✧ ⋮ First Teaser

✧ ⋮ Seoul Solar Assassins — story starts.

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SEOUL, SOUTH KOREA

DECEMBER 2002
 

 

"Who are you?" Her surprisingly calm voice echoed throughout the dark alley, braided with the loud tapping of her shoes as she trailed along after the mysterious man a few feet ahead of her.

He didn’t bother to answer nor did he turn around.

"You're not going to kill me?"

The corner of his lips twitched. "Why would I?"

"Well, you just killed my father."

He flipped up his jacket’s collar and shoved his hands inside the pockets for more warmth, an amused smirk never stopped playing on his lips, finding himself surprisingly charmed by the composed self of a barely-ten-year-old girl. "We both know he deserved it."

She only hummed blankly as a response, fixing her gaze down and hoping through the broken pavement to follow his steps.

It was a chilly December night with the cold wind blowing roughly through their coats, but he showed no urge to increase his pace—his feet strutting the quiet street of Seongbuk excruciatingly slowly. And astonishingly she didn't seem to mind; she's busy trying to explore her bearings as well as minding her steps so she wouldn't fall anyway. 

He turned to the left a few steps past the old camera shop when they're out of the alley, the typical dim street lights of Seoul’s outskirt greeted them gloomily.

"Ahjusshi, what is this place?" She asked rather loudly, curiosity oozing from her voice. The whole lot looked like an abandoned ghost town with houses and stores covered in thick dust and the smell of dampness following her every step. The sound of dogs howling into the night didn't make it any better either.

"This," He finally decided it's time to speak up again, "is going to be where you live from now on."

She blinked at a ribbiting frog as she walked past it. "Yeah? And what makes you think I want to be in this kind of neighborhood, Ahjusshi?"

"Your eyes." He said lowly, and another silence appeared.

He stopped in front of what looked to be an abandoned mansion with the girl following suit; the tall, sturdy gates had long been rusted while a few of the window panes had shattered and left forgotten, covered by a few plank of woods as a quick fix at the time. A large garden sat in the massive yard—or at least that was what the girl gathered, judging from the amount of dead bushes and the moss-ridden fountain that stood in the center of it all. If it were managed properly, it could be a very beautiful garden, she was sure of it.

Unconsciously touching his mustache, he scoffed softly to himself before then turning to his side, searching for some fear hidden within the girl’s face but to his slight surprise, he found none.

She peered at the view in front of her with a vacant expression (and maybe a slight excitement).

"Scared?" He mused softly.

She looked up at him and blinked again. "Of what?"

He jerked his chin towards the mansion as a reply. 

The girl shrugged lightly before fixing her eyes on the mansion once again, her body rocking back and forth on the balls of her feet without thought. "It doesn’t look that bad."

"What about the possibility of me killing you once we're inside?"

"I don't see why you would take me this far only to kill me when you killed my father right after you saw him."

He laughed heartily at the earnest answer. Pretty good head for a young girl, he thought. And when he was done drowning in his own thoughts, she was already in front of the gate, observing the mansion curiously.

"Aren't you coming, Ahjusshi?"

"Stop calling me ahjusshi, the name's Seungwon." He muttered irritatingly under his breath, but closed the distance between him and the gate anyway. She threw him a playful "Okay, ahjusshi." and a cheeky grin and swung open the gate with a eery creak, dashing towards the front door impatiently. Seungwon pinched the bridge of his nose and sighed heavily as he gazed up at the large estate.

Kids.
 

