〈 the reviews 〉

〈 GIRLFRIEND. 〉 여친 : apply now! / sment. applying closes in mid-april!
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■ HWAN HANA ( APPLICATION )
THE TITLE : NATIONS GOMA AGASHI
faceclaim: PARK HWANHUI ( HANA )
love interest: BYUN BAEKHYUN
FANCLUB / COLOUR : ANALITES
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applicant: VIC_TO_RI_A2
application review

AUTHOR'S NOTE: So this is my character, Hwan Hana. you'll be able to see more of her during on the story and how it progresses. I won't say much, if you want to know more then click on the names of the characters and it will lead you to the blogpost. I know that you probably are sad about the applications being a waste after the other applyfic of mine was suddenly deleted and disappeared so that is why I am allowing you to copy and paste your applications but be sure to change the faceclaim and add it onto the new application layout or change the colour.

Be patient with the reviews, I have a roleplay to also handle and my school work. Please read through the guidlines and also the cheatsheet. we give you 3 chances, if you see (x) (x) (x) then your app is rejected.

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■ LEE ARA ( APPLICATION )
THE TITLE: SWEET RECIPE
face claim: PARK SUNGSIN
love interest: PARK CHANYEOL
FANCLUB / COLOUR : ARABLES
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applicant: SILENTSTORIES
application review

CO-AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello this is silentstories here and if you guys haven't noticed it yet, me and vic_to_ri_a2  are sisters and we have a tug and pull relationship at times. I look forward to seeing your application and just as a note, I tend to be busy at times because I have exams ongoing and I won't update as much during a certain time time period.  Good luck with your applications and any questions, please direct it either to me or the head admin because we'll be glad to help you out ,but please be nice-this is technically our first applyfic together after all.

About the other past applyfic, we seriously have no idea towards what exactly happened so please don't be mad at us and support this applyfic as much as you did before.

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■ JO SOOMIN ( application )
THE TITLE : BABY FACED BEAUTY
face claim: YUNJU
love interest: KIM JONGIN
FANCLUB / COLOUR :
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applicant: -SUNSET
application review

AUTHOR'S NOTE : Hi Aleyna, first I would like to say a thank you for applying and a good job on your character, she sounds like a qualified member of the group and I agree that she is not a mary-sue as it was a balanced personality. I find it adorable you're related to the Jo twins, what's great is that you also look the exact part as well. She sounds great as a visual and that brings me to the mistakes, you put down that you were the main vocal, but sorry to say, my character is already the main vocal so you will have to change that, your singing claim as this is not a huge group, I can't allow more. Lastly your relationship with kai.. the personality was fine but sorry again, you will have to change your interactions with him, it's fine about their history being in the same school however kissing and doing all those things will just cause scandals and bad reports, he is an idol and you are a rookie afterall, this would not be a good image towards GIRLFRIEND but moreover sm would not approve. I can understand your relationship with him and your past but please make your relationship with him more subtle rather than a fanfiction, you can still have crushing as your status however the way you act around each other shouldn't be like that.  please correct those errors and you will accepted but overall great app and hwaiting!Please don't hate me <3 

CO-AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello, Aleyna and thanks for being the first applicant!For starters, I love to say how  well-detailed your app form is especially on the personality segment since I believe that to be the most or one of the most crucial parts in an app, and I find your ideal type to just be amazing-Leonardo DiCaprio is just too amazing-I still wonder why he doesn't have an Oscar yet. Anywho, back onto the app, I realised that you haven't put a link or gallery for your character's style of fashion so, please add that onto your app  and as well as that, you haven't added back-up claims when it came to singing, dancing (etc.) so, please fix that up a bit sweetie and apart from those tiny errors the author and I mentioned, your app was really good and quite impressive, and once they're fixed, you'll be accepted ^^

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■ kim oksook ( APPLICATION )
THE TITLE: THE PRIM LADY
face claim: GAM DA-IN
love interest: OH SEHUN
FANCLUB / COLOUR : SUKISS 
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applicant: --KANDARELLA
application review

