chapter three

The Master's Sun: Children of The Night§ - (Stopped)


             chapter three            

It  was the long awaited first school day on Raven High, It  was the long awaited first school day on Raven High, Cheabyul had set a clock the night before she went to bed, but when she opened her eyes, and tried to get her eyes used to the light she felt suddenly nauseas the thought about meeting new people mad her scared for some reason. Her eyes where now fully used to the light, what came slowly creeping through her curtains, Cheabyul looked at her clock once, Cheabyul thought it was strange it didn’t went off yet, but when her eyes landed on the clock Cheabyul started to panic. ‘’Oh great! My first day and going to came late already!’’ Cheabyul rushed out of bed, and Cheabyul run towards her bathroom, picking clothes on her way she was going to wear, she turn on the warm knob, but she couldn’t wait for it to fully get hot, she jump under it, Cheabyul shivers slightly when her body had to get used to the cold of the water, she sighs softly, and clean her body.

 

Cheabyul was finely done, she took a towel and wrapped it around her waist, she Cheabyul dried her hair a bit with a hairdryer. Cheabyul had not much patient with her hair, so Cheabyul decided she would place it in a bum,  when Cheabyul felt herself dry enough, she put on a pretty black dress, it hide everything properly, it was just above her knee, Cheabyul look at her clock again, and she shook her head. Cheabyul had ten minutes left,  before the first class would start. She wasn’t sure how she would arrive in school in less than ten minutes, Cheabyul sighs and took her school bag with her papers, and she rushes towards the kitchen, Cheabyul took an apple  and put on her shoes and rushed outside. Cheabyul took a bite from the apple while she rushed towards the bus station, she sat down and finished her apple while waiting for her bus to arrive. Finely after 3 minutes her bus arrived, Cheabyul throw her half-finished apple in a garbage can, Cheabyul get in the bus, and wished she won’t arrive all too late. When Cheabyul finely arrived after five minutes at her school, Cheabyul couldn’t believe it, Cheabyul was happy she still had some time, she look at her school, and Cheabyul couldn’t believe this was going to be her school from now on, it was huge, and it was kind of creepy, it gave a weird feeling.

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Kwon Minah, arrived early at school so she won’t be late for her first school day, and so she had some time to look around, before she would check in into the school, she still had to deliver some papers, and she wanted to be on time with it, but when she looked on her watch she saw she lost time, she was sitting in the huge library, but when she saw there where only 5minutes left, she placed the book back on the shelve and rushed outside the library towards the information locket, when she arrived there where some people standing, she sighs softly and tapped lightly with her foot, this couldn’t happen to her, she was a hour to early.

 

 

But she had 5 minutes left, when it was finely her turn, she smiles at the middle aged woman behind the desk and turn in her papers. ‘’Annyoeng my name is Kwon Minah! And it’s my first day here and I had to turn in some papers.’’ The woman smiled back and took the papers, she typed something in her pc and then she frowned a little bit, she then look up at you. ‘’Are you sure, your got in Raven High?’’ Kwon Minah looked confused the woman while nodding softly. ‘’Neh! I’m hundred percent sure, I got an invitation, I have it with me.’’

 

The woman was still typing things on the pc, but she hold her hands out, with other words she wanted to see the invitation, Kwon Minah took the invitation out her bag and hand it to the woman, she woman sighed softly, and it got a bit on Minah nerves. ‘’Just one moment please, I’m going to ask someone else.’’ The woman stood up and walked of somewhere. Kwon Minah sat down and tapped her foot  while pinching the bridge of her nose with closed eyes, her eyes shoot open when she heard footsteps, but they were from someone else.   She closed her eyes again, and when she heard someone calling her name, she look up and force a smile on her face. She stood up and walk back to the desk where the woman  was sitting again, and look hopeful at the woman. ‘’It seem we made a fault while signing you up in this school, but everything seems to be alright now,  here is your lesion rooster, and you can go to your class now.’’ Kwon Minah smiled relieved and bowl softly while thanking the woman, and she left the  information locket, and went searching for her class room.

