chapter eight

The Master's Sun: Children of The Night§ - (Stopped)


             chapter eight            


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the week progressed relatively slowly, and the girls started hanging out together after school. minah stayed distant, however, leaving the dormitory early in the morning and only returning sometime before lights-out. busy with schoolwork, her class president duties and managing the girls in general, ji-ae had not had a chance to approach minah. "should we watch a movie this weekend?" kymin drawled as they walked back from assembly. hyusu responded animatedly while chaebyul and eunji thought for a moment. ji-ae nudged them lightly. "you both should go too; you have worked hard these few days. both of you are too reserved for your own good!" she turned to kymin. "you should be the one staying back and spending more time on your studies. I know that school has just started, but haven't you had any homework at all?" kymin gave a grimace as she waved the elder away. "I did them in class!"

chaebyul and eunji beamed as they excused themselves to the library.  ji-ae headed off to the supermarket herself, realizing that they were short on market supplies. kymin turned to hyusu, about to ask her if she wanted to go to the mess hall (lunch room), when a lanky boy galloped up to them and snatched the former away. "hey!" kymin shouted after her. hyusu was half-dragged out of the school gates as the guy promised to bring her back before lights-out. what good friends I have. shrugging, kymin decided to go to dance class early. it wasn't her idea to join the activity but she needed the boost points; she didn't have enough accolades to join the school - they would only accept her if she contributed in three other after-school activities. kymin, being a rather unladylike girl, chose to invest in taekwondo and shooting. the only other option that she was offered was dance, and so that was it. 

back at the library, chaebyul and eunji had barely sat down when a dark-haired boy in a hoodie approached them - eunji, to be specific. "I'm sorry to interrupt.." he started, but can I steal eunji for awhile?" he smiled kindly at chaebyul. stunned, the latter looked to eunji for permission as she nodded, "I'll be right back!" chaebyul watched them leave the library, trying to remember where she had seen the boy before. the one who liked breadstuff - jungkook or something. chaebyul was jolted out of her musing as somebody brushed against her elbow. she looked up in astonishment. at the see-through image of a guy. she immediately looked back down at her books, trying to ignore the fear that was coursing through her veins. she had done so well up till now - and now this was going to ruin everything. all the bad memories she had suppressed  since the day she found her dead grandparents hanging off a cliff flooded back into her mind. she sobbed quietly, wishing that the spirit would leave her alone. it was not to be. chaebyul risked a peek to her right after a few tense moments. the ghost was still there, seated respectfully with his arms out on the table. (attached to his shoulders, no worries.) 

"c-can you p-please leave me a-alone?" chaebyul pleaded with her head still down, eyes trained on the cover of her calculus book. the spectre shifted in his seat, turning towards chaebyul as she flinched away. "don't worry. I'm not going to harm you." he sounded uncertain. "I just - I just don't feel like living anymore" chaebyul, despite being frightened, gave a baffled gasp. "aren't you already d-dead?" the guy shrugged his shoulders. "I don't know what's happening to me either. I need help." he bent down and met chaebyul at eye level. chaebyul staggered back and almost fell off her chair if not for the apparition holding on to her. "will you help me.. please?" chaebyul leaned away from the figure, and as the figure loosened his grip on her arm, she sprinted away from the spectre, leaving her books and stationery on the table in her hurry. the ghost stayed where he was, looking at her escaping form forlornly.

in the snowy streets outside, ji-ae plodded along the road with the loot from the supermarket. she was passing a bus stop when she noticed a young-looking spectre gazing despondently at a girl. as if the ghost could hear her thoughts, he promptly made eye contact with her and made a move to approach her. ji-ae felt herself involuntarily gravitating towards the spirit. "tell me." ji-ae found her motherly instinct kick in as she started comforting the apparition while he blurted out his worries. 

