I Hate Liar!!

Melt My Frozen Heart

Author POV

“mama...lets go” Lay called out for Baekhyun

“just a moment...i need to locked up” Baekhyun yelles back..they were on their way to meet up with Chanyeol and Luhan in the town..

“pallie....” Lay made a cute pout and Baekhyun just smile at his son behaviour..eventhough they already 18...they still cuddle with their parents and still acting like a baby toward them

“owkey..all set..let go” Baekhyun reach up his hand and Lay grab it in a flash before interwined their hand together...

They look like a couple rather than mama and son...Baekhyun will never get old because Chanyeol has giving him his blood..royal blood will stop any human aging and by doing that Baekhyun stay exactly like he was when he was in the past..beautiful and pure..Chanyeol has giving him his blood when they decided to get marry and on their wedding night,Chanyeol has bit his wrist and ask Baekhyun to drink his blood and since then he stay the same..

They walk hand in hand and arrived into the town not long after...they  easily cought up with a tall tree and cute deer in the cafe..the warm atmosphere in the cafe made it more comfortable in this cold weather

“hey handsome..” Baekhyun hug the tall tree before giving a peck on Chanyeol and Luhan cheek

“hey beautiful” that deep voice always made Baekhyun’s heart beat faster than usuall

“so...what are we doing today?” he ask while rubbing his hand together

“erm...family dinner?” Chanyeol suggest and raise his eyebrow at the twin

“that sound nice...” the twin agree and they decide to give their parent a private time alone that they excuse themself and promised to meet them at one of the restaurant there for dinner..They walk slowly in the market in the town...

“Luhan-ah...i want those fish cake” Lay say while pointing at the ahjumma who was selling fish cake and other snake

“owkey come on” Luhan grab Lay hand and they made way toward the store

They eat it and enjoy the scenery while waiting for dinner..Lay was quietly munching some cookies that Luhan bought from the nearby store on the long bench while Luhan is resting his head on his twin shoulder

“is it the time yet?” he ask Lay and Lay look at his wrist before slolwy nodding his head

“yeah...lets go” Lay grab Luhan’s hand and drag the boy toward the restaurant

“hey...do you enjoy your self while we are gone” Luhan sneakyly wink at Chanyeol after they sit at the table that has been reserve by Chanyeol

“yeah...what about you?” Baekhyun ask and caress Luhan cheek

“we have fun too...” Lay say and cling to Luhan arm

They spend their dinner with the twin talking about what they did and they often play with their parents...it was a really family like dinner..Chanyeol drive them home and as soon as he enter their house,he know that it was not right...he has caught some strange scent before someone shove him with a hard punch...

“papa!!!!” the twin shout...Chanyeol was so surprised by the blow try to stay awake...he take a deep breath before slowly try to stand up..the twin and Baekhyun run toward Chanyeol and help him...

After he regain some balance,he look at the four creature who was now watching them with a smirk..

“long time no see brother” the tall blond say and move forward

Chanyeol push the twin behind him and look at them with rage in his eyes

“what the hell are you doing here??!!” Chanyeol yell at them

“you know...i hate liar” Suho walk and casually sit on the couch and put his feet on the table..Baekhyun cling to Chanyeol’s arm

“what the hell was that supposed to mean?” Chanyeol is trying hard not to attack them..he didn’t care if he die as long as his family is safe

“the fact that the twin is not yours...and let say...they were adopted” Chanyeol felt like his world stop when Sehun throw some paper at him and when he felt how Baekhyun tense beside him and how his twin is hugging him while shaking behind him,he know he has to be strong..he has too for his family

“so...they are my son and that will never change” after he regain some strenght he look them straight in their eyes and spat the word..he will try everything he can to save his family...he was ready...

“owh really??” Suho stand up and walk toward them and smirk before he push Chanyeol and Baekhyun hard enough that Chanyeol and Baekhyun land hard on the wall..Baekhyun started to bleed...Chanyeol look at him with wide eyes and wipe the blood away...

“PAPA!!!MAMA!!” the twin run toward them and hug their parents..Lay started to cry hard on Baekhyun’s arm

“its okey...baby...look at me...im okey” Baekhyun rub the boy back...Luhan is hiding his face on Chanyeol’s chest

“papa...im scared” he mumble the word..Chanyeol almost cry when he hear him say the word..he look at Baekhyun and Lay and he look down at his Luhan who was in a sobbing mess

“its okey...papa here...im here” Chanyeol rub his back and pull Baekhyun and also a sobbing Lay into his arm..

“im here....” he keep repeating the word into their ear...he felt how his wife tighten the hug and look up at him and gave him  a small smile..that smile..the same smile when they walk out of the palace...

“i trust you...always” he whisper at Chanyeol and tighten his other arms around Lay..he hide his face at the crrok of Chanyeol’s neck...Chanyeol closed his eyes and smile...

“i know...i love you babe” he kiss the latter head and he felt how Baekhyun’s body started to shake

“i love you too” Chanyeol look at the twins and when they look up at them he gave them small amile and nod his head

“i love both of you” he whisper the word but the twin catch it and started to cry harder

“we love you too...” they reply between their sob

“how sweet....lets the game start shall we?” the four of them look at the scene infront of them with a smirk and with that scream echo through the house..

 

a/n

well.....

how is it so far??

Good?? Or it is bored to death??

Tell me owkey!!!

Told you our dark journey start now...so let the journey begin...

 

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Samuraimama
#1
Chapter 24: Read this story from start till chapter 24 in one go and enjoyed it very much!
devilblack98
#2
Chapter 24: Well you know what ? If being on your shoes , I will just said ' you ! You don't know what writing is ! ' then pray for them to burn in the deepest hell . And one more thing . Where are those tard come form ? Eventough my native language is english and mandrin , I don't think its good to mock other poeple effot . Just .... go and keep going on your story ! I'm supporting you gal ! Do your best ! Make them feel annoyed :)
ohelss
#3
Chapter 23: author i hope you update this story soon and with the bad remarks you get sent just know that a few bad apples doesn't represent the whole group :)
ms11ww
#4
Chapter 23: Okay so you have one hater and alot of people who love your story sooo screw him really your story is good keep on and update soon please
Pandalover1234 #5
Chapter 23: OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! HWAITING!!!:)
ziva1234
#6
Chapter 23: Haters gonna hate! Don't listen to them. Your story is awesome
Evak_1234
#7
Chapter 23: Hey hey hey ignore them ok
they're not worth it... They're jealous.. They just want to let you down...I mean who text other people just to tell them mean things *i just hate those kind of people* so don't listen to them ok ... Even if they don't like your story there's us who like it...
mangaxkpop
#8
Chapter 23: People these days...you see this all the time online. But I bet that they can't say it to you face to face. Cowards.
Anyways, I wonder if there's a report system or something here on AFF. Block the users as well.
Author-nim, the more you write and read, the more you'll improve. Keep doing what you LOVE. Don't let others tell you what to do.
And you can always ask/look for a beta.
Thanks for the chapter. :D
Cagachan04 #9
Chapter 23: You do understand that those people are just immature and more than likely, envious? Envy twists into jealousy. And jealousy creates hate. Your story is well written and different from other vampire au fics. Most people who write stories aren't strong enough to share them world wide. Props and major kudos to you for sharing yours! Looking forward to the next chappie.
Lacoursiere #10
Chapter 23: Just ignore them... they are crazy