Chapter 1: This is so amazing...I don't know what should I comment here other than that you're one amazing writer!! I don't really leave a comment nowadays because I'm so busy with my real life but your story really deserve much more than this....and I'm sorry for my broken English...not my first language. I love all of the characters and even though I don't really like stories but I love to imagine that's just bromance...no hate for that :-) thank you for this wonderful story :-) :-) :-) :-)

The way you write is so beautiful!!!! The pace of the story is okay, no too slow and not too fast. I love the way how you summarize their conversations without the need of dialogues . Most of all, I love your words at the part when Channie's in the airport sending off Ho Jung hahahah. O lI love the way you evoked the feelings at airports with much detail.

I wasn't comfortable too much with the OTP's though (No hater, I just don't do guy x guy ships bc I can't imagine them being gay for each other). O was actually shocked when Sehun stole a kiss on Luhan, like "What the hahaagag where did that come from? haahhahahaha"

Aaide from that, this is a very good read, and you made me cry when Chanyeol proposed, so more points for you! :D

Chapter 1: Beautifully written :"

the scene both on the plane and at the airport made me LOL. the girl was so cute but thank you for breaking his heart. i thought it ends after the de ja vu part but you author-nim... lemme bring you to the heart shaped ice cream store for making chanyeollie send 600 something emails. i love the plot twist.
it's cool!

Chapter 1: love the way you write! It's beautiful

Chapter 1: This is just awesome ^^

PART II

I admire the way you write. You are very descriptive and your narrations are sufficient for me to envision the scenes in my head. The plot development is also good; not so fast, but not too dragging either.

There’s only one thing I wasn’t comfortable with in the WHOLE story: the OTPs! Hahaha I am no hater (I actually do ship but only on a friendship level between the members, LayHan being my top OTP haha) but I was frankly shocked when Sehun stole a kiss with Luhan. What the! HAHAHAHA

That’s all, I guess! Thumbs up for a good read ^_^ And continue writing wonderful oneshots! Have a nice day (:

PS: We’ve been exchanging messages, wall posts and everything for quite a while now but I still don’t know what/how to address you LOL XD

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PART I

I believe I haven't made a comment about this lovely story yet (I was waiting for the perfect time wherein I'm not preoccupied and busy and all, but then I guess that time will never come - guess what, girl, it's office hours AGAIN).

First of all, the beginning was really cute. I was like laughing at Chanyeol's ridiculous apprehension because I am a flying enthusiast! And my favorite parts are take-off and touchdown (oh how I love the stomach-flipping sensations haha). The girl was really nice and thoughtful. Second, the story's progression was a little shocking because at first, I really thought it was just a slice of life or something. But it didn’t end with their first encounter. I got into the story’s flow eventually. Third, they’re such dramatic creatures, aren’t they? They fight, they make up, they fight, they make up and etcetera. It’s cute, I guess (though I honestly can’t imagine myself in such a situation because I am very inexpressive and I have very little patience for real-life drama). And then the slight angst comes in, which I like (I don’t like drama but I like angst - I know, I’m weird). The way Chanyeol can’t seem to get over her is honestly how I envision Chanyeol when he’s in a relationship. He’s such a bright and sunny kid, but there’s always his melancholic side and I always believe he’d be the type to not get over someone so special that easily. Fifth, the ending! OMG! Yeol such a cheese ball but who cares! Hahaha!

TBC

Chapter 1: This is really beautiful! :)

Chapter 1: Holy crap, I'm not through reading this but Wonderful World by James Morrison came on and I think I'm genuinely going to cry because it is so Chanyeol post-breakup.