chapter one

The Master's Sun: Children of The Night§ - (Stopped)
 
 
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pentagon alley - lined with shophouses stocked up with school supplies was riddled with teenagers rushing to prepare for the start of the new school year. freshmen were excitedly rushing through the alley, eyes bright and gleaming michieviously. the sophomores were chattering incessantly, picking a new year's worth of materials diligently. the juniors were much calmer, going around systematically marking off their lists and stopping ocassionally for banter. the seniors, on the other hand, were evidently more matured and went around engaging in serious exhanges about their future and dreams.

kymin was overwhelmed by the sheer capacity the alley could actually hold within the narrow corridor. she didn't know where to start. beside her, jongsuk was gasping in awe. both of them were seventeen and were considered freshmen, while heechul, at nineteen, was a sophomore in raven high. heechul nudged the two younger ones towards the nearest shophouse. "uniforms first!" "uniforms? I thought we could have casual wear?" kymin tilted her head as she frowned. "jace, you haven't been reading up on the code of conduct, have you? they stated that casual wear was allowed for special occassions and for times we had to go back to school but not for classes.. we'll be living in the dorms remember?" jongsuk shook his head in exasperation. "busted." kymin grinned. "wait.. we're living in the dorms?!" heechul and jongsuk widened their eyes in disbelief as the former gave a scowl. "YAH! kim kymin, you're an idiot. we would all be living in the dorms.. I've been living in there for three years already!" before heechul could grab her though, kymin sprinted to the nearest tailor and began the measurement. jongsuk followed along to get his measurements taken as well while heechul leaned against the doorframe, occupying himself with the full length mirror. a wail reverberated through the air as kymin complained about the length of the skirt. "it's so uncomfortable!" her older brother merely made wolf whistles as the younger glared daggers at him. a stray ghost joined in and kymin suppressed her urge to kick the apparition.

as they left the shophouse with their respective uniforms, the first snow fell. jongsuk and kymin immediately stuck out their tongues and attempted to catch the falling snowflakes. "hurry.. we've to get this done by today.. school starts in another three days!" heechul urged. "when were you the mature one?" kymin taunted. "it's too bad though.. we don't get to celebrate christmas together at home.." the three started at one another and jongsuk whispered under his breath. "we could always meet up secretly.. celebrate chrsitmas by ourselves.. and don't forget the presents!" he finished with a grin. evidently cheered up, the trio continued on searching for their schoolbooks.

hyusu was mesmerized by the snow. she was flanked by her brother and best friend on either side, standing right smack in the middle of the busy alley. as she stood there imagining the many possibilities of them building snowmen, snowcastles and snowforts, sungmin leaned back and whispered to zitao, "she hasn't changed.. still as much of a daydreamer as before.." before winking at the younger. as they led a still dazed hyusu into the various shophouses picking out her uniforms and books, hyusu stood by and checked off the list that she had conscientiously prepared. she may be a dreamer but she was independent and took pride in being organized. as she ticked off the last book on her list, sungmin came over with the pile of books and attempted to balance them on her head. hyusu swatted his hand away as she made a face. zitao simply chuckled and brought the books to the checkout. "do you need a school planner? the important dates in the school are all marked off in the calendar as well." the receptionist enquired. sungmin gave an approving smile and zitao gave a thumbs-up. they should know since sungmin was a junior at twenty and zitao was a sophomore at nineteen. hyusu was eighteen and a sophomore as well but she evidently didn't know the korean system as much as the other two. zitao looked to hyusu who gave a small nod and began moving in the direction the receptionist had pointed out.

as she reached for the planner, another pair of hands beat her to it. hyusu jerked back in fright as she half-expected a spirit to leer at her. "hey.. are you.. okay?" a girl, evidently younger than her, crouched down beside her. as hyusu looked up, the other girl gave a sheepish smile and passed the book over. "here.." she grinned as she reached for another. "t-thankyou.." hyusu blushed shyly. the other girl peered at her in curiosity before a shout from her brother pulled her away. "kim kyminnnn!" "I'm here! just give me a moment!" the girl gave a wave before turning on her heels and hurrying away. hyusu felt surprisingly warm. she was an introvert and was afraid of interacting with others, being prone to panic attacks. she couldn't even look a stranger in the eye. it had stemmed from her being bullied in her old school and thus had been trying to avoid everyone other than her brother and bestfriend. she was pleasantly surprised by the comfort she felt interacting with a total stranger. it made her feel.. normal. "hyusu!" sungmin hollered from across the shop. as she navigated her way towards her brother, he looked at her strangely. "were you day-dreaming again? or did anything happen? you're blushing.." hyusu hurriedly cupped her face in her hands. "I t-think it's the c-cold.." sungmin didn't seem convinced but nodded anyway. as they checked out hyusu's school supplies, zitao suggested that they go and get some grocceries. "we could have a small christmas celebration before we all leave for school in a few days.." "I'll cook!" hyusu volunteered earnestly. 


