chapter 3

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Free. that's how luhan felt whenever he was out in the fields playing soccer. it seemed as though the world he was in before felt more terrifying than what he thought it was. the moment he kicked the ball is when he felt as if he was in a world of bliss, with nothing in the world to care about.    but unfortunately, good things come to an end. especially if you have girls chasing you around, intently invading your personal bubble.   "Hey... hey.... hey" Suzy's voice rang as she panted for breath from behind as Luhan ran around with his soccer ball. Suzy, the goody two shoes, head of the ceerleading club, the teacher's pet and also, the 'university's first love'. Seems like she won't stop, huh. "Yeah, what?" He stopped at his tracks and turned around almost too suddenly.   suzy had always looked decent ever since luhan had met her. she liked wearing blouses and liked letting her hair fall down. she was this ideal girl korean girl every korean man would ever dream of and her reputation was as slick clean. but luhan knew she was just a competitive smart- try hard who liked to pry into peoples' businesses.    and luhan didn't like that about her.   "S-so, you're just warming up now huh?" She asked him, trying to get even closer. Luhan flinched by the sudden skinship and took a step back. "Yeah?"  "Your practice's over. So.. Would you-" before she could even finish the sentence, he was already passing the soccer ball to his friend.   Suzy has had enough of luhan avoiding her for these past years. she knew that that loser had never dated anyone around the campus but why not her?  Just as he thought that suzy's so-called problem was unsettled, he spotted jessica right behind the girl. "Luhan, can you hear me out please?" She smiled. Luhan let out a  tired sigh. "Yeah, what?" He asked as he gave Jessica a look.   Jessica chuckled and nodded as her eyes focused on the ball.    The ball started moving away from Suzy, slowly and slowly. Luhan, not even paying attention to what Suzy's saying, rolled his eyes at Jessica. "Farther away please!" He whispered loudly, loud enough for Suzy to notice.    "Go on- farther away from what?" She stopped talking. "Oh-um.. Nothing nothing.. Continue?" He raised an eyebrow and glanced at Jessica.    "I'm trying! And it would be too obvious you butthole!" She wrinkled her nose at him while making the ball move farther away away from Suzy by meters.    Luhan moved closer and closer to the ball, making Suzy squeal in excitment "So, are you free?" She asked him. He moved closer and closer, eyes on the ball, which Suzy thinks it's on her feet, "Um actually-" He started talking. Suzy's breath was heavy as she leaned in closer to him.    Luhan kicked the ball to his friend. "Hey hey! C'mon! I'm open!" He waved at his friend, ignoring the dumbfounded girl who had just though that he wanted to kiss her.    She grunted and stomped her feet, making her way out of the football field. Jessica laughed at her as she heard her cursing user her breath.     "You were great. Awesome really. You're so great when it comes to playing football" Jessica complemented him and took a sip out of her drink while walking beside luhan back to his house.   "Yeah. Thanks" He let out a small breath while smiling. He suddenly felt a little shy and he didn't know why he felt like a little shade of pink was forming on his cheeks.   "A-nd thanks for your help just now. That girl was so annoying" He added and Jessica chuckled. "That was historical!" She laughed with him. "I guess being a ghost isn't so bad after all.." She proudly smirked.    The latter lightly chuckled as
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piracha #1
Chapter 5: It's a good story please keep update.
withlovej
#2
Chapter 5: I think it's so sad that Jessica's dead, but it's great she got to hear how sincere her old friends are. Sooyoung and Jessica must have been good friends. Good thing Luhan improvised, people might have thought he was crazy talking to himself.

I wouldn't mind speaking to you lol.

Omg I like Kaisoo and Baeksoo (I actually love Baeksoo!) so I'll check out your other fic :)
soojungdict
#3
Chapter 5: I DO WANT TO TALK TO YOU, LOL.

Actually, your writing is great. It's not boring or effin exciting to the max that I would die - but it's simply great. Simple but nice.

I want you to continue but if you feel like it's a burden, then it's up to you :)
syjung
#4
Chapter 5: But I do ship hunsica kekeke
syjung
#5
Chapter 5: Yes I'm agree on heydoctor's opinion!;-)
withlovej
#6
Chapter 5: I'm going to be honest here, I am definitely not bored with you or your fic. Not many writers on here (no offense guys) write very well and neither do I but I love your writing. And this fic, I would love if you were to continue writing it. I don't care how long you take or how long I have to wait, I'll wait patiently.

Truthfully, I do not ship Hunsica much (I'm more of a Lusica fan haha) but your fic makes me rather fond of them. Like squeals they were so adorable in the first version of this fic. Your story is really great so please don't doubt yourself! :)
withlovej
#7
Chapter 3: Asdfghjkl I understand. I'm sure your readers, including myself, will be waiting for you patiently.
Un1c0rns
#8
Chapter 3: OH YAYA~
School ends in 2 weeks for me :3
syjung
#9
Chapter 2: omg omg I just can't wait for sica to meet sehun
Anyway this is goin to be hunsica or lusica?
Can you make a hunsica?:3
sara2002 #10
Chapter 1: im so happy you decided to continiue this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!