Bonus Chapter - Daesung 3 months

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Daesung P.O.V

Ah, my tummy is so heavy. Who would know it was so difficult to raise a child? I really respect my mother.

- Daesung do you want anything? You must be thirsty. I'll get you something to drink, what would be better? Water, juice, coca? Do you want to eat something too? - As always Jiyoung was the loudest member. Well, he was honestly happy for me, what could I do? 

- I'll have some juice, I am not hungry at all. When are Youngbae and Seungri coming? They are really late, you know. - He hushed to get me some juice, he was kind of cute, always trying his best to help me. When Seunghyun was gone, he sleept at my house so he could be sure I wouldn't try anything dangerous. I was never hungry because he would cook the whole day, just to feed me. Such a cutie! 

- Here, for my dear Daesungie. - He brought me strawberry's juice. He was eating a strawberry. I stared at the strawberry that was going into his mouth, his lips touched the strawberry softly, his tongue came out to play with it while he was holding it, the red base of the strawberry was gently by him, I opened my own mouth at expectation, he took a bite, the red flesh was suddenly being chewed, and swallowed, he blushed while looking at me, his tongue was playing between his own lips, like it was teasing me, tempting me, calling me, asking me to.....YAH! Stop it! What the hell are you thinking Daesung? Straight your mind. Have you gone nuts? You are pregnant. You have Seunghyu

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ddeecullen
#1
Chapter 21: Author-nim ! oh god !! what are you trying to do ? is it will be 'gdae' at the last ? im so sad :(( hahaha ^^' btw, what a beautiful story. thumbs up >< thanks author-nim :))
KPVIP26
#2
Chapter 13: Its Baeri hun and yes, the feels!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
KPVIP26
#3
Chapter 10: OMONA!!! Daesungie, flex those muscles y!!! (fan-girls over my BB bias)

Writer-nim, the doctor won't kill u for that, if u let him know how u are feeling he will give u medicine for it. My Dongsaeng has it too and she gets iron pills to help with the weakness and dizziness, so make sure u tell your doctor, arasso?
KPVIP26
#4
Chapter 3: Psy = Park Jae sang
JaeYong_TY #5
Chapter 21: pleaaaseeee update soon

btw
FIRST BIGBANG FANFIIICCC

im getting into bigbang now its really great
choidae
#6
Chapter 21: omg!!love this chapter!
please update soon <3
Kang_Jiyong #7
Chapter 21: Dae look so cool and scary at the same time.....i love it......
bananakun
#8
Chapter 19: Hello~~I feel bored and re-reading your story and want to give some suggestion. Feel free to ignore it if you want~ uvu

It will the best if you point some of Se7en past. I think reader should know more about se7en in the past and tell us more about Dongwook. Maybe he's different from this se7en person. And from how you write in the story, I can't find a connection between Dongwook and se7en. So I think you need to reveal something concerning se7en.

About the pairing. I think it's better if you get along with GDae, Baeri, and Top7en. I guess it's not that bad idea make baeri together. I'm happy whoever Dae ended up with. If you make Dae with GD I think it's not that bad tho. Seeing how their story in the past make it legit enough for they to be together. Well the pairing can change depends how the story goes to. Still it's your story so it's all up to you. You can even make Se7en end up with Daesung if you want lololol. Kidding xDD

About the Gri tag, I think you should erase it. I don't think Ri can ended up together with Jiyong after how you make him being together with Youngbae and how it looks so hawt for me lololol. I love both Gri and Baeri, but I love Baeri more than it. If you make a plot twist where you make Ri together with Ji, it will hurt Bae so much. So please dooooonnnn't!!! Just please let him happy being together with Ri ;;A;;

Oh dear I'm talking so freaking long. Sorry for trashing your comment box lolol. Not sure if it can help you. But I hope it will help even just a little.
I'll wait for the next chapter no matter how long it make me to wait it. I love your story 'v')v
I hope you haven't abandoned it yet, *dooooonnn't!!!!!*