 

Cheabyul found an another information locket, the school was so huge they had two or three information lockets, Cheabyul had finely her lesion rooster and was now on her way looking for her classroom. The only problem is Cheabyul didn’t understand her roster at all, and Cheabyul had no idea where her classroom was. Cheabyul didn’t dare to ask, so Cheabyul just kept walking and walking, when Cheabyul saw a stairs Cheabyul just had the feeling she had to go up, Cheabyul walked upstairs, and when Cheabyul arrived she Cheabyul had to take a turn, but while taking the turn Cheabyul looked up her paper, so Cheabyul didn’t saw the girl walking before her, Cheabyul bump softly into her, and they both fell down on their , Cheabyul looked shocked up, and she rushed up and hold her hand out to help the other girl.

 

‘’ I.. I’m so so sorry.’’ The girl before her, ignored her hand and stood up herself. ’’It’s alright, I wasn’t paying attention myself either.’’ Cheabyul looked at the paper in the girls hand, and she sighed relieved. ‘’Do you maybe know where I can find that classroom?’’  Kwon Minah shook her head a bit. ‘’Aniyo! I have no idea myself, I’m looking for it too.’’     Cheabyul sighs softly, she turned around and looked at the classrooms doors, she then gasp softly. ‘’I think I just found the classroom.’’ Cheabyul point at the last classroom, and the Kwon Minah’s eyes lights up a bit. ‘’Finely!’’ Cheabyul smiles softly, and stick her hand out. ‘’My my na.. name is Zhang Mei-Xing, but you can call me Cheabyul.’’ The girl just took my hand and shook it once. ‘’My name is Kwon Minah.’’ Cheabyul nodded once, and took her hand back, and followed Kwon Minah towards the classroom. Kwon Minah opened the door, and all the faces from the people in the classroom turned towards the two of them. And they both took a deep breath, they knew that from now on their days are going to start on Raven High.

It  was the long awaited first school day on Raven High


author's note:     Heyy, so this is the third chapter and two members have been chosen – congratulations to The curios bird/fearfulmouse:  hanraemi16  (Chaebyul) and the ambitious individual xx unknownsweet101 (Kwonminah). By the way, I just wanted to say I’m so so sorry for the late chapter, I just couldn’t find the strength to write this chapter, I had so much pain and felt not well to go behind my laptop and write this chapter, so after three weeks, I’m finely getting better bit by bit, and the pain gets better too, sometimes it still hurt a lot, but it’s going to be alright, I just really feel sorry towards my readers for not posting sooner than this, I hope this chapter is alright. Thank you so much for staying, and I love you guys! ^^

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TheOnlyAce
#1
Chapter 19: Kymin is still adorable even when she's frustrated and I don't know why! and aw... Minah's so sweet (?). I mean, she offered to tutor Kymin after all. Remedial classes might be boring and all but let's look on the brighter side, shall we? at least your tutors are cute *wink wink*
Chaebyul and Sehun are cute in a weird way. I mean, come on! Who the hell kicks a girl's chair?! If he's interested on her that's a weird way of showing it... just stare at her and melt her heart away, okay, Oh Sehun? She'll like that more. Heck, she might even love it!
Jongin and Minah though... hitting on her, eh? Well, you have a long looong~ way to go, Mr. Kim. That's the Kwon Minah. It's funny how he's literally depending on Ji-ae for school materials. That's really admirable, Kim Jongin. It's interesting to see how Jongin tries to get her attention. Can't wait to see more of them! (But honestly that cocky grin would kill me on the spot!)
Eunji's interactions with his oppars are interesting too. I mean all of them are squeal-worthy. Yixing being that adorable prankster. And he's freaking excuse when he accompanied Eunji in her room. Also that "falling moment" with Zitao. You my friend, is blessed.
Ji-ae unnie saved a life! How awesome can she be?! I really like her motherly aura... makes me go all warm and fuzzy. Her meeting with Woobin though... so drama-like. It's so cute! I want to see more of them. Woobin's manly and rough appearance actually goes well on Ji-ae's motherly and gentle image. So cute~
The ending really made me laugh. Stalker Hyusu, coming right up!

