Kwonderella

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The sun was bright as always, the water was clean as always and Jiyoung was being abused as always.

- Wake up! Do you think we are your servants? Look at this. What a mess! You call this clean? I'll hit you until you learn what clean means. - A slap, a kick, another slap, another kick. And so the day started again. Everyday was the same day on Jiyoung's life.

Clean, cook, and clean again. That was his routine. Nothing ever changed, oh no! It changed, now that he was older he was receiving more slaps and kicks. And when visitors came, he moved to the basement. "Its your that is dirty!" he thought silently while being beat up. He grabbed the panela and went out again to wash it with sand, the only thing that could transform all that black storm of dust into something acceptable. Those ers were messing with him, the panela was cleaner that ever. How was he supposed to let it cleaner? Anyway he scrubbed it again and again. And went to show it to his stepbrothers.

- Oh! See! You can do it if you really want to. I can see even my reflex now. You didn't forget what day is today right? You need to iron out suits, so then we can go to the audition. We are going to YG, meanwhile you will stay here for the rest of your life. Isn't life fair? "Yes, I hope you fail. Because no way in hell they will accept a fagot like you mother er!" Jiyoung thought silently again, it was his escape golt nowadays.

- Uhmm. - he answered in reality. And

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ddeecullen
#1
Chapter 11: what is it ? the curiosity take over my body ><
BBVIP008
#2
Chapter 11: the only way out is.....? what? I am going to find out in next chapter!!
Gabahbahbleh01
#3
Chapter 9: This sorta reminds me of sword art online lol
loyal4ygfamily5ever #4
Chapter 9: sorry I don't have anythign grand to comment except thank you SOOOO much once again for updating and I just love reading your story because it's so different without being difficult to read and it's funny with just enough sad stuff to make it deep as well and yeah... thanks :) and I love how stuff just appears when Bae imagined it, MAN how much would I love having that feature in life!!! gah it's so interesting can't wait to read what happens next >_<
IndigoGrey #5
Chapter 9: The branch hitting him in his privates had me laughing lol I'm still curious to find out why they are playing a game instead of resting in peace and what will happen as they advance in the game.
loyal4ygfamily5ever #6
Chapter 8: thank you for updating!!!!! I have no idea why but whenever I read this story I start feeling really hypo and fantasizing about rainbows and unicorns prancing across the ceiling lol >_< anyway, I love reading this, it's like, cold rainbow slushies in the middle of summer. (if that makes any sense at all) thank you so much for not deleting it, I've re-read it about four times now >_< SO glad ToDae are friends :D :D
loyal4ygfamily5ever #7
Chapter 6: ok so apart from the swearing, I REALLY like this story!!! it's just so weird I love it so fascinating!! :D please don't let Dae and TOP actually turn out gay though. but can't wait to read more it's so just so different and cool I love it :D
pikachuryu
#8
hehe i like this story ^^
xtavista #9
Chapter 6: can't believe no one commented this. love it so far..keep it up