"noona.. I had a sister once.." he confided. "I was supposed to go to her audition and cheer her on, but - but I got into a car accident. my sister has been living unhappily for the past two years. can- can you help me tell her that I'm sorry for not being there for her, and that it - wasn't her fault?" his voice broke as he recounted the incident to ji-ae. she nodded sympathetically, agreeing to help if he would show her the way. it was not like ji-ae to turn down anyone in need of help. grateful, the ghost, who introduced himself as baro, took her hand in his and led her along the houses by the side of the road. "here." he pointed dejectedly at the rundown apartment. ji-ae bobbed her head as she made her way down the cobbled pathway. she rang the door-bell and waited.

a brown-haired girl, looking slightly younger than ji-ae herself, came to the door. after a brief introduction, ji-ae proceeded to slowly break the news to her. "you had a brother, right?" ji-ae looked on as baro's spirit hugged his sister. "he's here, now." the girl's eyes flashed and she was about to slam the door when ji-ae put her palm against the wood. "no, wait. listen to me. your brother.. he wants you to know something.." the girl stopped struggling to close the door, suddenly looking around her, her eyes settling down on the spot that baro was standing at. he ruffled her hair, and she seemed to have felt that too. "look - he said for me to tell you that he's sorry for not being there for you these past few years. he loves you and wishes for you to move on. he wants to tell you that it wasn't your fault, and he misses you alot." the girl sniffled and rubbed the back of her hands across her eyes. 

"tell him - tell him that I'm sorry.. and - and I love him too. I miss him so much.." the girl bit her lip as she turned away abashed. "he can hear you. he's right beside you now." ji-ae smiled. "I'm sorry that this is all that I can do, but he's happy, and he wants you to be too." the girl nodded amidst tears, thanking ji-ae profusely. "I'll be happy.. knowing that he is happy.." ji-ae embraced the girl before leaving the two of them to enjoy their moment together.

as she walked back through the cobblestone path, she breathed out a sigh and watched as the mist disappeared in the cold. she was glad to have helped a person in need, but she couldn't help feeling sad knowing that the girl couldn't see her brother again. her Ability allowed her to see more tragedies than she would like. gazing back at the rundown house, she made her way back to the dormitory. 

kymin spent the afternoon in the dance studio continuing her crime thriller as students filed in and out, warming up and practicing choreography. it was only until an hour later, at 4pm, that the dance instructor came in. kymin widened her eyes as she saw the girl who followed in.

minah. 


co-author's note:     heyyyy we've finally met some spirits other than younju and tiffany (named ones at least) ^^ I think I'm getting the feel back hehheh and I'm thinking of authoring an idolgroup applyfic /shot

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TheOnlyAce
#1
Chapter 19: Kymin is still adorable even when she's frustrated and I don't know why! and aw... Minah's so sweet (?). I mean, she offered to tutor Kymin after all. Remedial classes might be boring and all but let's look on the brighter side, shall we? at least your tutors are cute *wink wink*
Chaebyul and Sehun are cute in a weird way. I mean, come on! Who the hell kicks a girl's chair?! If he's interested on her that's a weird way of showing it... just stare at her and melt her heart away, okay, Oh Sehun? She'll like that more. Heck, she might even love it!
Jongin and Minah though... hitting on her, eh? Well, you have a long looong~ way to go, Mr. Kim. That's the Kwon Minah. It's funny how he's literally depending on Ji-ae for school materials. That's really admirable, Kim Jongin. It's interesting to see how Jongin tries to get her attention. Can't wait to see more of them! (But honestly that cocky grin would kill me on the spot!)
Eunji's interactions with his oppars are interesting too. I mean all of them are squeal-worthy. Yixing being that adorable prankster. And he's freaking excuse when he accompanied Eunji in her room. Also that "falling moment" with Zitao. You my friend, is blessed.
Ji-ae unnie saved a life! How awesome can she be?! I really like her motherly aura... makes me go all warm and fuzzy. Her meeting with Woobin though... so drama-like. It's so cute! I want to see more of them. Woobin's manly and rough appearance actually goes well on Ji-ae's motherly and gentle image. So cute~
The ending really made me laugh. Stalker Hyusu, coming right up!

