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By my side
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Daesung P.O.V

I was ready to see him now! That was what I told myself for the past hour, but I knew I wasn't. I was rather terrified to see him because I knew, all the feelings I tried to push away would come back too fast, too strong. And then, there was Jiyoung. I love him. I really do, but can I love him more than HIM? Jesus, why is my life such a mess? Anyway, I have to call him so I might as well do it faster. The faster you cut, the less you feel pain. Who was the stupid who said this? - Call him over, I'll personally investigate him. - I told one of my subordinates. In less than 20 minutes I heard a knock on the door. For a second I got nervous, but then I told myself to chill out, ge was just the man I LOVED (see, simple past!)

1...2...3...He entered.

For a minute or two all we could do was stare at each other, I was sit on my chair, a level higher than where he was, but the moment our eyes meet I wish I was by his side. Nothing could have prepared me for the rush if feelings I felt. Too many emotions. I wanted to hold him, make him feel safe. He didn't change much, his hair color was the same, eyes were fierce as always, his skin as white as always, maybe a little more since he was working on a hospital now. His hair was perfectly combed and his glasses gave him a more mature look. But, was it by imagination or...was he in pain? One side of his face seemed a little red....No way Jiyoung would have beaten him?! No, better saying, no way Jiyoung hit him THAT hard?! I knew he hated him, but I had to know, whether he and the other man were with my baby, or if it was the supposed-to-be-a-dead-man work. I just had to! Seunghyun seemed scared, but that feeling soon disappeared, he knew how to act strong when he wanted to. But he couldn't fool me, not me! I knew him better. I wonder what Jiyoung told him, what kinds of threats he said? How far could he go for his love by me? It would be interesting.

- You didn't change much since you left. - I said.

- Well, it seems like you did change. Why am I here your highness? - he answered with flames on his eyes.

- Please have a sit since it may take a while. Jiyoung, if you may? - Jiyoung brought a chair and throwed it to Seunghyun. His eyes meet mine and I knew he was hurt. What can I do?

- Now, shall we begin? What is your name? - I asked.

- You know my name why are...?

- Just answer the question. - I was in the c

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ddeecullen
#1
Chapter 21: Author-nim ! oh god !! what are you trying to do ? is it will be 'gdae' at the last ? im so sad :(( hahaha ^^' btw, what a beautiful story. thumbs up >< thanks author-nim :))
KPVIP26
#2
Chapter 13: Its Baeri hun and yes, the feels!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
KPVIP26
#3
Chapter 10: OMONA!!! Daesungie, flex those muscles y!!! (fan-girls over my BB bias)

Writer-nim, the doctor won't kill u for that, if u let him know how u are feeling he will give u medicine for it. My Dongsaeng has it too and she gets iron pills to help with the weakness and dizziness, so make sure u tell your doctor, arasso?
KPVIP26
#4
Chapter 3: Psy = Park Jae sang
JaeYong_TY #5
Chapter 21: pleaaaseeee update soon

btw
FIRST BIGBANG FANFIIICCC

im getting into bigbang now its really great
choidae
#6
Chapter 21: omg!!love this chapter!
please update soon <3
Kang_Jiyong #7
Chapter 21: Dae look so cool and scary at the same time.....i love it......
bananakun
#8
Chapter 19: Hello~~I feel bored and re-reading your story and want to give some suggestion. Feel free to ignore it if you want~ uvu

It will the best if you point some of Se7en past. I think reader should know more about se7en in the past and tell us more about Dongwook. Maybe he's different from this se7en person. And from how you write in the story, I can't find a connection between Dongwook and se7en. So I think you need to reveal something concerning se7en.

About the pairing. I think it's better if you get along with GDae, Baeri, and Top7en. I guess it's not that bad idea make baeri together. I'm happy whoever Dae ended up with. If you make Dae with GD I think it's not that bad tho. Seeing how their story in the past make it legit enough for they to be together. Well the pairing can change depends how the story goes to. Still it's your story so it's all up to you. You can even make Se7en end up with Daesung if you want lololol. Kidding xDD

About the Gri tag, I think you should erase it. I don't think Ri can ended up together with Jiyong after how you make him being together with Youngbae and how it looks so hawt for me lololol. I love both Gri and Baeri, but I love Baeri more than it. If you make a plot twist where you make Ri together with Ji, it will hurt Bae so much. So please dooooonnnn't!!! Just please let him happy being together with Ri ;;A;;

Oh dear I'm talking so freaking long. Sorry for trashing your comment box lolol. Not sure if it can help you. But I hope it will help even just a little.
I'll wait for the next chapter no matter how long it make me to wait it. I love your story 'v')v
I hope you haven't abandoned it yet, *dooooonnn't!!!!!*