Prologue

Beautifully Untamed

Beautifully Untamed 

Prologue

1897, Daehan Jeguk, The Great Korean Empire

The day was dark, a few black stray clouds thundered over with the threat of rainfall. It was the day that the moon kissed the sun, hiding any shred of light under its shadow.

The phenomena scared humans, and rapidly cooled the earth’s surface.

An icy layer of mist and fog had drawn itself over the villages, near the holy forest, obscuring everything under its velvety cloak. People all around quickly ran indoors, locked their doors, and closed their windows, until no one remained outside. Everyone was praying huddled inside their homes that death wouldn’t come knocking at their door.  

A young boy of thirteen ran through the thicket of the holy forest. His destination is the entrance of the sacred dragon cave. His mission is to save his younger brother.

No one would listen to him when he said that the dragon had stolen him. No one would dare help him. No one believed him.  For if you did not believe in the dragon that roamed the woods, it was safer to live in the bliss of their ignorance and never have to face fear- the cowards! Curse them all for not caring for his brother- the people of the village and his parents alike.

There was a gleaming sharp blade in his left hand, and blood covering the front of his shirt. Tears and dirt wet his face. A few times he stumbled, as his vision blurred, but he pushed to his feet and kept running. There was fear coursing through his veins- and his heart felt like it was about to jump out his throat.

He knew about the stories since he had been young. The legends about how the dragons had made humans fear, and they had to be slaughtered in wars. But they say that a particularly nasty and capricious dragon was sealed here and that he used to terrorize the poor folks of all the nearby villages, requiring fancy sacrifices to be appeased and rumors say that he also used to kidnap young men. Warnings had been told to all children, especially males, to stay out of the holy forest. That the seal was weak and the dragon was powerful, so that’s why, since then, this part of the forest had been forbidden to commoners.

He had not wanted to believe it, until it was his brother the one that was kidnapped for being to damned curious.

The boy ran even further and faster at the thought of his brother, ignoring the burning in his lungs as he struggled to catch his breath.

He could see the light of a fire up ahead. It was dark and hard to see but surely there were several men up ahead and sound of horse’s whining and loud shouting. There was laughter and boisterous shouting.

For some reason the presence of those men scared him far more than running into the dragon.

His speed picked up, pushing through the thicket. His breath coming in shallow and his lungs screamed as he came closer to the fire.

There were several men speaking a language that he had never heard before and he could hear it all clearly. Every word monstrous, their laughter, and their delight- humans were scary. The moon was just as cruel, parting away from embracing the sun, letting light shine brightly onto the darken world. Piercing through the fog, lighting up the world once again.

But it was not what he wanted to see.

His heart dropped, his eyes wide—and then the deafening sound of his scream as the world revealed the image before him.

And smiled at him, and bared the blood in his knife-


First chapter, sort of an Intro to the story. 

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didoe84
#1
Chapter 16: Poor Gaho that was so sad!!! why did he could not feel love just because he's an angel!!! and poor Jolie she lost everything because an angel fell for him ... Is that what happened to GD too he fell for someone he shouldn't have and that made them loose everything.... I wonder if Jolie feel like GD like something miss in her life. Maybe if GD and Jolie meet then that would bring back some feelings and then maybe some memories but i'm not sure it's so good to Gaho it might be hurtful for him to see the loe of her life that doesn't remember him.... anyway the story bring back the flame in GD eyes that's already a start!! And if GTOP had an history that means that TOP did forget too?? why? how? his parents seems to remember though so is it their doing?? or GD's? (as to not let him be like Gaho??) is that linked to the dragon heart?? I still have so much wonder!!! Thank you so much for the double update dear!!!
ozwalkr #2
Chapter 16: YES! So thats what Gaho did. I can see that his actions caused a ripple, but really? I HOPE that a success in getting Ji back where he needs to be will redeem our sweet Gaho as well...
didoe84
#3
Chapter 15: OMG Dear you again wrote somethinag amazing!!!! I swear you get in my head sometimes and get things out of there!!! I wrote "Untamed" because i've always think that GD's fiery & feisty character fit the image of the mythycal creature, I'm sure he's also sage and skillful when he needs to be as an ancient dragon should be!! so you can imagine the squeal that escaped my mouth when TOP thought the same!! my heart was already on the edge because of the date!!! (hahaha CL you don't stand a chance!!! I wonder what CL really knows about GD's nature and TOP past!!) Oh GOD GD even revealed his nature..... they definetly get to know each other lol that lead to the memory GD get So Gaho seems right Love is the problem since the start (I guess the beautiful boy is TOP.... ) That made me wonder I get that GD and Gaho have a long lifespan but what about TOP and his family what are they really and how long did they live.... I guess i'll have to wait a little more to know!!! I'm also curious about Gaho past now what Jolie did to him (or made him do???) I hope to read you soon dear!!! I miss you!!!
didoe84
#4
Chapter 14: 'Good' is not quite the world I'd use to describe this chapter is amazing!! First OMFG OMFG THEY KISSED! !!!! i mean not their characters in the play but the real them actually kissed and GD accepted to be TOP boyfriend so THEY'RE ACTUALLY TOGETHER! !!!!! You can't even imagine how much i squealed while reading. And then you don't let my heart getting back to a normal pulse as you used the little lost TOP pay and i can't feel it's meaningful as it's part of his past that he don't remember!!!
And OMG Boss!!! I may had a tear escaping my eyes at him being an angel!! I wish Gaho would have some piece of GOD scheme to help GD (but they might be on the right road) so im impatient to know the new memory! !!
ozwalkr #5
Chapter 14: Good to see you! i was wondering if you had given up on this, but happily, you haven't. Seunghyun is what Ji is searching for..I already know that, but now we have you saying that Gaho had to pay the price and doesn't want Ji to do the same. Please consider telling us Gaho's story..even a little!
Shootz #6
Chapter 14: Oh my fxxxing God! I can't believe you updated ㅠ.ㅠI'm so happy ♡.♡ this is one of my favorite stories, the chapter wasn't good it was AWESOME I loved it! I missed your story so bad, I'll be waiting patiently for your next update , I hope you have a lovely day! Sending you good vibes!!
lucydod #7
Chapter 13: Aaaaaaaaah!!!!! D; please tell me there's more!!!!! This is so good!
jilovetabi
#8
Chapter 13: whyyy T-T don't just stop abruptly at that point, please update sooner T-T please please please
jikachiu
#9
Chapter 13: So Dara is the one who got to Seunghyun, he seemed so immune to girls charms...who did she do it?
And more gtop is excellent news, anticipating :)
gtopbaby #10
Chapter 13: Omgggggg!!!!!