AUTHOR'S NOTE•••A teaser, at last! It's the old one but I edited it a little because  I changed my character's background. I hope you guys like it orz orz I need to read a lot of dark story to make myself a better writer. But anyways, remember the deadline, please, July 7th. Looking forward the rest of the applications.  ♡

 

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coeurvoisier #1
Chapter 13: omg im so late aint i asdfghjkl;
sorry i've been having no wifi connection recently ;;
btw this is unodoskrees i changed my username

AND CONGRATS TO THE ALL FUTURE FOUR ASSASSINS /o/
omg this chapter tho, it's seriously amazing the whole test idea, srsly piqued my interest that i literally abandon my homework rn lol
it was so cruel, yet so awesome i mean how is that even possible ugh. though it made me wonder what motivated xiao mei to join ssa? and just as ciel-- said, jihyun is a bamf.

i just read hayeon's information on the foreword and omfg so it's in the family? and to think that she's taeyeon's sister asdfghjkl;
i love that you made hayeon and yeonkyung as friends, remind me so much of sailormoon lol.
hongmine
#2
Chapter 13: so i never knew i was unsubscribed from this LOL
I ALWAYS THOUGHT YOU ABANDONED THE STORY OMG.
you should know im ohzitao by the way.
-maybe
#3
Chapter 13: omfg i can't describe how amazing this is <3
i was afraid for a second that xiao mei was gonna get shot</3
i love how this actually grabs my attention and makes me want to read every detail.
sometimes when i read i skim through really fast but this just, ugh, i can't stop <3 i have to get every single detail of this amazingness.
congratulations to jojobelle19 c:
i can't wait for more `<3333
ciel--
#4
Chapter 13: holy . oh my god. wow. uhm. this teaser was so good ;___;
first of all, where did you even get the idea of the test? it was absolutely brilliant. like seriously. oh my god. i'm like fangirling over your talent right now orz
i'm definitely curious of xiao mei's character an exactly why a girl like her is in a place like that. and jihyun. she's a bamf and i love it. i'm curious if xiao mei and jihyun would have more significant scenes together in the futre because this was awesome.
oh my god, i'm so excited to meet the rest of the characters! /mourning all the girls who died ;________;
sailorbellewrites
#5
Chapter 13: Oh holy mother of god - that was intense.
First off, thank you for picking my character. It means a lot.
Secondly, what kind of test was that!?! That sounds so incredibly nerve racking! Like wow - one second off and boom your dead. That's just... ohh, I'm so happy Xiao Mei made it because with her personality and skills (or lack there of) she could have easily been one of the dead bodies on the ground.
Jihyun is just so... stoic. Like scarily so. She almost seems so... depressed to be there yet she's doing everything right to pass on as a Solar.

I can't wait to see who is chosen next and all of their personalities.

Happy Writing!
midorima
#6
Chapter 13: omg dude congrats on all the four future
assassins and DUDE YOU'RE DOING A GREAT JOB
RIGHT NOW, YOU CAN DO IT MAN.
spontaneity
#7
Chapter 13: congratz to the four futuer assassins!!!
omggg sungjong :(
starting off with a cruel teaser already. chen <33
wow hes a cop? i'm excited to read more about him then.
wow hayeon sounds like a really tough girl.

that exam O.O shouldn't be so surprised since its training assassins but nonetheless, still was... i wonder how many girls in that room actually made it? was it even half of them?
i wonder what the next exam would be. well jihyun doesn't sound too nice. i wanna know whats the reason xiao mei joined ssa and gave her a boost in assembling the gun.

just read the character profiles on the foreword too. i really really really like hayeon's. i think its cool that not only was her sister the previous mercury but her mother was the first one.
i wonder if this would be a family tradition?

anyways i'm excited to read more upcoming updates!!
four more assassins to reveal!
MyraOnlyful #8
Chapter 13: oh god. I wonder what Xu Xiao Mei felt looking at the dead bodies. It must have been a total nightmare!
Anyway, congrats to jojobelle19!
jjangriah
#9
Chapter 12: first of all, i can't believe you actually granted the request of putting mercury and mars as best pals.
because god i loved sora (ciel—) 's character and we're actually friends and gah. feels.
second, characterization of yeonkyung is spot on— a bit rough on the edges and definitely has her head in the game all the time, while hayeon is really sympathetic for her friend's passing but can snap back into her objective when jongdae (/fans self. jongdaeee) comes around.

third. i love how this is the chapter where sungjong dies and HELLO IT'S ACTUALLY SUNGJONG'S BIRTHDAY. THATS LIKE IRONIC IN A SADISTIC WAY

anyways, thanks via for choosing me and i cannot wait for more updates. :)