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♕ S I L V A N ♢ E Y E S ♕ A Graphic Review Shop {OFFICIALLY CLOSED}

NAME: MinYeollie                                                                                                                                                                                                          GRAPHIC SHOP: # Babos&Idiots; Graphic Shop                                                                                                                                                            EXPERIENCE: 2 Years+ 

First Impression (9/10)

Very nice! Simple but nice and refreshing.

Theme: Romance (10 /10)

No problems here. Definitely suits romance.

Composition & Balance (18/20)

Almost perfect. The only teeny-weeny issue I have is the positoning of the title. Since theres quite a bit of negative space between Yong Hwa and Shin Hye in the bottom half of the graphic, move the title further down to fill in more empty space.

Selection of Textures, Stock & Characters (20/20)

I definitely think that all images used were relevant to your theme, they do blend well together, and your images do look like they're HQ. Nice.

Typography  (7/10)

I do think that your typography is lovely, but maybe a little too simple. Since you have a simple poster, consider jazzing it up with a more decorative font.

Colouring  (8/10)

I do think that the colouring is lovely. Yong Hwa and Shin Hye's colouring matches, the light blue is refreshing, and the strong bright red adds a nice contrast. However I do think there is a little too much white, and not enough colour.

Use of Techniques (8/10)  

Your blending skills were great, however since Yong Hwa and Shin Hye's colouring was so strong and bright, it was really noticeable that your blending didn't gradually fade out. The erased areas looked too sudden to make the image flow out. I also had a problem with the top of both of Yong Hwa's heads being partially erased. It too looked too sudden, and I'm not really a fan of partially erased heads.

Overall (9/10)

A very nice poster! Just a few minor issues. Well done!

TOTAL SCORE: 89/100

Sorry if this review felt too rushed. I really liked your poster. Hope your graphic shop does well.

Miane27

 

   

 

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-Jester
#1
Chapter 8: I understand what you mean for the quote and credits font. It's actually the same font as 'Beyond' but I guess it looked weird as a smaller font size. I also see what you mean about adding more color especially since Kai is white overall.
Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it ^^
bottleofdreams
#2
Chapter 8: Hihi, thanks for the special mention, I'm honored! ^o^
I really hope you'll re-open this though *pouts*
Btw, the graphic is really pretty! *-*
Ascending
#3
Chapter 7: thank you for the review! i know my coloring still and im trying to work on it. also, i realized after words that i had actually misspelled the title. but i know what you meant by too big of font and the character positioning. im still trying the learn so thank you for your thoughts:) im not so much concerned about karma points so thats fine. hope you'll be able to open this shop back up in the future^^
-dearmydeer
#4
Chapter 6: Thank you so much for the review! I kinda wanted to aim for a simple poster, but I'll change it! ^^
bottleofdreams
#5
Chapter 3: It's such a pity :"(
But it's okay, family is more important anyway ;)
Just hoping that someday you'll comeback and open this again
hoshie--
#6
Chapter 5: Thanks for the review! I'll definetly credit you once i get on my laptop.
I think i'll request here again next time :)
-Jester
#7
Chapter 3: It's understandable, family is more important and I wish you and your family well.
Take care ^^
bottleofdreams
#8
Chapter 2: Wow! Thank you so much! This is the highest score I've ever received so far! And I like your ways of reviewing, it's exactly on the spot. I'll definitely request again from you (maybe not long after this ^^)
And I want to get your permission to copy and paste this review on my blog, I'll credit for sure!
Again, thanks :DD
-Jester
#9
Requested :]
Ascending
#10
i requested^^