SNSD

There this little secret (unfinish story)
-After school-

The Anvil boys were walking towards their Snsd Noona's mansion.Oh i almost forget Snsd were ranked 1st on the girls category for the mostfearful and powerful gangster on the entire earth.And also Yoona,Yuri and Soohyun are Suho's stepsisters.

"So how about this who reach at the mansion last will treat us food for 3days"suggest Chen

"I'm in"said Beakhyun,Tao and Suho

"How about you two??"asked Chen

"Well i'm in how about you D.O??"asked Luhan

"Before i say 'im in' let me take out my money first"said D.O while taking out his money.

The rest of the boys laughed out loud on D.O action"Hyung you're funny"said Tao

"I'm serious i will lose one"said D.O

"Whatever D.O we will start the race in 3,2,1"said suho.The 5 boys were leading but D.O pace became slower and slower.

~SNSD mansion~

"Where are they"said sunny

"Be patience Sunny"said Yoona

"They're here.....so who won??"asked Hyohyeon

"Baekhyun"breatheless Tao

"So D.O you lost......again"said Taeyeon"as usual"said D.O

"So what is the punishment this time??"the eager sunny asked.

"D.O need to treat us food for 3 days"said Luhan."what i want to join too pwease Suho"said Sunny while using her irrestible aegyo

"You're in"said Suho"Yesh..."Sunny fist up in the air.

"So why do you guys call us for??"asked Baekhyun "Actually we want to hang out with you guys"said Yuri"By the way where'e the rest???"asked Baekhyun

"Shopping right??"Chen guessed. "Yup you're right Chen"said Yoona."Ley's play XBOX noona"said Tao. "Let's go"said Sunny while running towards the playing area along with Tao

"so who want to play the Zombie thingy??"asked Chen. "I'm in how about you guys??"said Yoona and Hyohyeon. "I'm in"said D.O "I'm not playing I'm going to practice in the gym"said Suho."Me too im gping to the gym"said Luhan and Baekhyun."Oh ok ley's go"said Yoona

After playing games and practicing in gym the AnVil member are now getting ready to going back home. "Bye Noonas"said the Anvil member while waving at them. "Bye!!!"said the 5 SNSD members

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Channie3xo
#1
Chapter 6: Sehun's lisp in a fic never ends to amuse me xD
thethumpthump
#2
Chapter 8: okayyy i sooooooo in love with ur plot/idea. but i dont know maybe u can detail each scene a little bit instead of rushing with the plot. i think it gonna make ur story more interesting and less predictable i guess. but whatever it is, this is just my opinion as a reader. keep in mind, i love the idea about kyungie,baekkie,suho as a gangster lol
ThisMomentWhen
#3
Chapter 7: You're writing is quite messy and your tenses are off most of the time, but I can't help loving this story nevertheless (:
Syana1
#4
Chapter 7: Omo,Kris is super cool and evil(well he is kingka,right?) anyway i think it will be more awesome if the fight scene more detailed???I love them so i want to watch them in cool scene...bye,and thanks
darlingz #5
Chapter 7: Sites where you found this EXO news ?
Syana1
#6
Chapter 6: that to short.....but i understand so just take your time k?Good luck with other fic to...
gertrxde #7
Chapter 6: Please updateee
Syana1
#8
Chapter 5: Waaaah I love it...but why did it show this story have been complete???It`s not complete yet,right?
BlackRabbit21 #9
Chapter 4: Love the update! Finally admit they like them! *fangirling* I just live nerds so much! Can't wait for the next update! ^^