Hahaha... thanks for the update author-nim!!! ^ ^
gloomycelery
#2
Chapter 19: Lol kymin will always be kymin. i'm surprised food on the table didn't get knocked over when she slammed into it. and lol jongin. trying to get minah's attention. and omg yixing, never imagined him to be a cheeky troublemaker like that. but he's adorable no matter what :) and sehun should stop bothering chaebyul. poor byul has to put up with the antics. but once they're together, they'll probably be such a cute bubble tea couple. and hyusu's stalkerish ways. i wonder how she'll interact with ryeowook. great chapter as always :)
NinaNaz
#3
Chapter 19: *coughs* *breathes*
MUST
CALM
SELF
lol xD

Hehe another great update from my new fav story xD (what to expect from The Master's Sun's fan xDD)
Haha Eunji & Yixing finally met and damnn Yixing is like freaking naughty for doing that to his sunbae XDD *slaps him*
woah~Jongin, are ya tryin' to flirt with Minah? DON'T.YOU.DARE. SHE'S.TAKEN. *laughs again*
I'm sorry if my comments are a bit creepy but I can't help it xD
I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATEEEEE xD
lovelyeoja
#4
Chapter 19: yOU UPDATED! oH MY gosh you just made my night! TTuTT
So almost all of the girls,plus the love interests and rivals, have the same class together. I reckon this is going to be so exciting in the future. eue kkk~ I lol-ed at Jongin who kept saying hi at Minah. I was kind of expecting that Minah would at least have a little reaction but then I realized that it is MINAH we're talking about x) Oh oh and don't forget the other maknae. Oh Sehun what is the purpose of bugging a studying girl on a class? Could you explain? or was it because you find her cute aheu >:) I swear those two maknaes... *shakes head*

okaaay who else--- Yixing, I didn't expect you to prank a sunbae. lmao. that really surprised me xD (chaebyul: omg what did my brother do to his sunbae???) and why involve innocent eunji? (Chaebyul: what did he do to Eunji?! waah eotteoke-- YIXING GE! *goes brother hunting*) and ji-ae's encounter with woobin! Asdfghjkl so drama-like me likey. *wiggles eyebrows* so ji ae, wanna be young do's eunsang?

Kymin's tutor though. The google translate part was really funny. But come one have faith on Kymin! She can do it, tutor-nim! :D However the best part among them was Hyusu... stalking Kim Ryeowook in the library. I cannot Hyusu-yah! (btw have you watched SJ's Mamacita? OMG RYEONG LOOKS ASDFGHJKADHJAKSHFKJAHJKF THERE HE IS SO UNF WITH BLACK HAIR AND HIS EYES OMG DIES.)

Thank you for updating authornims! <3
TheOnlyAce
#5
Chapter 18: YOU'VE UPDATED!!!! When I saw the update, I suddenly became hyper as hell!

So, we now have our bubble tea couples, huh? Do I sense some bubble tea dates soon? Hahaha... Sehun staring at Chaebyul can be a little weird... but come on, who would mind when the Oh Sehun is staring at you?! Chaebyul is one hell of a lucky girl. Thehunnie seems to be so interested at her... hm, can't wait for more.

Aw, Kymin... don't worry, things will go better! Don't lose hope! Study with your friends, I believe that's the best way. Besides, Minah is more approachable now, you can now ask for her help. She might not be the friendliest tutor out there but she's fine... I guess. And what a daebak way to meet her love interest. I am now anticipating an endless war between these two. That actually made them even more adorable. Oh, how I love a love-hate relationship~

And Ice Princess finally met his Hot Prince (I mean come on, he's hot as hell on his solo debut! I died, okay...) Their meeting, made me squeal and fangirl a lot! It's just too cute~ Taemin being that cute guy, admiring Minah. And gosh, their faces were so freaking close! Their opposite personalities gave a charm in their relationship. I can totally see Taemin bringing Minah closer and deeper to the world of dance. I also personally think that Taemin already have a little crush on her! xD I guess dancers turn him on. Anyway, the ending sure was creepy. I mean imagine suddenly running into a glaring ghost.

