please...let me go” i struggle and he didn’t even bother by it because he just continue to drag me

I pull my hand and bite his hand,well that made him stop..he turn around and look at me...his eye change into dark red and i regret my action when he toss me around his shoulder and in a blink of eye i was now back in his room...i punch his back and kick the air..he snap and basically throw me on the bed and straddle me

“you should behave kid....im not as sweet as your father” he whisper in my ear and grip my hand tighter

At the mention of papa,tears started to fall from my eyes..why all of this happen to me...what did we ever do wrong...

“you belong with me now!!” he say and i can felt him slowly move toward my neck...before i can do anything,i can felt him bite my neck..i scream and push him away..but he grab my hand and hold it in his...it was painful and after a while i was to tired to even raise my hand...i look at him with blurry eyes and notice how his eyes still look at me...his face look rather amazed and he pull my hand a smell it

“your blood is different” he whisper before he bite into my wrist...i was to tired to even scream...he keep on bitting my body...all of my body is full with his bite...i was tired...i want to sleep..maybe it is my time to go...

“Luhan...papa...mama...i love you”

 

Luhan POV

I was awaken with  a faint scream...an in instant i know it belong to a certain unicorn...i look around and notice i was on a big bed and my instint told me to save Lay...i hurried get out from the bed and run toward the door,but before i could even hold the knob someone pull me and when i turn around i was meet with a dark red orb..Sehun...

“let me go!!!” i push him away but he just smirk and drag me toward the bed

“what the hell are you doing?” i push him but he climb up on top of me and sit on my waist

“don’t try to be a hero kid” he say and grip my hand tighter..he move forward toward me and i turn away

“get off me” i struggle and kick my feet on the air..he look at me and move his hand toward my neck

“stay still” he said and strangle me...

“or it will be the last time you fight with me” he grip my neck tighter

I look him straight in the eye...if he want to end my life right now,i will die while fighting...eventhough i felt my lung is begging for air...i will not beg to these monster..i closed my eyes and smile,but before i could even greet the dark...he let go...i open my eyes and notice he was looking at me

“what??? You think i will let you die that easily” he tilt my head so that my neck was visible

“im sorry...its not easy to left me” with that word he bite my neck...the pain is beyond my imagination..no word could describe..when he let go,he look shocked and his eyes is now turn to pitch black

“your different” i hear him say but i was so tired...he tilt my head to the other side and bite my neck again..i try to push him away but then he grab my hand and bite my wrist..he my blood right infront of my eyes..i felt so tired that i closed my eyes...tears started to fall...i want my papa...

 

Author POV

Lay and Luhan pass out because of to much blood loss...the two blood brother has to much blood that the twin has turn pale in a matter of minute..they have never taste any blood like that..the sweet and a tingle of electric when they first taste it made them addicted...eventhough the keep on drinking it,it’s not enough..they keep on wanting to taste the unique flavour that when they were done,the twin was already lost to much blood..

“they were different...” Suho say...they were in the balcony and were watching the full moon

“something really is missing here” Sehun whisper

“any human would have die..but somehow they survived” Suho look at Sehun and nod his head...they totally lost it back then and by the amount of the blood lost,the twin will surely die but amazingly they were breathing on their bed..

The thing that made them even lost is that their bite mark are slowly healing...only vampire can heal that fast and the last time they checked the twin are nothing close to vampire

“are we missing something here” Sehun look at Suho and his blood brother just shook his head

“something is really wrong here” they watch the cold night and try to find the missing piece that they left behind

 

a/n

hei guys....

well with all the that happen right now...

i hope you will still on for TaoRis because...i really don't know what to say

ermm....with Tao crying while singing in SM and Baekhyun shouting for someone to leave him alone

Kris is ill and etc...i just hope everyone will still support Kris and Exo though

lets just hope for the best and i hope you will like my update with the whole thing that happen

until the next chappie owkey....

byei...

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Samuraimama
#1
Chapter 24: Read this story from start till chapter 24 in one go and enjoyed it very much!
devilblack98
#2
Chapter 24: Well you know what ? If being on your shoes , I will just said ' you ! You don't know what writing is ! ' then pray for them to burn in the deepest hell . And one more thing . Where are those tard come form ? Eventough my native language is english and mandrin , I don't think its good to mock other poeple effot . Just .... go and keep going on your story ! I'm supporting you gal ! Do your best ! Make them feel annoyed :)
ohelss
#3
Chapter 23: author i hope you update this story soon and with the bad remarks you get sent just know that a few bad apples doesn't represent the whole group :)
ms11ww
#4
Chapter 23: Okay so you have one hater and alot of people who love your story sooo screw him really your story is good keep on and update soon please
Pandalover1234 #5
Chapter 23: OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! HWAITING!!!:)
ziva1234
#6
Chapter 23: Haters gonna hate! Don't listen to them. Your story is awesome
Evak_1234
#7
Chapter 23: Hey hey hey ignore them ok
they're not worth it... They're jealous.. They just want to let you down...I mean who text other people just to tell them mean things *i just hate those kind of people* so don't listen to them ok ... Even if they don't like your story there's us who like it...
mangaxkpop
#8
Chapter 23: People these days...you see this all the time online. But I bet that they can't say it to you face to face. Cowards.
Anyways, I wonder if there's a report system or something here on AFF. Block the users as well.
Author-nim, the more you write and read, the more you'll improve. Keep doing what you LOVE. Don't let others tell you what to do.
And you can always ask/look for a beta.
Thanks for the chapter. :D
Cagachan04 #9
Chapter 23: You do understand that those people are just immature and more than likely, envious? Envy twists into jealousy. And jealousy creates hate. Your story is well written and different from other vampire au fics. Most people who write stories aren't strong enough to share them world wide. Props and major kudos to you for sharing yours! Looking forward to the next chappie.
Lacoursiere #10
Chapter 23: Just ignore them... they are crazy