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♕ S I L V A N ♢ E Y E S ♕ A Graphic Review Shop {OFFICIALLY CLOSED}

NAME: GreenGardenPop                                                                                                                                                                                                 EXPERIENCE: Couple of Months

First Impression ( 5/10)

Very simple. I can't criticize too much because you have little experience.

Theme: Romance, Angst & Horror (5/10)

I only see angst in this. There's nothing in this that relates to horror. That stock photo on Hideaki's right side looks more like a fantasy stock photo.

Composition & Balance (10/20)

There's so much negative, 'empty' space. The characters are a bit too high up. Move them down a bit, so you can take up more empty space. For simple posters if you're low on textures or stocks, I suggest you stick to vertical posters.

Selection of Textures, Stock & Characters (10/20)

Overall, I think all your images only really suited the angst side of your poster. Since your graphic was not fantasy-themed, the stock next to Hideaki is irrelevant. I also think the quality of Hideaki and Jiyeon are a little under HQ. Sharpen.

Typography  (4/10)

Your choice of font was a little too simple. To add MORE to your simple poster, you should've used a more decorative font. Simple fonts are moreso for light angst and romance.

Colouring  (5/10)

Colouring matches angst and horror, but it's very plain and average. Characters have matching colouring, which is good at least.

Use of Techniques (4/10)

There wasn't much going on in this poster, so there wasn't many techniques to spot except erasing.

Overall (5/10) - What are my final thoughts?

Very simple poster. There's room for more.

TOTAL SCORE: 48/100

So sorry if I sounded mean! I know you're only new really, so I know that you still a long way to go :D

Miane27

 

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-Jester
#1
Chapter 8: I understand what you mean for the quote and credits font. It's actually the same font as 'Beyond' but I guess it looked weird as a smaller font size. I also see what you mean about adding more color especially since Kai is white overall.
Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it ^^
bottleofdreams
#2
Chapter 8: Hihi, thanks for the special mention, I'm honored! ^o^
I really hope you'll re-open this though *pouts*
Btw, the graphic is really pretty! *-*
Ascending
#3
Chapter 7: thank you for the review! i know my coloring still and im trying to work on it. also, i realized after words that i had actually misspelled the title. but i know what you meant by too big of font and the character positioning. im still trying the learn so thank you for your thoughts:) im not so much concerned about karma points so thats fine. hope you'll be able to open this shop back up in the future^^
-dearmydeer
#4
Chapter 6: Thank you so much for the review! I kinda wanted to aim for a simple poster, but I'll change it! ^^
bottleofdreams
#5
Chapter 3: It's such a pity :"(
But it's okay, family is more important anyway ;)
Just hoping that someday you'll comeback and open this again
hoshie--
#6
Chapter 5: Thanks for the review! I'll definetly credit you once i get on my laptop.
I think i'll request here again next time :)
-Jester
#7
Chapter 3: It's understandable, family is more important and I wish you and your family well.
Take care ^^
bottleofdreams
#8
Chapter 2: Wow! Thank you so much! This is the highest score I've ever received so far! And I like your ways of reviewing, it's exactly on the spot. I'll definitely request again from you (maybe not long after this ^^)
And I want to get your permission to copy and paste this review on my blog, I'll credit for sure!
Again, thanks :DD
-Jester
#9
Requested :]
Ascending
#10
i requested^^