No past, no future

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Luhan is one of the victims of The Great Train Catastrophe. The only difference between him and the others is that he stayed alive. He stayed alive and when a boy – who can’t remember anything – appears roaming among the wrecks, he realizes that maybe this wasn’t just an accident. Because a bullet flies past the boy... 

Foreword


 

The train was running on the rails without any difficulties. “Be careful and visit us as soon as possible. Oh, and don’t forget to eat a lot!” The words of his mother echoed in his ears while he was looking out of the window. A bitter smile sat on his mouth.

The trees as one big green spot were disappearing from his view signalling the distance between him and his home. And this distance were just growing bigger and bigger as the emptiness in his heart. The feeling was familiar to him because every time when he left his family he felt this. Every time when he flew from China to Pusan, then got on the train towards Seoul which theoretically brought him home. But that place didn’t mean home for him. Although it wasn’t so bad, he didn’t like it there. He just simply didn’t belong to Seoul.  

A dull shock and panicked voices dragged him out of his thoughts. Curiously, Luhan raised his head up and leaned to the right to look through the aisle but then a bigger explosion followed the previous one and the train shook. The boy fell down from his seat. Another screams sounded, the coach tilted to the side and Luhan couldn’t see anything through the windows just the hopeless depth…

 


Trailer

 

 


 

Sooo hello there~! ^-^ 

Here's a new fanfic because... because why not? :D I was just sitting in the History lesson when the teacher said one thing and BANG! This story came to my mind although I didn't want to write a new story till I don't finish the 'Queen vs King' fic. But this happened and it doesn't let me be, so I have to write this. Crazy, right? :'D I know, I know... But I hope it will be good and you will read it, and... yeah, God, just let it be good please. >-<

The rating is now PG-13 but later there will be NC-17 in it. ^-^ Just saying~

Warnings: later NC-17, mystery, depressed Luhan (using medicine as drug), aaaaangst, blood (not so much) and a little mafia!au *_*

I will try to hurry with the first chapter and maybe I will upgrade the foreword because it seems empty for me now. :'D Oh and about grammar mistakes: yes, there can be some because I'm not a 'professional' English. :$

 

Till the first chapter: Have a nice day~ <3


 

 

 

"What if we hadn't met at the wrecks?" 

"What if you were a good person?"

"What if..."

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Daeyon-shi #1
Chapter 10: Oh my god I can't believe it! You're finally back how awesome is that?! :D
I'm so happy that you found your inspiration again. I nearly thought you'd never finish this story. I'm so glad to hear that it never was your intention to abandon this story, because I love this one so much actually.
And you really got me with this chapter! You really know how to build up tension, don't you? I almost can't handle it anymore, because I really want to know why this is all happening and what is the truth? Who can be trusted? Who are the bad guys? What's up with Chanyeol? Is he really who he says he is? And with the last paragraph...omo! I can't! That was beautifully written (not only that part of course! Every single word you choose is perfect, but I liked how you presented the last scene the most. That was a really clever and an effective way to emphasize the dramatic situation. Really well done!) You won't let luhan die, won't you? No you wouldn't...or maybe you would? Ahrg, this is so confusing, I don't know what to believe anymore!
I really hope there will be a scene where sehun tells luhan that he's a wonderful person and explains why he actually stopped the kiss.
Awww, I really wanna know what happens next. No, need to know! I wish you lots of inspiration and time to write, can't wait for the next chapter. And thank you so much for coming back : ) Really, I mean it. I missed you.
LuHanM #2
Chapter 10: OH MY GOD !!!! AFTER RIGHT MONTHS YOU CAME WITH THIS JUST TO THROW ME INTO THIS ???? OH MY GOD !
Don't leave me here hanging !

thank you for the update.
the_twelvesxoxo #3
Chapter 8: This story is full of mysteries gosh you make me so nervous each time the chapter was done! I like the way you wrote it :) so please continue the story as I really want to know what's behind those attacks TT
mai_mei #4
Chapter 8: wow I really like this story
Keep up the good work ^^
Daeyon-shi #5
Chapter 4: The death crawled into his brain as a poison which never seems to go away, infecting all of his thoughts and he didn’t want anything else just get out to the free air.

OMG! Your writing is absolutly gorgeous! I love it <3<3<3!!!!
I'm so sorry that I don't have time for a longer comment :( I'll really try to comment later! But you're doing really, really good!!! And a big thumbs up for the longer chapter ;D
Until then~
Jope0406
#6
Chapter 2: Yaiii i like it, i'ts really interesting :)
mynameismaybelle
#7
Chapter 1: You wake up my curiosity, daebakkk~
Please update soon :)
lyahan #8
Chapter 1: Whoaaaa!! I love this!!
Daeyon-shi #9
Chapter 1: WOW! That was fantastic! I knew this'll be good but this is even better! :O
You're right. You've surpassed all of my expectations.
Well...don't get me wrong. Your foreword was super nice and I expected a lot, but now your writing style is also great! No, really. I love your style of writing an it fits your story just fine and I think that's not a commen thing nowadays. It happens all too often that I read a good foreword but then I'm disappointed because it turns out the author...uhm, how do I put it...wasn't capable of writing it (...u know what I mean?).
So...what I'm trying to say is your. story. is. awesome~ :D And your writing style is, too.
And please let me quote this one line because it was so perfect and it shows how F*UCKING CREATIV YOU ARE (maaaan I'm jealous<3):
...the sharper stones painted tiny, red lines on it.
So beautiful...I'm crying.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter and keep up the good work! <3
Charlot1081
764 streak #10
Your other story was fantastic, I do believe this one will be great too!
I am looking foreword to reading it!
Good luck =^.^=

Fighting!