Deadly Storm Lightning Thunder

Description

Junmyeon needs a deadly storm and lightning thunder to catch and strike his head, so that he will come to Jongin.

 

Foreword

author'snote:

This will be my very first KaiHo I've written so I don't know if this will be good.

Based on Adhitia Sofyan's Deadly Storm Lightning Thunder, which I always listen to nowadays. I wanted to give this fic a different title, but well... I think that the song title suits the plot the most.

Just search it on YouTube if you want to hear the song. ;3

And I don't think this story will be beta-ed by anybody. My beta is really busy and I don't want to bother her with asking to beta my fic, so... I just want to warn you since English is not my native language, there will be a lot, I mean, A LOT of typos and grammatical errors.

I hope you will enjoy this one, though.

Subscribe, comment, and upvote will be really appreciated. Thanks! :3

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Evysonesuho #1
Chapter 1: I hate Kris here, yes he understand what he has done wrong, but still. i can't forgive him for that, also if i was yixing i would be the crap out of kris

I really really enjoyed Kai's character, perfect! ^-^
exzhile #2
Chapter 1: Waaaaaahhh. This is epic!
zaraaki #3
Chapter 1: hmmmmmm....yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss~~~!!!
MissQwin #4
Chapter 1: Love this story soooooo much.
I've never read a story like this before about SuKai/ KaiHo
So glad that I found SuKai story like this from you :)

Btw, I hate how Junmyeon being so dumb just for Yifan. Pity Jongin.
But I am so happy at the last part. So sweet.

Thus, I really hope that you can make a sequel for this story authornim.

But what ever it is, is so AWESOME !

Goodjob authornim :)
milkypop #5
Chapter 1: OMG WHY 。：゜(；´∩｀；)゜：。。：゜(；´∩｀；)゜：。
i've read ur story 'bout broken SuKai before
and now its like the reversal for that one xD
if there any award for drama author
i'll vote for u mel, u knew how to write drama like the real drama, there was almost no bad person in every story of yours,
every character have their own rights to do whatever they do in the story, just like this one,
from Lay pov its wrong for junmyun to snatched Yifan away BUT its not only Junmyun's fault because there was a chance to him to do that, and Yifan is not helping at all with the way he give Junmyun his attention.
in the end, Jongin do his role really well,
all he need to do is caring and waiting for Junmyun to realized that he is blinded by his love for Yifan then find new love and its Jongin,
thats my baby Jonginnie for u all, such a cute and caring creature in the world, well done Jonginnie
oh i talked too much sorry get carried away >_<
somarshies #6
I love this! It's so lovely
eyqa_blurpyBaro #7
Chapter 1: AWEEEEEE!!!!! i really loved this.. good job author-sshi! u awesome!
jasminesighs #8
Chapter 1: WAAAAAAH
So freaking good...u r amazing!!
ItsyBitsy_Orchid #9
Chapter 1: Oh my god. Oh my god. You are the best author nim. I love this storyvery much. Kai and Suho. You gave me that shipping feel I am missing agaIn. Oohh. You don't know how much I love KrisHo and Krislay. My god. Thank you for writing SuKai. Please write some SuLaykai. I really love your writing. It makes me feel too real and too ... I don't know. I almost cried for Jong in. <3
haeri0610 #10
Chapter 1: Huftt.. Finally they're together in the end.

Poor Myoenie T_T, but he has Kai now.. Choha :)
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