Hahaha... thanks for the update author-nim!!! ^ ^
gloomycelery
#2
Chapter 19: Lol kymin will always be kymin. i'm surprised food on the table didn't get knocked over when she slammed into it. and lol jongin. trying to get minah's attention. and omg yixing, never imagined him to be a cheeky troublemaker like that. but he's adorable no matter what :) and sehun should stop bothering chaebyul. poor byul has to put up with the antics. but once they're together, they'll probably be such a cute bubble tea couple. and hyusu's stalkerish ways. i wonder how she'll interact with ryeowook. great chapter as always :)
NinaNaz
#3
Chapter 19: *coughs* *breathes*
MUST
CALM
SELF
lol xD

Hehe another great update from my new fav story xD (what to expect from The Master's Sun's fan xDD)
Haha Eunji & Yixing finally met and damnn Yixing is like freaking naughty for doing that to his sunbae XDD *slaps him*
woah~Jongin, are ya tryin' to flirt with Minah? DON'T.YOU.DARE. SHE'S.TAKEN. *laughs again*
I'm sorry if my comments are a bit creepy but I can't help it xD
I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATEEEEE xD
lovelyeoja
#4
Chapter 19: yOU UPDATED! oH MY gosh you just made my night! TTuTT
So almost all of the girls,plus the love interests and rivals, have the same class together. I reckon this is going to be so exciting in the future. eue kkk~ I lol-ed at Jongin who kept saying hi at Minah. I was kind of expecting that Minah would at least have a little reaction but then I realized that it is MINAH we're talking about x) Oh oh and don't forget the other maknae. Oh Sehun what is the purpose of bugging a studying girl on a class? Could you explain? or was it because you find her cute aheu >:) I swear those two maknaes... *shakes head*

okaaay who else--- Yixing, I didn't expect you to prank a sunbae. lmao. that really surprised me xD (chaebyul: omg what did my brother do to his sunbae???) and why involve innocent eunji? (Chaebyul: what did he do to Eunji?! waah eotteoke-- YIXING GE! *goes brother hunting*) and ji-ae's encounter with woobin! Asdfghjkl so drama-like me likey. *wiggles eyebrows* so ji ae, wanna be young do's eunsang?

Kymin's tutor though. The google translate part was really funny. But come one have faith on Kymin! She can do it, tutor-nim! :D However the best part among them was Hyusu... stalking Kim Ryeowook in the library. I cannot Hyusu-yah! (btw have you watched SJ's Mamacita? OMG RYEONG LOOKS ASDFGHJKADHJAKSHFKJAHJKF THERE HE IS SO UNF WITH BLACK HAIR AND HIS EYES OMG DIES.)

Thank you for updating authornims! <3
TheOnlyAce
#5
Chapter 18: YOU'VE UPDATED!!!! When I saw the update, I suddenly became hyper as hell!

So, we now have our bubble tea couples, huh? Do I sense some bubble tea dates soon? Hahaha... Sehun staring at Chaebyul can be a little weird... but come on, who would mind when the Oh Sehun is staring at you?! Chaebyul is one hell of a lucky girl. Thehunnie seems to be so interested at her... hm, can't wait for more.

Aw, Kymin... don't worry, things will go better! Don't lose hope! Study with your friends, I believe that's the best way. Besides, Minah is more approachable now, you can now ask for her help. She might not be the friendliest tutor out there but she's fine... I guess. And what a daebak way to meet her love interest. I am now anticipating an endless war between these two. That actually made them even more adorable. Oh, how I love a love-hate relationship~

And Ice Princess finally met his Hot Prince (I mean come on, he's hot as hell on his solo debut! I died, okay...) Their meeting, made me squeal and fangirl a lot! It's just too cute~ Taemin being that cute guy, admiring Minah. And gosh, their faces were so freaking close! Their opposite personalities gave a charm in their relationship. I can totally see Taemin bringing Minah closer and deeper to the world of dance. I also personally think that Taemin already have a little crush on her! xD I guess dancers turn him on. Anyway, the ending sure was creepy. I mean imagine suddenly running into a glaring ghost.

