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Something to Return
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"Oppa!" You can hear here and there not that you also weren't shouting and chanting in but you were a bit far from where he actually was. Walking pass through you and the crowd you saw something fell but you didn't knew who it was. As the crowd passed by you 'luckily the phone didn't get crashed' you reach for it and started shouting about the lost phone.   "Someone dropped their phone!" You tried to compete with the noise and squealing but guess what? No one noticed you. You can't blend in, in the crowd because you were on your wheelchair and your sister was on the toilet. You got onto an accident not long ago causing you not be able to walk temporarily 'luckily'. "Excuse me! Someone drop their phone!" You started again and wiggle the phone in the air hoping someone will recognize it.   "Hello!" You again and again shouted. 'If I didn't stand up and went there the later crowd will be gone...' You thought but also thought back to what the doctor had said to you 'Not matter what the circumstances is don't ever try to walk with your foot with or without crutches, your bones were semi broken and it'll bleed a lot if you tried walking onto it.' You sighed just then someone was calling on the phone 'SeHunnie' you read and gawked ready for your eyes to roll down.    You look around and your sister was nowhere still in sight you wearing a 3/4's pants those thick bandages round your legs. 'Well it's something to be returned' You stood up and limp your way to the car and crowds. "Wait... Wait..." You waved at the car... "LuHan... LuHan Xiansheng! -- AHHHH..." You fell down on your limped foot whose now bleeding a lot as the blood were visible on the cloth bandages. You knock on the window and they'd opened it.    "Uh... LuHan Xiansheng dropped his phone..." You hanged the phone up in the air level to the window as you were on your knees. You heard him say thank you couple of times then asked where were you. "Where's the person who gave back my phone?" He asked the driver. "Only her hands but check might be on the window still..." The driver replied.   "AHHHH! Mei Mei...." Your sister screamed seeing that your not in your wheelchair she looked the crowed spotting you on the ground. "Excuse me, please..." She pleaded. "OI, Are you stupid?" She looked around no taxi is insight. And you were bleeding a lot already also sweating. She knocked on the window and this time LuHan opened his window. "PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, I am not trying to make a show or something but could you
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keyoppa_aina
#1
Chapter 3: Awww, I love both versions! She is so lucky and Luhan is so manly asjksfjkdfhg :3 haha Nice one author-nim ^^
YummyCupcakes
#2
wow...nice description....I'm gonna subscribe this and read this later..since I cant read this right now because I'll have my midterm exam in couple hours...
skyborne #3
This is very nicely written, dear.
However, may I advise that you don't put romanized mandarin in your dialogue (especially if you aren't a fluent speaker) as it may sound strange/awkward to those who are fluent in the language. Just a slight suggestion! Hope you do write a sequel though(:
Crazefan4eve
#4
Chapter 2: Wish it could happen in real life!!
YixingsBaoBei
#5
Chapter 1: TIS SEEMS REAL DARN IT
SungChoLee
#6
Great start! :D
jessicaTiffany
#7
please make a sequel unnie...
BaekWifey22
#8
Chapter 1: Waaaaaahhh I nees sequeeeel!!! ♥
leeahlee
#9
Chapter 1: Oh my God you have to make a sequeeel! (^O^)
XxSophiaxX
#10
Can u make a sequel of this short story ^^ I like it