Broken.

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Amber an assasin with a dark & scary past who's set to kill anyone that's in her way and henry who's in love with her... what would happen when the both of them met...

 

Her blade cut swiftly through the thick flesh of his throat, the movement so practiced that her prey hardly even realised what she had done as his hands went feebly towards his neck in a pathetic attempt to staunch the blood flow. The assassin looked down on her prey as he peered up at her in astonishment, unable to fathom that he was about to die. Her eyes were cold and distant, as if there was no longer a speck of life left within her soul. The seconds seemed to pass by slowly as he began to choke on his own blood, his eyes growing wide as he gasped for air. She watched him thrash on the floor like a slain animal, feeling no remorse for the pitiful creature. She was beyond feeling emotions anymore as she watched her target die. Her years of brutal training and killing mercilessly had hardened her soul. As the man finally became still, she crouched down beside him, wiping her blade on a clean part of his jacket, placing a finger just below his nose to check whether he was still breathing. She need not had bothered for the way his wide-open eyes stared out lifeless told her his soul was long gone. With one last emotionless look at his still form on the ground, she spun around and left the alleyway.

Her work was done.


In this world there exist only two kinds of people: the weak and the strong. It is the role of the weak to succumb to the strong. One must become strong in order to survive the harsh cruelties of this journey we humans call ‘life’.

Her footsteps echoed softly on the footpath as she made her way from the scene of the crime, contemplating these thoughts. It was the logic she always used to console herself after completing her set tasks. But although her exterior showed no remorse for her actions, deep down she still could not escape the sorrow she felt for those who died by her hand. Light was seeping over the horizon as dawn was breaking. ‘Dawn’… that was her alias. She smiled softly as she remembered why she had chosen it and continued down the path, emptying her mind of any further thoughts as she made her way back home.


 

Foreword

Helloooooo peoples!

I'm back with a new long fic called 'Broken'. It stars Henry  and Amber as the mains. The story is rated as there will be quite a bit of mature themes and violence. 'Broken' is mainly focused around the main female character whose alias is the same as the title of the story. I should tell you in advance that I hardly ever watch shows in this genre, but every now and then I feel my 'dark side' calling ;

I actually started this story with fictional characters more than a year ago but stopped mostly because I didn't have any readers. (Plus I wasn't sure how to continue with the plot) It's still up in that forum, I think, but hardly anyone goes there. Anyway, it's been modified slightly to take into account that it'sAmber and Henry. Members of Super junior ,Exo, Fx & SnSd will also be making apperances.

That's enough for now. On with the story!

Oh, and please leave a comment. I love hearing my reader's opinions, good or bad ;)

Mains:
Amber josephine liu

Henry lau Liu Xianhua

Minors:

Krystal,Luhan,Kai,Kris,Eunhyuk,Kyuhyun, Donghae,Victoria,Luna, Sulli,Sungmin,Siwon,Ryeowook,taeyeon

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Makoto
#1
Chapter 20: Did you notice that instead of shower, you wrote "donghaeer"? I've noticed quite a bit of names in place of action words, like in the first couple chapters, there were a couple "chanyeoler" and "beakhyuner" I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I just thought I would ask. Otherwise I really like how this story is going.... although I have a feeling it's going to be a sad ending, I can't wait to see how things end
lovekiller_tsuna
#2
Chapter 59: i'm crying right now... why you make them like that? but i know it the best for them. amber cannot escape anymore from the gang and henry really love amber.. both of them are together forever..
it's just feel like some mistake can make big change in our life.... broken, so ironic about this tittle.
anyway, thanks for sharing this story!
i think i have to read another henber story and think, it's reincarnation for them... too sad
themisberry #3
Chapter 59: So much tears..it was so sad..but it is a great story thou..im reading this story without stopping in a go..thanks authornim
wangzifan
#4
Chapter 59: :((((( i was spoiled with the ending before starting and also expect such ending as well, but this still brings tears to my eyes ;_____;
It was so sad, how fate is not alway nice ;_____;
Thx for your story ;______;
I've enjoyed both of your henber series n I hope you will come back with another one
markpop #5
Chapter 59: oh my God you had me in tears! this story was so good. I really love it.
darya_tnt #6
Chapter 59: This is an amazing story a story about friendship love loyality and kindness and sad times in life it was perfect i really enjoyed it tnx you are the best
justmeyay #7
Chapter 58: Thank you for writting this amazing henber fanfic.it was well written as if it was extract from real life event the ending was sad .if i may allowed to ask you for their life to be saved perhaps a short sequel or one shot of them living together.
I reallly loved this fic.it brought me to tears the love,the cruel world that they met & and dealling with the pain which led amber&henry awful experience while alive til they died ..i m talkng nonescene the bottom line is i love your work of art..thankyou authorshi
deelau #8
Chapter 59: It was a great experience reading your story, Ahniceee. Thank you for this story. It is one of the best fanfics I have read. I am shocked at first on how it ended, but I M glad that it ended the way it ended, them being together.
lolo_loza
#9
Chapter 59: I can't help but cry ... I've been waiting/dying to know how this will end... Never thought of such ending.. Although I was in class, I couldn't help but read and you can't even imagine how hard it was for me to hold my tears...
Amazing... Pure masterpiece. You deserve an applause though I hate their death, it fitted well.
Thanks for writing this amazing story xD T.T
ajol_fxonee
#10
Chapter 59: Crying out loud, the live is so cruel...
Its an eternity for both of them, but my heart is so hurt in a way that i cant even imagined
Every main cast are all dead, oh goshh...
Their loveeeeeee.. how beautiful but painfull

#thumbsUp and congratz for finally completing this one^^ wish for another amber story sooner. Thanks so much for what u've done.. ur amazing XD