Title: 6/10

The title is short, so taht's good. But I think it's a bit inconsiderate in a way because what if some poeple doesn't know what Bane means? I did a survey and about half of my friends in my school doesn't really know what Bane means.

Appearance: 2/5

To be honest, I think the poster is rather plain and the title can't be seen. Well, it was hard for me to spot it. It clashes with the background

Foreword & Description: 10/10

It was very interesting it made me want to read your story so two thumbs up.

Spelling/Grammar: 10/10

Your grammar was spot on. and your vocabulary, it's just divine.

Plot: 19/20

i loved the plot.

Characters: 14/15

The characters were described very well, I'm impressed, but there were very little descriptions about their appearance.

Flow: 8/10 

I can't say much about the flow since you only have three chapters.

Writing Style: 10/10

I loved the writing style throughout the entire story.

Enjoyment: 9/10

One of the greatest thing I have read.

Total: 88/100

Reviewed by summerskye

This is based on my pov, so...yeah