Title: 10/10

The title is short and nice, I really like it.

Appearance: 5/5

I love everything, too speechless.

Foreword & Description: 7/10

The foreword doesn't give out much, it's a bit too short but it's still good. But, I think you should work on the format

Spelling/Grammar: 8/10

A few slips here and there, but still acceptable

Plot: 18/20

The plot is unique, i can tell you that but it's a bit off too.

Characters: 13/15

The characters were unique but I sort of dislike the fact, well that's how I portray Luhan in your story

as girly -ish? It's okay but a little bit awkward.

Flow: 9/10 

The flow is quite good^^

Writing Style: 10/10

I loved the writing style, it was great.

Enjoyment: 9/10

I enjoyed it since it has my favourite ship

Total: 89/100

Reviewed by summerskye

Well, the strictness level you requested for is 4 so...this is what I think with that strictness level