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hi Cherry! thanks for also applying and well done with your application for someone who's English isn't their first language, your application was detailed and explained a good amount with your personality and your background. I like how you explained your fears as well and she sounds hillarious with the sleeping habit she has. She sounds like a great addition to the group with the smarts she has and she seems to remind me a little bit like snsd's Seohyun haha.  So for the mistakes, you say you know Sehun because both your fathers know each other well in childhood but in your interactions it didn't show any relevance or history towards it, so please elaborate more and speaking of your story, no offense but how oksook and sehun met is kind of cliched because it's something which I see in many dramas and fanfiction so perhaps you could change it somehow to something more original and realistic? but once you correct my mistakes and the co-author's you will be accepted, but overall a job well done and hwaiting!  .

CO-AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello Cherry, and thanks for applying ^^ Your app form's really good-well done ^^ however, your character's personality as well as likes, dislikes (etc.) sounds an awful lot like SNSD's Seohyun, and that may end up being a big problem if chosen for your character may have something involved with SNSD and that may be awkward for they're really really alike to one another so, can you please alter your app slightly (and that involves the idol claims-they can't all be the same person) so that it doesn't end up being like that? Thank you ^^ Apart from what I and the author noticed, everything else on your app was good. Just fix those mistakes and everything will be cleared.

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■ choi heerin ( application )
THE TITLE : THE SASSY SNOWFLAKE
face claim: KIM JAYOUNG
love interest: KIM JONGDAE ( CHEN )
FANCLUB / COLOUR : SNOWFLAKES
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applicant: AFFOGATO
application review

AUTHOR'S NOTE : hey rene, nice to see you again well, review you again and sorry about the last applyfic, I honestly don't know what happened TTATT. So for starters thanks for applying and your application when it came to your personality was very detailed which was great! but could you please elaborate more with your family life in your background, your love interest and how you were accepted? when I mean by how you were accepted, how did it lead up to the point of you auditioning and what you had sung, If you are chosen, I will need to know these types of information especially on variety shows. She sounds like the 'chen' of 'GIRLFRIEND' which I find so good because it brings interest and how you describe her likings and dislikings make her lively and a great variety show type of girl. Your claims are alright as they match well with the statistics of your character but for the laughing claim my character has already got sulli so please just change it to your backup krystal and that will be fine <3 I guess that's pretty much for me, the co-author will also give you feedback so be sure to correct my spotted mistakes and the co-admin's please and you'll be accepted! kamsahamnida for the good application and hwaiting!  

CO-AUTHOR'S NOTE: hello again rene!thanks for applying ^^ To be honest, I don't really see anything wrong with your app, but what
I would suggest is to change your character's age, making her born in -93 instead for me and the author want the characters' ages to vary if chosen. Plus, I (and the author) feel quite weird about it because of the and all that. Apart from that, the 3rd link needed to be put in was of your character's style/fashion, but if the ulzzang's style is your character's actual style, then it's okay. I don't see anything wrong about your app from these errors pointed out, and in addition to that, I really like your suggestions and scene requests <3 

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■ RUBY CHOI ( APPLICATION )
THE TITLE: NATION'S AEGI GONJU
face claim: KIM SHINYEONG
love interest: LU HAN
FANCLUB / COLOUR : PALACE
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applicant: crystal0326
application review

AUTHOR'S NOTE:  Hey there Crystal, thanks for applying and a job greatly done for adding detail in your application, it looks as if you took your time to make it. So starters of, your 'LOOK AT ME' section was alright and your trivia included a lot which was good. Your faceclaim suits Luhan as they both have a baby face and your claims were a well thought match! For the errors that you will need to correct, I noticed your age, sorry to say but please change it to at least to a 91 or 92-liner, the between you and luhan won't look as right and it may turn awkward. The second thing was how you actually met luhan, it seems unrealistic as sm splits their buildings and training rooms, an idol building then a trainee one and luhan wouldn't really be slacking since he has promotions with exo so it doesn't really make sense, so please change it into a more realistic plot. but overall your application was very good and you'll just need to correct your mistakes and you'll be accepted hwaiting! <3

