Epliogue: Part 3

Take it to the Next Level

Epilogue: Part 3

 (Flashback)

Hana sat on a stool behind the counter of the shop with an open magazine propped up on the cash register before her.  Blowing a bubble with her gum, she flipped a page and listened to Taeil and Zico fiddle with something out in front of the store. 

It was technically her first day on the job, but she couldn’t deny it had been fun working with Taeil.  Hana knew he was going to abandon the store in a few hours and never return, but Taeil had taken the store so seriously.  He knew his business. 

Hana blew another bubble and pulled it back inside to pop it.  Taeil was actually kind of y in a hidden way.  He had an innocence about him that would have made her question why he was involved with The Block if she hadn’t already known his story. 

She jumped and almost fell off her stool when a blonde wearing a floral trench coat burst into the store.  Zico, Hanna recognized him from photos she had seen.

“Hana!” Taeil called as he burst in after Zico.  “Look after the store for me!”  They were out the back door before the words were out of his mouth. 

They’re in a bit of a hurry, Hana thought as she blew a bubble with her gum and reached for her cell phone.  She was confused until a pair of men in suits raced thru the store after them barely glancing her way.  Hana didn’t think that was part of the plan…

“Yeah?” The voice on the other end of the phone line surprised her.  She had forgotten she had called Mai.

“Umm.”  Hana wasn’t sure how to phrase it.  “There’s a bit of a problem.  Zico and Taeil just raced through the store with two men in suits on their heels.”

“I was hoping it would take them longer to find Zico,” Mai said on a sigh.  “Get back to base.  We may need to end up leaving in a hurry.”

“On my way.” Hana hopped off the stool.  Grabbing her bag she hurried out of the store. 

 

“After that, I was pretty busy trying to put things in place so the girls could make sure you boys didn’t get yourselves killed, while still looking for opportunities to switch cases,” Mai said.  “I moved the girls around and had them follow you so they could run interference if anything happened.  Luckily, Tien was already at the tile tournament.  Did you seriously think they would just let B-Bomb and P.O walk out with that money?  And that was only if they won.”

Zico shrugged.  “I knew they could handle themselves if there was any trouble.”

“Right.  Well, lucky for your boys, after the game ended, Tien tracked you guys all over the building to make sure you didn’t get caught.”

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BookWormNerd #1
Chapter 21: I would love to have a sequel to this one! I suggest to go into the back stories of each member of Block B of how they go into the gang ^^ mostly Taeil, since he's my bias :D
Fan_of_Karma
#2
Hello :) I'd like to inform you that your story has been nominated for Best Psychological Thriller at World of Literature 2014 Fanfiction Awards. You may find us here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/748372
Have a nice day! Karma~
MissChie
#3
Chapter 20: ^^... What should i say...
haha..
this story is so original... and it's just like reading an extended version of the short less than 4 minutes MV. LOL~~
i finished this story in just a few hours...
It's interesting and you are doing a great job making me laugh at certain scenes. Good Work!! The scene where Zico asks who was steering this 'thing' is the most hilarious. Judging at Kyung, i know exactly what u r trying to tell... Haha...

The chapters goes back and forth which confuse me a little (i mean the flashbacks and then the currents situation). But that was just a minor things to be bothered of.

I think you just did a good job~~~
Congratulation.
Sorry taking your space for this long comment haha...

Write more Block B's stories... It's my 'responsibility' to subscribe to 'em... huhu...
_Kyung
#4
Chapter 20: Wow, I really can't say how you did amazing on your writing!
The mv is really well transcribed. As Kyung is my ultime bias, I can't help to feel a little jealous thought, haha! But of course it was his fault the briefcases were exchanged, it's always his fault!

No but seriously, you really did an amazing work, I can't wait to read other stuff from you ^^
Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
ImpossibleBiasLists
#5
Chapter 20: This is a very well-written story, and I love that you played with the order of events. It was easy to keep track of, because of the MV, but I still enjoyed reading this a lot, and your interpretation of events is very clever. Heh, the girls' roles in this were also really good~ everything suddenly makes sense! (Lol, of course it was Kyung)

Thanks for writing this!
chocolakay #6
Chapter 20: What was up with guns, today, yes Ying. I know right? every guns appearing in nilili mambo is being ridiculous, they didn't throw bullets!

well, hungry clumsy kyung, chicken, and youngil is equals not good. yes zico, get angry to your bestie!

lan and jaehyo is veeeery alike. how can I not shipping them instantly!

well, i love this story! and the ending needs a sequel! i demand a sequel!
ShinhwaStar #7
You story is gread! Good work, keep up with it!
Tierbanre
#8
Chapter 6: So, I'll try to write this in english, but it's kinda difficult for me xD
Anyway, I can understand the whole text, but I can't write a simple comment, yeah.

I just think this story is really awesome, I had to stop reading because I need to sleep, but ''dude'', I love it... so good.

'A thought stuck him and he frowned. He looked from B-Bomb sitting with him at the table to Jaehyo at the stove to P.O, Taeil, and U-Kwon standing at the stairs. If the six of them were all down here… “Who’s steering this thing?” He asked, harshly cutting off Jaehyo’s rant. “Please don’t tell me you gave Kyung the wheel.”' I laughted so hard.

Y sí, soy de España, un saludo :3
chocolakay #9
Chapter 8: well, the last word is the key. whoops. hahahaha.....

this is my favorite part of the mv, and in this fic too.