Take it to the Next Level

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Ever wondered what Block B was doing in Vietnam of all places?  Come check it out; I’ve got the answer right here.

I’ve also got the answer as to why they are never going back again.

 

Turns out it was all a dare.  Zico, leader of the notorious gang Block B, accepted the challenge to return to Vietnam for a job.  The goal: a pair of large diamonds recently obtained by the biggest crime lord of Southeast Asia: P. D. Tran. 

The goal itself offered no challenge for Zico and his top team of experts.  But that did not take into account that all seven of them were wanted men in Vietnam with a hefty price on their heads. 

Despite the fact that their last job in Vietnam did not quite go as planned (major understatement), they are ready to take it on again.  The threat is bigger; the prize is larger; the danger is greater; the reward turns out to be more than they ever bargained for. 

 

Come check out what really happened in Vietnam. 

Block B is gonna take it to the next level.

Foreword

Zico took off down the hall.  The briefcase containing the two diamonds was tucked securely under one arm.  With an energetic energy he only got from the adrenaline rush of a top-scale heist, he raced downstairs and around the corner. 

Finally, he arrived at the store front of the shop his business man, Taeil was running.  B with excitement, Zico rushed up to the entrance of the store and held out the briefcase for Taeil to see. 

Taeil did a double take.  “You got it?!”

“What did you expect?” Zico said with a smirk.  “Want to see them?”

“You know it,” Taeil eagerly agreed.  He rubbed his hands together as Zico placed the case on the counter of the shop and flipped the latches that kept the case closed. 

Zico readied to lift the lid of the case but paused and gazed at Taeil.  “Are you sure you’re ready for this?”

“Dude, just open it.”

Zico grinned and returned his gaze to the case.  “Nillili mambo,” he said and tugged up on the lid.

 

Entry for wishful's 'Give Me a Year' Writing Contest. (Deadline Jan. 1, 2013)
Prompt: Block B's Nillili Mambo music video

Lovely Reviews:                            Blue Bear Reviews - review by Me0wxx_:  Score (74/100) - added 1/18/14
Je T'aime: A Review Shop - review by heavenlycoffee: Score (95/100?) - added 1/20/14
The Nerdy Review Shop - review by sulfur: Score N/A - added 2/22/14
The Library - review by -Tigress-: 83/100 - aded 2/22/14
 

Author's Note:  Thank you for checking out my story!  I love constructive criticism so please don't hesitate to let me know what you think and how I can improve my writing.  Thank you!

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BookWormNerd #1
Chapter 21: I would love to have a sequel to this one! I suggest to go into the back stories of each member of Block B of how they go into the gang ^^ mostly Taeil, since he's my bias :D
Fan_of_Karma #2
Hello :) I'd like to inform you that your story has been nominated for Best Psychological Thriller at World of Literature 2014 Fanfiction Awards. You may find us here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/748372
Have a nice day! Karma~
MissChie #3
Chapter 20: ^^... What should i say...
haha..
this story is so original... and it's just like reading an extended version of the short less than 4 minutes MV. LOL~~
i finished this story in just a few hours...
It's interesting and you are doing a great job making me laugh at certain scenes. Good Work!! The scene where Zico asks who was steering this 'thing' is the most hilarious. Judging at Kyung, i know exactly what u r trying to tell... Haha...

The chapters goes back and forth which confuse me a little (i mean the flashbacks and then the currents situation). But that was just a minor things to be bothered of.

I think you just did a good job~~~
Congratulation.
Sorry taking your space for this long comment haha...

Write more Block B's stories... It's my 'responsibility' to subscribe to 'em... huhu...
_Kyung #4
Chapter 20: Wow, I really can't say how you did amazing on your writing!
The mv is really well transcribed. As Kyung is my ultime bias, I can't help to feel a little jealous thought, haha! But of course it was his fault the briefcases were exchanged, it's always his fault!

No but seriously, you really did an amazing work, I can't wait to read other stuff from you ^^
Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
ImpossibleBiasLists #5
Chapter 20: This is a very well-written story, and I love that you played with the order of events. It was easy to keep track of, because of the MV, but I still enjoyed reading this a lot, and your interpretation of events is very clever. Heh, the girls' roles in this were also really good~ everything suddenly makes sense! (Lol, of course it was Kyung)

Thanks for writing this!
chocolakay #6
Chapter 20: What was up with guns, today, yes Ying. I know right? every guns appearing in nilili mambo is being ridiculous, they didn't throw bullets!

well, hungry clumsy kyung, chicken, and youngil is equals not good. yes zico, get angry to your bestie!

lan and jaehyo is veeeery alike. how can I not shipping them instantly!

well, i love this story! and the ending needs a sequel! i demand a sequel!
ShinhwaStar #7
You story is gread! Good work, keep up with it!
Tierbanre #8
Chapter 6: So, I'll try to write this in english, but it's kinda difficult for me xD
Anyway, I can understand the whole text, but I can't write a simple comment, yeah.

I just think this story is really awesome, I had to stop reading because I need to sleep, but ''dude'', I love it... so good.

'A thought stuck him and he frowned. He looked from B-Bomb sitting with him at the table to Jaehyo at the stove to P.O, Taeil, and U-Kwon standing at the stairs. If the six of them were all down here… “Who’s steering this thing?” He asked, harshly cutting off Jaehyo’s rant. “Please don’t tell me you gave Kyung the wheel.”' I laughted so hard.

Y sí, soy de España, un saludo :3
chocolakay #9
Chapter 8: well, the last word is the key. whoops. hahahaha.....

this is my favorite part of the mv, and in this fic too.
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