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♕NAME: -dearmydeer ♕GRAPHIC SHOP: § ∂єαя му ∂єєя gяαρнι¢ ѕнσρ♫ ♕EXPERIENCE: Couple of Months
First Impression (4.5/10)
Very simple poster. Lots of pink so I definitely thought romance. Once again, I can't say too much as you have limited experience, but that's okay.
Theme: Romance (Happy/Fluffy) (10/10)
No problems here. From the few images that you used, they all fit your theme(s).
Composition & Balance (10/20)
There'a alot of negative space in this. The poster looks too empty, it needs MORE. The emptiness I think comes from your torn paper texture. It takes up too much of your poster. I recommend only using those textures for subtle touches on corners or across the top, but not too close towards the centre, as it automatically creates negative space.
Selection of Textures, Stock & Characters (10/20)
There were no problems with the images that you used, but once again you didn't have enough. I liked the expressions of Jonghyun and Taeyeon. They definitely fit well with your theme. The quality of their images however were a little pixelated.
Typography (5/10)
The fonts you used were relevant, but I felt they were too simple, since you made a simple poster. A more decorative, fuller type of font would have been better to add MORE.
Colouring (4.5/10)
The colouring definitely fits your theme, but there is too much white to balance out the colour in your poster. Also Taeyeon and Jonghyun's images didn't quite have matching colouring.
Use of Techniques (3/10)
Sorry for that harsh rating, but the only technique I saw was blending. From what I saw, it looks like you used a white brush or texture to blend Taeyeon and Jonghyun, which is why your poster had too much white, and why Taeyeon and Jonghyun's colouring don't match. Also the white made it impossible to read your quote.
Overall (5/10)
Very simple poster. Needs MORE. Detail and quality is key.
TOTAL SCORE: 52/100
Sorry for sounding like a heartless b....! I honestly want you to do well. Keep practising! :D
Miane27 ♕
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