Black Angel

Description

Luhan was the head of the mafia and Sehun was one of his best men. But one day Sehun pointed a gun at hiss boss. Who knows why? And thereafter Nina, Luhan's fiancée just wants to take a revenge on the young boy...
 

Foreword

Okaay, I made my second story because of EXO's teaser pictures. They were so inspirational. :3
I'm sorry, English is still not my mother language (oh God, why?:(( ) but I tried my best and I hope there won't be lots of grammar mistakes in it. ^-^

It's a little bit shorter than the other story (now it has 6779 words) and maybe it's PG-13 but I'm not sure. I hope you will enjoy it. <33

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Meritaten #1
Chapter 1: OH.MY.GOD.
This is definitely a piece of cake!!
Seriously, that was awesome *claps* you're amazing, Authonim<3

It was a huge disappointment to know that Luhan was the betrayer :S
how could he??? omg !_!
And Sehun!! the poor boy :(
he told Nina how he didn't want to hurt Luhan, and how he admired and loved him as a big brother and how thankful he was.
he certianly didn't expect something like this from someone he trusted and admired a lot.
And lastly Nina, she loved Luhan wholeheartedly and gave him her whole trust and in the end that's what she receive?? :(
The story is really nice, authornim<3
you're really professional in writing angst. Keep going<3
bkhynkzz #2
Chapter 1: luhan really. bad!!!! ahhh. like this story. interesting~
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