CO'S AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello Crystal, and like what the author had said, thanks for applying! I liked how detailed your application form for we would be able to write about you easier if chosen in the applyfic however, your background seems to be a bit too unrealistic-the orphanage is fine, but the chances of being adopted by really rich people is really slim so, can you please alter that slightly and as well as that, your character's personality seems too perfect for I can't seem to spot any flaws so, can you please add some,please?Thank you ^^ Apart from these errors we have spotted, everything was great and presented really well. Just fix those mistakes and everything will be cleared ^^

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■ LUO LIAN ( application )
THE TITLE : THE SILENT BELLE
face claim: PARK SORA
love interest: ZHANG YIXING
FANCLUB / COLOUR : lEI 
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applicant: PINKMAN
application review

AUTHOR'S NOTE : Hello Jesse, thanks for applying and great job with your application, I hardly saw any mistakes which is great so you will only need to fix tiny errors since it didn't really affect your chances of being chosen in the group ( so like your plots ). Your character is very unique and I like her and it's interesting how you don't have natural charisma that most idols have. The first Chinese member of the group! so the errors you'll need to fix is, her height and weight, since Lay isn't really tall /killed and because you will be wearing heels and at the weight of 49kg of a height that is 174cm is very unhealthy. You can stay the weight you'd like just lower your height at least 165 - 169. I find it alright if you'd prefer 170 if you go for a member like Kris or Tao but since you will be taller ( and you most likely will because of the heels ) it wouldn't look so good with Lay. The last error is basically to do with your interaction section, could you elaborate more with how you met Lay and moments spent with him? fix that and the co-author's found error you shall be accepted but overall, great job with your application! hwaiting! <3

CO-AUTHOR'S NOTE: Annyeong Jesse ^^ I really loved your app and found it to be one of the most original things I've ever seen especially your chararacter's personality-well done! And by the way, your English wasn't bad-it was actually quite good if I do say so myself however,  can you please confirm what your character's ethnicity for the first part says that she's Chinese, but in your background, you stated that she was born to a Korean-Chinese couple?  Thank you! Overall, I found your app really impressive and quite outstanding. Just fix those tiny mistakes we have pointed out and you'll be accepted!Thanks for applying!

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■ KANG DANA ( APPLICATION )
THE TITLE: calishin
face claim: CHOI MINKYUNG
love interest: LU HAN
FANCLUB / COLOUR : BABES 
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applicant: JOURNAL
application review

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hi there Ariana! thanks for applying and I must say, I am really impressed with your application! Your background and personality was realistic and balanced and you included detail and was specific especially in the love interest section and what you ate on the day haha. Moreover your faceclaim suits well and I love the fact she has an instagram account! Your statistics matched and her idol information such as her fanclub name and colour suited her Californian background! In my opinion she'd be a great addition to the group as she seems like that dorky and funny member and your height and weight was good! I can't really find any mistakes at all in your application so no strikes for you from me as asdfghjkl. I didn't see any. thanks once again and hwaiting! this was a promising app. <3   .

CO-AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hello there Ariana, but I'm just going to call ari or aria for short if you don't mind ^^ keke. Anywho, I found your app alright and hardly spotted any errors apart from the tiny one where you mixed a certain fact of yourself onto a different segment, but that's fine. I'm impressed for you must be the first person we've reviewed that didn't really have a mistake-congrats now go give yourself a pat in the back /slapped/ Anywho, thank you for applying.

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yurais
#1
is this still continuing?
nauein
#2
wow ......
s-oojungie
#3
. . .?
MiracleOrange #4
I applied :D I totally forgot to tell you here~ hehe~
-sunset #5
I fixed my mistakes (:
journal
#6
sorry to bother, may I change my ulzzang instead into park girim?
thanks in advance if you say yes <3
OliviaChristie-- #7
Chapter 6: Wooahh ! Ara is so pretty !! I like her already ^^
and , my app is going to finish soon so , yeah ! ^^
journal
#8
I think I see which one I mixed up.
I've corrected it and thanks for your kind review <3
journal
#9
Chapter 1: I have sent in my application!
crystal0326
#10
Chapter 2: So many teasers!! So happy! ^^