co-author's note:     heyyyy so this is the start! ^^ the girls will be introduced by pairs soon! :) take this as a filler while we choose the applicants >.< but  yes the chapter kick-starts the acceptance into raven high! do look forward to the next chapter! ^^ 

 

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TheOnlyAce
#1
Chapter 19: Kymin is still adorable even when she's frustrated and I don't know why! and aw... Minah's so sweet (?). I mean, she offered to tutor Kymin after all. Remedial classes might be boring and all but let's look on the brighter side, shall we? at least your tutors are cute *wink wink*
Chaebyul and Sehun are cute in a weird way. I mean, come on! Who the hell kicks a girl's chair?! If he's interested on her that's a weird way of showing it... just stare at her and melt her heart away, okay, Oh Sehun? She'll like that more. Heck, she might even love it!
Jongin and Minah though... hitting on her, eh? Well, you have a long looong~ way to go, Mr. Kim. That's the Kwon Minah. It's funny how he's literally depending on Ji-ae for school materials. That's really admirable, Kim Jongin. It's interesting to see how Jongin tries to get her attention. Can't wait to see more of them! (But honestly that cocky grin would kill me on the spot!)
Eunji's interactions with his oppars are interesting too. I mean all of them are squeal-worthy. Yixing being that adorable prankster. And he's freaking excuse when he accompanied Eunji in her room. Also that "falling moment" with Zitao. You my friend, is blessed.
Ji-ae unnie saved a life! How awesome can she be?! I really like her motherly aura... makes me go all warm and fuzzy. Her meeting with Woobin though... so drama-like. It's so cute! I want to see more of them. Woobin's manly and rough appearance actually goes well on Ji-ae's motherly and gentle image. So cute~
The ending really made me laugh. Stalker Hyusu, coming right up!

Hahaha... thanks for the update author-nim!!! ^ ^
gloomycelery
#2
Chapter 19: Lol kymin will always be kymin. i'm surprised food on the table didn't get knocked over when she slammed into it. and lol jongin. trying to get minah's attention. and omg yixing, never imagined him to be a cheeky troublemaker like that. but he's adorable no matter what :) and sehun should stop bothering chaebyul. poor byul has to put up with the antics. but once they're together, they'll probably be such a cute bubble tea couple. and hyusu's stalkerish ways. i wonder how she'll interact with ryeowook. great chapter as always :)
NinaNaz
#3
Chapter 19: *coughs* *breathes*
MUST
CALM
SELF
lol xD

Hehe another great update from my new fav story xD (what to expect from The Master's Sun's fan xDD)
Haha Eunji & Yixing finally met and damnn Yixing is like freaking naughty for doing that to his sunbae XDD *slaps him*
woah~Jongin, are ya tryin' to flirt with Minah? DON'T.YOU.DARE. SHE'S.TAKEN. *laughs again*
I'm sorry if my comments are a bit creepy but I can't help it xD
I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATEEEEE xD
lovelyeoja
#4
Chapter 19: yOU UPDATED! oH MY gosh you just made my night! TTuTT
So almost all of the girls,plus the love interests and rivals, have the same class together. I reckon this is going to be so exciting in the future. eue kkk~ I lol-ed at Jongin who kept saying hi at Minah. I was kind of expecting that Minah would at least have a little reaction but then I realized that it is MINAH we're talking about x) Oh oh and don't forget the other maknae. Oh Sehun what is the purpose of bugging a studying girl on a class? Could you explain? or was it because you find her cute aheu >:) I swear those two maknaes... *shakes head*

okaaay who else--- Yixing, I didn't expect you to prank a sunbae. lmao. that really surprised me xD (chaebyul: omg what did my brother do to his sunbae???) and why involve innocent eunji? (Chaebyul: what did he do to Eunji?! waah eotteoke-- YIXING GE! *goes brother hunting*) and ji-ae's encounter with woobin! Asdfghjkl so drama-like me likey. *wiggles eyebrows* so ji ae, wanna be young do's eunsang?

Kymin's tutor though. The google translate part was really funny. But come one have faith on Kymin! She can do it, tutor-nim! :D However the best part among them was Hyusu... stalking Kim Ryeowook in the library. I cannot Hyusu-yah! (btw have you watched SJ's Mamacita? OMG RYEONG LOOKS ASDFGHJKADHJAKSHFKJAHJKF THERE HE IS SO UNF WITH BLACK HAIR AND HIS EYES OMG DIES.)

Thank you for updating authornims! <3
TheOnlyAce
#5
Chapter 18: YOU'VE UPDATED!!!! When I saw the update, I suddenly became hyper as hell!

So, we now have our bubble tea couples, huh? Do I sense some bubble tea dates soon? Hahaha... Sehun staring at Chaebyul can be a little weird... but come on, who would mind when the Oh Sehun is staring at you?! Chaebyul is one hell of a lucky girl. Thehunnie seems to be so interested at her... hm, can't wait for more.

