Tears and Strawberries

By my side
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Daesung P.O. V

HE SPAT ON ME! I wanted to hit him right there, but I couldn't. "We want him to cooperate" I told myself. I felt someone cleaning my face and when I looked at my side, Jiyoung was cleaning me with his scarf. He smiled at me and I at him almost forgetting that Seunghyun was less than 60cm away from my face. I sighed and went back to business. Jiyoung was staring at seunghyun like a lion looks for its prey. I better get him, away from Jiyoung. He was sweet with me, but that's it. No one knew the kind Jiyoung I know. That Jiyoung is exclusively mine, since we were kids. He would beat the crap out of the low-life gangsters and turn at me with blood on his face smiling at me. Like he was two different people. That smile, I don't want it to go away, never. But again, Seunghyun is Joo Eun's father. How am I supposed to ignore that? Plus, should I tell him our baby its alive? If I do, everything will change. If he decides to stay by my side, what about Jiyoung? I can't just throw him away.

- Seunghyun, I will ask you again. Maybe you think that because of our past relationship, I won't cause any damage to you, but you're wrong. If you just answer the questions everything - I was cut off.

- HELL NO! Do you think I'll just tell you whatever you want so then you can kill my husband because you're jealous? AS IF! You and I are over, don't try to - I cut him off. -

And what makes you think, I am jealous? Honestly, you don't deserve all the hard work Seungri had to do. Plus, I could have killed your boyfriend and you would never know. So, with whose permission you can cut me off when I talk? Do you need me to drawn for you to understand? Its not that hard, you're the prey, I'm the hunter. See? Don't lie to yourself because you know Ican never let you go. You're already here. Wanna spent the rest of your life in the basement? - i asked him. He glup'ed. I don't think he wanted.

- No, i don't want to. But, will he be in problems if I say anything? - he said.

- He probably won't. Don't worry, hell be fine if he doesn't have anything to hide. Now, his age.

- He's 25.

- His job?

- He's a prosecutor.

- Any record on police?

- No, he was never arrested.

- Any relatives in the city?

- No, he's orfan.-  Oh! So he has a clean record and a reputation now. Uhmm! Smarter than last time. This mother er will die!

- Anything that you can tell us about him that

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ddeecullen
#1
Chapter 21: Author-nim ! oh god !! what are you trying to do ? is it will be 'gdae' at the last ? im so sad :(( hahaha ^^' btw, what a beautiful story. thumbs up >< thanks author-nim :))
KPVIP26
#2
Chapter 13: Its Baeri hun and yes, the feels!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
KPVIP26
#3
Chapter 10: OMONA!!! Daesungie, flex those muscles y!!! (fan-girls over my BB bias)

Writer-nim, the doctor won't kill u for that, if u let him know how u are feeling he will give u medicine for it. My Dongsaeng has it too and she gets iron pills to help with the weakness and dizziness, so make sure u tell your doctor, arasso?
KPVIP26
#4
Chapter 3: Psy = Park Jae sang
JaeYong_TY #5
Chapter 21: pleaaaseeee update soon

btw
FIRST BIGBANG FANFIIICCC

im getting into bigbang now its really great
choidae
#6
Chapter 21: omg!!love this chapter!
please update soon <3
Kang_Jiyong #7
Chapter 21: Dae look so cool and scary at the same time.....i love it......
bananakun
#8
Chapter 19: Hello~~I feel bored and re-reading your story and want to give some suggestion. Feel free to ignore it if you want~ uvu

It will the best if you point some of Se7en past. I think reader should know more about se7en in the past and tell us more about Dongwook. Maybe he's different from this se7en person. And from how you write in the story, I can't find a connection between Dongwook and se7en. So I think you need to reveal something concerning se7en.

About the pairing. I think it's better if you get along with GDae, Baeri, and Top7en. I guess it's not that bad idea make baeri together. I'm happy whoever Dae ended up with. If you make Dae with GD I think it's not that bad tho. Seeing how their story in the past make it legit enough for they to be together. Well the pairing can change depends how the story goes to. Still it's your story so it's all up to you. You can even make Se7en end up with Daesung if you want lololol. Kidding xDD

About the Gri tag, I think you should erase it. I don't think Ri can ended up together with Jiyong after how you make him being together with Youngbae and how it looks so hawt for me lololol. I love both Gri and Baeri, but I love Baeri more than it. If you make a plot twist where you make Ri together with Ji, it will hurt Bae so much. So please dooooonnnn't!!! Just please let him happy being together with Ri ;;A;;

Oh dear I'm talking so freaking long. Sorry for trashing your comment box lolol. Not sure if it can help you. But I hope it will help even just a little.
I'll wait for the next chapter no matter how long it make me to wait it. I love your story 'v')v
I hope you haven't abandoned it yet, *dooooonnn't!!!!!*