1 Hour Before MoT

Take it to the Next Level

CHAPTER TEN

1 Hour Before MoT

Vietnam

Jaehyo and Kyung had taken the Western exit that led out to a residential area.  They ran down the nearly empty street but about two blocks away they decided it was safe enough to slow down. 

Kyung looked over his shoulder.  “I don’t think we’re being followed,” he said.  “You think U-Kwon’s alright?”

“He’ll be fine,” Jaehyo responded.  He grabbed the inside edge of his open shirt and shook it.  The weather wasn’t too hot, but all the running had made him sweat. 

“Do you think we’ll be okay?” Kyung asked.  “We’re the ones with the cases.  That means they’ll be coming after us right?”

“We’ll be fine,” Jaehyo said, shortly.  “As long as you keep moving your feet instead of your mouth.”

They continued in silence for a moment as their eyes searched their surroundings keeping an eye out for trouble.

“We’re not going to end up in jail again are we?”  Kyung asked, unable to keep silent with his uneasy heart.

“No,” Jaehyo answered firmly.  “Yes, this job is going just as bad as the last Vietnam job, but we are not going to end up in jail again waiting for Zico to come save us.  No way am I doing that again.”

“I was so sure this job couldn’t possibly go as bad as the last one…”

“Vietnam is definitely not someplace we should consider coming to again.”

 

While Jaehyo and Kyung take the West Exit

Zico and B-Bomb had taken the Northern exit that led out into the shopping district.  A block away, they turned a corner at a full on sprint. 

Zico mentally shook himself.  So much for this job going better than the last one.  In the middle of the crowded street, Zico signaled for B-Bomb to slow down.  When he didn’t, Zico had to physically stop him.

“Dude, what’s wrong with you?  Are you paying attention?” Zico asked, hands full of B-Bomb’s shirt. 

“Sorry,” B-Bomb said, looking sheepish.  “I spaced out for a second.”

Zico let him go.  He knew exactly what B-Bomb had been thinking about.  Women were the bane of man’s existence. 

“Are we in the clear?” B-Bomb asked.  He looked behind them searching the crowd for anyone following them. 

“I think we’re good, but let’s play it safe,” Zico said.  “Blend, but keep your mind focused.  The last thing we need right now is to be found and separated.  Let’s get out of here before something else wrong happens.”

They blended into the crowd, walking now instead of running.  They kept an eye behind them and one on each other. 

 

While Zico and B-Bomb take the North Exit

U-Kwon didn’t even bother running as he exited the complex from the South.  His ribs hurt so bad he wasn’t even sure he would be able to.  He lifted a hand and rubbed at his bloody lip while he checked his teeth with his tongue.  They all seemed to be there, but he wasn’t quite sure about the rest of him.  He ached all over.

Not only had he gotten his kicked, but he had been saved by a chick.  Why had he forgotten to load his gun?  It was beyond lucky that the other guy’s gun had been empty as well.  Had he spent all the bullets already? But he had looked really confused.  Whatever the reason, they had been quick to change gears to beating him up instead of shooting him. 

Then the girl had come out of nowhere.  Sticking her nose where it didn’t belong.  U-Kwon totally could have handled those guys without her help.  But he had to admire her skills.  She had quickly and efficiently laid the guys out unconscious.  Of course it had helped that she had had the element of surprise.  And then she had disappeared as if she had never been there.  It would have been better if she had never been there at all.

As U-Kwon neared the meeting point, he decided he would pretend she hadn’t been there.  It wasn’t like he was actually going to admit that he had had his saved by a chick.  He sighed.  This job was looking more and more like the last time they were in Vietnam.  If the crew hadn’t been able to successfully apprehend the prize, U-Kwon didn’t want to be there to see Zico flip out on everyone. 

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BookWormNerd #1
Chapter 21: I would love to have a sequel to this one! I suggest to go into the back stories of each member of Block B of how they go into the gang ^^ mostly Taeil, since he's my bias :D
Fan_of_Karma
#2
Hello :) I'd like to inform you that your story has been nominated for Best Psychological Thriller at World of Literature 2014 Fanfiction Awards. You may find us here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/748372
Have a nice day! Karma~
MissChie
#3
Chapter 20: ^^... What should i say...
haha..
this story is so original... and it's just like reading an extended version of the short less than 4 minutes MV. LOL~~
i finished this story in just a few hours...
It's interesting and you are doing a great job making me laugh at certain scenes. Good Work!! The scene where Zico asks who was steering this 'thing' is the most hilarious. Judging at Kyung, i know exactly what u r trying to tell... Haha...

The chapters goes back and forth which confuse me a little (i mean the flashbacks and then the currents situation). But that was just a minor things to be bothered of.

I think you just did a good job~~~
Congratulation.
Sorry taking your space for this long comment haha...

Write more Block B's stories... It's my 'responsibility' to subscribe to 'em... huhu...
_Kyung
#4
Chapter 20: Wow, I really can't say how you did amazing on your writing!
The mv is really well transcribed. As Kyung is my ultime bias, I can't help to feel a little jealous thought, haha! But of course it was his fault the briefcases were exchanged, it's always his fault!

No but seriously, you really did an amazing work, I can't wait to read other stuff from you ^^
Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
ImpossibleBiasLists
#5
Chapter 20: This is a very well-written story, and I love that you played with the order of events. It was easy to keep track of, because of the MV, but I still enjoyed reading this a lot, and your interpretation of events is very clever. Heh, the girls' roles in this were also really good~ everything suddenly makes sense! (Lol, of course it was Kyung)

Thanks for writing this!
chocolakay #6
Chapter 20: What was up with guns, today, yes Ying. I know right? every guns appearing in nilili mambo is being ridiculous, they didn't throw bullets!

well, hungry clumsy kyung, chicken, and youngil is equals not good. yes zico, get angry to your bestie!

lan and jaehyo is veeeery alike. how can I not shipping them instantly!

well, i love this story! and the ending needs a sequel! i demand a sequel!
ShinhwaStar #7
You story is gread! Good work, keep up with it!
Tierbanre
#8
Chapter 6: So, I'll try to write this in english, but it's kinda difficult for me xD
Anyway, I can understand the whole text, but I can't write a simple comment, yeah.

I just think this story is really awesome, I had to stop reading because I need to sleep, but ''dude'', I love it... so good.

'A thought stuck him and he frowned. He looked from B-Bomb sitting with him at the table to Jaehyo at the stove to P.O, Taeil, and U-Kwon standing at the stairs. If the six of them were all down here… “Who’s steering this thing?” He asked, harshly cutting off Jaehyo’s rant. “Please don’t tell me you gave Kyung the wheel.”' I laughted so hard.

Y sí, soy de España, un saludo :3
chocolakay #9
Chapter 8: well, the last word is the key. whoops. hahahaha.....

this is my favorite part of the mv, and in this fic too.