The Last Pages Were Ripped Away

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Born into an aristocracy that governs the land, young Sehun grew up knowing he was destined to a gruesome battle of authority, and that things like love and laughter were forbidden as signs of weakness. But when Mei Zhen, an angel, a Slave, enters his life and thaws his frozen heart, Sehun begins to believe in hope---only to have it come crashing down on him when she is robbed of her bright character by the merciless disparity between classes. Their young souls unable to tolerate the pain and the brutality of fate, they both become emotionally detached from everything, including each other. However after a ten year gap, unexpected events tug the two closer yet pull them apart at the same time, leading to a heart-wrenching tragedy where the loss comes too suddenly.

Foreword

 

“W-Who is it?” His voice quivered in the suffocating silence. “Show yourself.” Sehun tried again, this time with the inborn authority he held, feeling oddly like Father, the Lord of the Manor.

His keen ears caught a slight rustle from behind, and he spun around on his feet---

---to find an angel before him---impossibly so in this grand castle of demons.

Partially hidden behind the curtains flowing in the midnight breeze, a girl stood in front of the large window, the silvery moonlight shining spellbindingly on her small figure. Her large, watery doe eyes were like a pair of clear ponds that reflected the sparkling stars in the sky; they were enough to make Sehun's heart thunder with a beautiful yearning that he had never experienced before.   

“H-Hello.”

 

 

Young Mei had been a vulnerable angel lead into the chambers of hell, disguised in aristocracy and nobility. But her blinding innocence seemed to have scared away the shameful rumors and the shameless liars. She had filled the hallways with her airy laughter as she jumped up and down to wipe the windows; had illuminated the dull kitchen with her humming while she helped peel potatoes---had thawed a heart frozen by discipline and cynicism. And Sehun basked in the warmth of her smiles more liberating than that of sunlight, let her melodious laughter infuse vitality back into his listless soul, and soon found a lovely, mesmerizing reason to live as they shared their time in their secret sanctum. Maybe happiness can actually exist within these crimson walls, he had thought.

But the loss came so suddenly that his hopes ruptured into severed, bloody pieces and splattered all around, which the Slave had to scrub off the marble floors on her hands and knees.

 

 

 


This story is for the De Retrouvailles et D'adieux writing competition

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/599365/de-retrouvailles-et-d-adieux-a-writing-competition-apply-contest-writing-you-competition-prizes

the main theme is "Of Reunions and Partings" & these are some of the prompts I am using

Baby Don't Cry by EXO http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOK_HKMbTiY

I hope you like this story & please comment and subscribe :) thank you!!

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jooeeeyyyy
#1
Chapter 14: I only got the chance to read chapter 14 today. Huhu. Been super stressed with school. Anyway, I'm still hoping things will get better between them. Awesome and emotional update author-nim! <3
flyingbearcookies
#2
Chapter 14: ILL KILL YOU KREAZE

YOU'LL NEVER PAINT RHINOS AGAIN
xoxowithu
#3
Chapter 14: :'((( poor mei.... i really appreciate tho how you properly portray how broken and self-loathing and everything she is after the , cuz it pisses me off to no end when other fics just have their victims prancing around like its an easy obstacle to overcome. her guilt and shame is real. and its sad. ughhh. THE FEEEEEEEELS ERMAGAHDDD
why is this story so frekin good? T^T
happyclover3 #4
Chapter 13: LUHAAAN!! ToT
wahh so sad )): i was reading this during class and wanted to cry D:
he has such a nice heart, it's so sad he had to die
I thought the scene where he was dying was so beautifully written!
even though it was really visual, it wasn't gruesome :O it was really clean and pure
it didn't leave me feeling bad i actually felt kinda refreshed in the end lol
his goodness is so touching!

I'm also happy sehun and luhan were on the same page for once, and that sehun was actually being nice to someone other than mei! :D
jooeeeyyyy
#5
Chapter 13: Author-nim, I really love the way you wrote every chapter. I even finished it in one seating! I can't stop. It's beautiful and sorrowful in at the same time. I understand that Luhan died in this story for a greater reason. It reminded me of the quote by C.S. Lewis: "Love is not affectionate feeling, but a steady wish for the loved person's ultimate good as far as it can be obtained". Please don't stop writing! And thank you for sharing this story. <3 -Joey
xoxowithu
#6
Chapter 13: Omg luhan T^T gosh, this is so sadddddd but also kind of a cliffhanger huh? Sneaky little smartie!
I mean, I guess it's good that there's no third wheel trying to barge in on them, but you could tell luhan was a good guy tho~ just the type that doesn't notice he's being annoying, you know? Of course you would know, you're the author haha
But ahhh I really missed your updates! Fwaightingggg ;)
flyingbearcookies
#7
Chapter 13: LULU OMG


I DONT CARE IF YOU HATED SEHUN AND YOU LIKED MEI
COME BACK

PLS

DSOIGHDSOIGVF

KREAZE WHY

SOB