Aw, Kymin... don't worry, things will go better! Don't lose hope! Study with your friends, I believe that's the best way. Besides, Minah is more approachable now, you can now ask for her help. She might not be the friendliest tutor out there but she's fine... I guess. And what a daebak way to meet her love interest. I am now anticipating an endless war between these two. That actually made them even more adorable. Oh, how I love a love-hate relationship~

And Ice Princess finally met his Hot Prince (I mean come on, he's hot as hell on his solo debut! I died, okay...) Their meeting, made me squeal and fangirl a lot! It's just too cute~ Taemin being that cute guy, admiring Minah. And gosh, their faces were so freaking close! Their opposite personalities gave a charm in their relationship. I can totally see Taemin bringing Minah closer and deeper to the world of dance. I also personally think that Taemin already have a little crush on her! xD I guess dancers turn him on. Anyway, the ending sure was creepy. I mean imagine suddenly running into a glaring ghost.

Author-nim, thousand thanks for your update! Really made my day! =)) Good luck with your new applyfic too, fighting! ^ ^
NinaNaz
#6
Chapter 18: OMG FINALLY YOU UPDATED I WAS WAITING FOR THIS! *turns caps lock off*

Of first of all, Kymin, I know how it feels to get low score in exams but you can improve it by studying with your friends! I know you can do it!!! Kymin hwaiting!!! Hehe Minah met her future bae o u o be nice to him arasso? O u O ㅋㅋㅋ how they met is so cute like omg I can't even say it in words xD And Chaebyul with Sehun, omg bubble tea couple xD So kawaiiii xD

Good luck on the next update and thank you for updating! ^^ I would love to join your another apply fic but I can't since I'm going to be a little bit busy this year T^T Hwaiting!
lovelyeoja
#7
Chapter 18: The update tho! Omg I didn't expect an update sooner because I know authornims are busy but I'm glad you did! :D Now unto the comments/fangirling/spazzing. I'll try my best to give a very helpful insight-- heck what am I even saying?
I somehow feel sad for Kymin since she's gotten a low score in her exams. I think it would be help her if on the next exams, the girls would do a group study. Nothing beats studying with friends, right? On the other side note, Kymin already met her love interest. I'm looking forward to their future world wars. eued

Now now for the best part... Minah met her THE ONE. Oh my gosh. Minah don't mess this up. Although I know you won't but don't push your shield away okay? As expected, how they met is really unique and asdfghjkl. And dancing is the key! May you two make good babies who dances well. <3 Taemin please purify Minah's insecurities. She needs it badly.

And last but not the least... Chaebyul's first stare competition with her love interest! *throws bubble tea pearls everywhere* Believe me I was holding my scream during the part when she was in the bubble tea store. I just knew they'll meet there. And I hope they'll meet again soon! :DD

Thank you for updating authornims! And to wolf, good luck at your apply fic! ouo You'll do well don't worry~
TheOnlyAce
#8
Chapter 17: Yay, update~
Okay, it's really adorable how all the girls are now doing breakfast and other things together. Minah is surely opening up! Continue the hard work, girls!
And the ranking... ooh~ Minah's score and rank were high but still not enough for her and her family. Well, things might work out soon for them, I hope... It's good that she always have Sulli beside her. And Lee Taemin is a possible classmate? ^_^ yehet!
Ji-ae unnie and Suho~ oh, those two! Just too adorable! Chaebyul and Eunji's friendship is very sweet too! I mean all that hair ruffling and those conversations, they are just too cute! I can also imagine Yixing being the sweet and supportive brother. About Hyusu, I guess he could make that library guy (Ryeowook) as her inspiration to make her grades higher. Sunbae would be proud of her! For Kymin... all of your friends and the girls are just there for you! Don't give up and just continue to work hard! She can even be lucky enough to receive some tutorial from Minah. Good luck to her! I am sure a lot would love to help her.

And congrats for adding all the characters already, author-nim! That must have been one hell of a job! The characters were a loooot~ Thanks for another great chappie and good luck with your new applyfic. I just know you'll do well ^ ^
eomonim
#9
wait for my ghost ouo XD
lovelyeoja
#10
Chapter 17: The first thing I noticed was Kwon Minah's grade. I mean come on 96%. Orz I coulldn't get that grade ever in my life. Claps at Minah's genius mind. Don't worry about your families opinion. If I know they will be all utter BS. So what if your unnie's higher? You're at par with her girl. Don't be disheartened! Aja fighting! PS and you have Taemin in your class... e u e aheuheuheu.
And JiAe unnie... Looks like you're in for some romance in your class. /grins widely/ I'm glad you did well unnie despite being stressed and all.
Eunji and Byullie! Odg this two are seriously adorable together <3 And whistles love interest on sight Chaebyul... Love interest on sight mayday.
Hyusu and Kymin don't give up! Maybe the other girls could help you with your subjects! And think positive baes! At least you're done with the exams. <3
Thank you for updating authornims! Fighting to the both of you!
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