Agyrophobia

Description

Would you make fun of a person who had a fear that didn’t seem ‘normal’?

Foreword

    What normal people thought of as a solid gray ground with white lines that led their vehicles to their destination was a cold scarlet death trap for Minseok. The aching pulse that pounded through his petite body whenever he stepped near the fresh gravel was unbearable for him to deal with. The memories come flooding back when he gets too close, the heart shattering memories. It hadn’t always been like that, his fear of crossing the street, it was a tragic rainy day that still haunts him, the day he’d lost his best friend.

 

 Minseok and Luhan were childhood best friends. The type of best friends that would tell each other everything, the type of friends that would stick up for one another if the other was being teased, the type of friends who knew they’d be best friends until the day they die.


Who knew the death part would come so soon? At Least for one of them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Just a small oneshot I made for creative writing class. I just thought i should share it.-

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Dohyeonju
#1
Chapter 2: i found the first chap is better. I knew Minseok would die because i imagined two things. either, he crossed with closed eyes and no Luhan in front of him or he died. So, he died. I was shocked and at the same i knew it. This is very terrifying and intelligent plot that you have. Brilliant, obviously brilliant! I like your work. but, i didnt read full of the chapter two, i just read the ending, and i think i chose the first one. :) one upvote from me dear
Silverwook21
#2
somehow i think this is better than minseok living the life on his own.. atleast xiuhan could reunite :'>
Shiemilafia
#3
Chapter 1: Aww.. I need a tissue ;u; ♡
BababaBoazi
#4
Chapter 1: That...or it can be all angsty and be like Xiumin's guilt caused him to commit suicide and be on the other side with Luhan. But eh, I'd still think it's fluffy because I'm Xiuhan obsessed like that. :))
BababaBoazi
#5
Chapter 1: Can't help to think that Luhan maybe actually came back since it's Minseok's time. It's very sweet, in a macabre-ish way. But the fangirl in me insists that everything that happened was meant-to-be and is in fact VERY fluffy. ; u ;
woo4evas #6
Chapter 1: ...i hav no words....that was the saddest, sweetest, most amazing story ever written...
TheBirdOfHermes
#7
Chapter 1: O.o i-i-i don't even know what to say..... Poor Xiuhan