chapter 1

can you see me?
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chapter 1

the beginning

voices mutterring slowly, clicks of mugs could be heard from her left side, voices talking to their phones, feet scampering out of the place here and there. a coffee shop. 

jung jessica was standing in the middle of the room without anyone noticing. before knowing her surrounding jessica scratched her head first in confusion.

a weird sensation shivered down to her spine as she she took a deliberate examination at people literally walking through her. jessica's mouth hung open and lurched at the thought of the last thing that had happened a second ago. 

oh my god. she said. she trudged slowly in circles before breathing in heavily. 

it took her a while before she was having fun running into people while pushing her thoughts and confusion on hold. little did she know a young man was probing at her in great intimidation. he did not realize that a customer had been waving at him, clearly in a rush as she continued to attempt taking his distraction away.

'excuse me, is your head in the clouds?!' and she finally felled his senses back.

shaking his head, sighing, 'i am sorry, miss...', pressing his fingers against the monitor. the customer shook her head after he had finished apologizing for the second time and fled to the counter where her coffee was served. 

he could still hear her voice. worse, she was standing right beside his next customer. standing with her right arm lazing on the lady's shoulder. luhan was sure she was... playing so he had asked her to stand at the back of the line.

'excuse me?' his customer asked in bemuserment, almost startled. 'no, i'm-i'm asking the person beside you to- is she your friend, miss?' he asked, stuttering.

the lady's eyes started widening as she chuckled, looking at her left shoulder. 'i just want my coffee. not play some ma

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piracha #1
Chapter 5: It's a good story please keep update.
withlovej
#2
Chapter 5: I think it's so sad that Jessica's dead, but it's great she got to hear how sincere her old friends are. Sooyoung and Jessica must have been good friends. Good thing Luhan improvised, people might have thought he was crazy talking to himself.

I wouldn't mind speaking to you lol.

Omg I like Kaisoo and Baeksoo (I actually love Baeksoo!) so I'll check out your other fic :)
soojungdict
#3
Chapter 5: I DO WANT TO TALK TO YOU, LOL.

Actually, your writing is great. It's not boring or effin exciting to the max that I would die - but it's simply great. Simple but nice.

I want you to continue but if you feel like it's a burden, then it's up to you :)
syjung
#4
Chapter 5: But I do ship hunsica kekeke
syjung
#5
Chapter 5: Yes I'm agree on heydoctor's opinion!;-)
withlovej
#6
Chapter 5: I'm going to be honest here, I am definitely not bored with you or your fic. Not many writers on here (no offense guys) write very well and neither do I but I love your writing. And this fic, I would love if you were to continue writing it. I don't care how long you take or how long I have to wait, I'll wait patiently.

Truthfully, I do not ship Hunsica much (I'm more of a Lusica fan haha) but your fic makes me rather fond of them. Like squeals they were so adorable in the first version of this fic. Your story is really great so please don't doubt yourself! :)
withlovej
#7
Chapter 3: Asdfghjkl I understand. I'm sure your readers, including myself, will be waiting for you patiently.
Un1c0rns
#8
Chapter 3: OH YAYA~
School ends in 2 weeks for me :3
syjung
#9
Chapter 2: omg omg I just can't wait for sica to meet sehun
Anyway this is goin to be hunsica or lusica?
Can you make a hunsica?:3
sara2002 #10
Chapter 1: im so happy you decided to continiue this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!