Author-nim, thousand thanks for your update! Really made my day! =)) Good luck with your new applyfic too, fighting! ^ ^
NinaNaz
#6
Chapter 18: OMG FINALLY YOU UPDATED I WAS WAITING FOR THIS! *turns caps lock off*

Of first of all, Kymin, I know how it feels to get low score in exams but you can improve it by studying with your friends! I know you can do it!!! Kymin hwaiting!!! Hehe Minah met her future bae o u o be nice to him arasso? O u O ㅋㅋㅋ how they met is so cute like omg I can't even say it in words xD And Chaebyul with Sehun, omg bubble tea couple xD So kawaiiii xD

Good luck on the next update and thank you for updating! ^^ I would love to join your another apply fic but I can't since I'm going to be a little bit busy this year T^T Hwaiting!
lovelyeoja
#7
Chapter 18: The update tho! Omg I didn't expect an update sooner because I know authornims are busy but I'm glad you did! :D Now unto the comments/fangirling/spazzing. I'll try my best to give a very helpful insight-- heck what am I even saying?
I somehow feel sad for Kymin since she's gotten a low score in her exams. I think it would be help her if on the next exams, the girls would do a group study. Nothing beats studying with friends, right? On the other side note, Kymin already met her love interest. I'm looking forward to their future world wars. eued

Now now for the best part... Minah met her THE ONE. Oh my gosh. Minah don't mess this up. Although I know you won't but don't push your shield away okay? As expected, how they met is really unique and asdfghjkl. And dancing is the key! May you two make good babies who dances well. <3 Taemin please purify Minah's insecurities. She needs it badly.

And last but not the least... Chaebyul's first stare competition with her love interest! *throws bubble tea pearls everywhere* Believe me I was holding my scream during the part when she was in the bubble tea store. I just knew they'll meet there. And I hope they'll meet again soon! :DD

Thank you for updating authornims! And to wolf, good luck at your apply fic! ouo You'll do well don't worry~
TheOnlyAce
#8
Chapter 17: Yay, update~
Okay, it's really adorable how all the girls are now doing breakfast and other things together. Minah is surely opening up! Continue the hard work, girls!
And the ranking... ooh~ Minah's score and rank were high but still not enough for her and her family. Well, things might work out soon for them, I hope... It's good that she always have Sulli beside her. And Lee Taemin is a possible classmate? ^_^ yehet!
Ji-ae unnie and Suho~ oh, those two! Just too adorable! Chaebyul and Eunji's friendship is very sweet too! I mean all that hair ruffling and those conversations, they are just too cute! I can also imagine Yixing being the sweet and supportive brother. About Hyusu, I guess he could make that library guy (Ryeowook) as her inspiration to make her grades higher. Sunbae would be proud of her! For Kymin... all of your friends and the girls are just there for you! Don't give up and just continue to work hard! She can even be lucky enough to receive some tutorial from Minah. Good luck to her! I am sure a lot would love to help her.

And congrats for adding all the characters already, author-nim! That must have been one hell of a job! The characters were a loooot~ Thanks for another great chappie and good luck with your new applyfic. I just know you'll do well ^ ^
eomonim
#9
wait for my ghost ouo XD
lovelyeoja
#10
Chapter 17: The first thing I noticed was Kwon Minah's grade. I mean come on 96%. Orz I coulldn't get that grade ever in my life. Claps at Minah's genius mind. Don't worry about your families opinion. If I know they will be all utter BS. So what if your unnie's higher? You're at par with her girl. Don't be disheartened! Aja fighting! PS and you have Taemin in your class... e u e aheuheuheu.
And JiAe unnie... Looks like you're in for some romance in your class. /grins widely/ I'm glad you did well unnie despite being stressed and all.
Eunji and Byullie! Odg this two are seriously adorable together <3 And whistles love interest on sight Chaebyul... Love interest on sight mayday.
Hyusu and Kymin don't give up! Maybe the other girls could help you with your subjects! And think positive baes! At least you're done with the exams. <3
Thank you for updating authornims! Fighting to the both of you!
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