Chapter 6

There this little secret (unfinish story)
It's evening and it is time for the 6 nerds to walk back home.They were strolling down the neighbourhood playing around.Tgey didnt know that they were being followed by 6 unknown people.The 6 nerds were playing around throwing water at each other.KRING KRING!!!! Sound of ringging phone split in through the quietness.Suho took out his phone and punch in the answer button "Dubusaeyo??"Suho answer "Ahh arraso we will be there soon annyeong"Suho cut the line "Hyung who is it??"Kyungsoo asked "My mum called and told me that she want us to be back quickly,come on"Suho replied "Hyung i think someone is following us"Tao shivered and look at the back "Nonsense come on Tao we need to be hurry"Luhan dragged Tao and run towards Suho's house -Unknown pov- "Come on we need to go"said the taller guy among the rest "Ya....can we go eat??I am hungry"Said the 2nd tallest "Me toooo......let's go eat"Said the chubby cheeks "Thuthi let'th go eat thuthi"said the poker face guy "It's sushi not thuthi"said the innocent boy "ya ya ya whatever hyung"said the poker face guy "Haish ppali i am hungry!!!"said the 2nd youngest amng them

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I am sooooo sorry for the late update *bows continously* forgive me*not so cute puppy eyes* anyway here's the short(?) update and i accept negative and positive comment from you guys and i hope you guys will dupport my newest fanfics which is Tangled in cords cords starring Zelo(BAP) Ilhoon(BTOB) and Gond Da Eun(ocs) (Ia m using ma fone and u guys just copy and paste okays???)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/581397/tangled-in-cords-coral-highschool-romance-zelo-bap-btob-ilhoon-lightangst
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Channie3xo
#1
Chapter 6: Sehun's lisp in a fic never ends to amuse me xD
thethumpthump
#2
Chapter 8: okayyy i sooooooo in love with ur plot/idea. but i dont know maybe u can detail each scene a little bit instead of rushing with the plot. i think it gonna make ur story more interesting and less predictable i guess. but whatever it is, this is just my opinion as a reader. keep in mind, i love the idea about kyungie,baekkie,suho as a gangster lol
ThisMomentWhen
#3
Chapter 7: You're writing is quite messy and your tenses are off most of the time, but I can't help loving this story nevertheless (:
Syana1
#4
Chapter 7: Omo,Kris is super cool and evil(well he is kingka,right?) anyway i think it will be more awesome if the fight scene more detailed???I love them so i want to watch them in cool scene...bye,and thanks
darlingz #5
Chapter 7: Sites where you found this EXO news ?
Syana1
#6
Chapter 6: that to short.....but i understand so just take your time k?Good luck with other fic to...
gertrxde #7
Chapter 6: Please updateee
Syana1
#8
Chapter 5: Waaaah I love it...but why did it show this story have been complete???It`s not complete yet,right?
BlackRabbit21 #9
Chapter 4: Love the update! Finally admit they like them! *fangirling* I just live nerds so much! Can't wait for the next update! ^^