Author-nim, thousand thanks for your update! Really made my day! =)) Good luck with your new applyfic too, fighting! ^ ^
NinaNaz
#6
Chapter 18: OMG FINALLY YOU UPDATED I WAS WAITING FOR THIS! *turns caps lock off*

Of first of all, Kymin, I know how it feels to get low score in exams but you can improve it by studying with your friends! I know you can do it!!! Kymin hwaiting!!! Hehe Minah met her future bae o u o be nice to him arasso? O u O ㅋㅋㅋ how they met is so cute like omg I can't even say it in words xD And Chaebyul with Sehun, omg bubble tea couple xD So kawaiiii xD

Good luck on the next update and thank you for updating! ^^ I would love to join your another apply fic but I can't since I'm going to be a little bit busy this year T^T Hwaiting!
lovelyeoja
#7
Chapter 18: The update tho! Omg I didn't expect an update sooner because I know authornims are busy but I'm glad you did! :D Now unto the comments/fangirling/spazzing. I'll try my best to give a very helpful insight-- heck what am I even saying?
I somehow feel sad for Kymin since she's gotten a low score in her exams. I think it would be help her if on the next exams, the girls would do a group study. Nothing beats studying with friends, right? On the other side note, Kymin already met her love interest. I'm looking forward to their future world wars. eued

Now now for the best part... Minah met her THE ONE. Oh my gosh. Minah don't mess this up. Although I know you won't but don't push your shield away okay? As expected, how they met is really unique and asdfghjkl. And dancing is the key! May you two make good babies who dances well. <3 Taemin please purify Minah's insecurities. She needs it badly.

And last but not the least... Chaebyul's first stare competition with her love interest! *throws bubble tea pearls everywhere* Believe me I was holding my scream during the part when she was in the bubble tea store. I just knew they'll meet there. And I hope they'll meet again soon! :DD

Thank you for updating authornims! And to wolf, good luck at your apply fic! ouo You'll do well don't worry~
TheOnlyAce
#8
Chapter 17: Yay, update~
Okay, it's really adorable how all the girls are now doing breakfast and other things together. Minah is surely opening up! Continue the hard work, girls!
And the ranking... ooh~ Minah's score and rank were high but still not enough for her and her family. Well, things might work out soon for them, I hope... It's good that she always have Sulli beside her. And Lee Taemin is a possible classmate? ^_^ yehet!
Ji-ae unnie and Suho~ oh, those two! Just too adorable! Chaebyul and Eunji's friendship is very sweet too! I mean all that hair ruffling and those conversations, they are just too cute! I can also imagine Yixing being the sweet and supportive brother. About Hyusu, I guess he could make that library guy (Ryeowook) as her inspiration to make her grades higher. Sunbae would be proud of her! For Kymin... all of your friends and the girls are just there for you! Don't give up and just continue to work hard! She can even be lucky enough to receive some tutorial from Minah. Good luck to her! I am sure a lot would love to help her.

And congrats for adding all the characters already, author-nim! That must have been one hell of a job! The characters were a loooot~ Thanks for another great chappie and good luck with your new applyfic. I just know you'll do well ^ ^
eomonim
#9
wait for my ghost ouo XD
lovelyeoja
#10
Chapter 17: The first thing I noticed was Kwon Minah's grade. I mean come on 96%. Orz I coulldn't get that grade ever in my life. Claps at Minah's genius mind. Don't worry about your families opinion. If I know they will be all utter BS. So what if your unnie's higher? You're at par with her girl. Don't be disheartened! Aja fighting! PS and you have Taemin in your class... e u e aheuheuheu.
And JiAe unnie... Looks like you're in for some romance in your class. /grins widely/ I'm glad you did well unnie despite being stressed and all.
Eunji and Byullie! Odg this two are seriously adorable together <3 And whistles love interest on sight Chaebyul... Love interest on sight mayday.
Hyusu and Kymin don't give up! Maybe the other girls could help you with your subjects! And think positive baes! At least you're done with the exams. <3
Thank you for updating authornims! Fighting to the both of you!
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