Chapter 11: what is it ? the curiosity take over my body ><

Chapter 11: the only way out is.....? what? I am going to find out in next chapter!!

Chapter 9: This sorta reminds me of sword art online lol

Chapter 9: sorry I don't have anythign grand to comment except thank you SOOOO much once again for updating and I just love reading your story because it's so different without being difficult to read and it's funny with just enough sad stuff to make it deep as well and yeah... thanks :) and I love how stuff just appears when Bae imagined it, MAN how much would I love having that feature in life!!! gah it's so interesting can't wait to read what happens next >_<

Chapter 9: The branch hitting him in his privates had me laughing lol I'm still curious to find out why they are playing a game instead of resting in peace and what will happen as they advance in the game.

Chapter 8: thank you for updating!!!!! I have no idea why but whenever I read this story I start feeling really hypo and fantasizing about rainbows and unicorns prancing across the ceiling lol >_< anyway, I love reading this, it's like, cold rainbow slushies in the middle of summer. (if that makes any sense at all) thank you so much for not deleting it, I've re-read it about four times now >_< SO glad ToDae are friends :D :D

Chapter 6: ok so apart from the swearing, I REALLY like this story!!! it's just so weird I love it so fascinating!! :D please don't let Dae and TOP actually turn out gay though. but can't wait to read more it's so just so different and cool I love it :D

hehe i like this story ^^

Chapter 6: can't believe no one commented this. love it so far..keep it up