Different ways to surprise

Different ways to surprise

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The first anniversary of their dating was coming and Conny was seriously getting curious what Onew will get for her. She had few ideas of her own, and really did not like surprises much. Don’t take her wrong, getting nice surprise is totally fun, but only if its really something good. But she doubted men’s capability in general to come with something original.  She even did not want to think about times with her previous boyfriends when she got soft toys (as she was still 12 years old!) or chocolates (when she was on the diet and he new that!), or the story her friend Kritika told, when her ex decided to held the party for her in her apartment, inviting half of the weird neighbors in (just guess how room looked after that and who cleaned the mess!). Her mind went on and on about the subject.

Probably she has to help him and give him few ideas. Onew was a wonderful and thoughtful man, but also very busy with his schedules and a little clueless to be honest, he might had not time to think properly about this and as good girlfriend she should help him! It was decided, she will leave subtle hints to help him choose the present.

 

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Conny’s good friend Kritika, who appeared just a moment ago in her thoughts, was having a different problem at the same moment. She was not in the best of moods. Standing in the kitchen, arms crossed, Kritika was staring murderously at the calendar on the fridge door. At this moment each date on it was her personal enemy. You never hated the calendar? You must be a very lucky person, who had never wanted something linked to the exact time to happen. But she had a very good reason for looking at that piece of paper with the thought of ripping it and throwing far away. And the reason was a particular guy, well-known to the whole world, his name is TOP. Her boyfriend, in case you did not know. Well, she understands pretty well that he has to promote the new album, give concerts, etc, etc, etc. But being away almost the whole month and than dare to ask what she thinks if he will cancel their holiday they planned long ago to take part in another variety show for another month... That was just too much!

 

 “Time to get some sense back into that guy” – she thought to herself.

 

And she new just the way to do it, especially considering the fact that he is coming back home today.

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Undankbar
#1
Chapter 4: OMG THOSE BABIES SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME!!! O___O
where do you find something so devilish!?

and yay for the wonderful life of Kriti!!! :D
Mistral
#2
@pauline33: re 1 message: this what tags are for, there are no rule that the poster should have characters in it.<br />
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re 2&3: this was written as the snap-shot after previous stories, what is clearly stated in description, plus it was done specialy to people I know, and they know what is what in the fic and why.<br />
As for mistakes, I surely have not done them on purporse (Eng being not native for me). But seeing how many typos you did yourself, you probably should understand how it may happen.<br />
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BUT looking on the fact that the your 3 comments was posted on the same date I had run into very unpleasant conversation with someone(described in my blog http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/42344) and you are actualy a friend of that person, I can draw a very safe conclusion of why you wrote what you did and do not take it to heart.<br />
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But I agree, I still should have done better job for those lovely people I wrote it for!
pauline33
#3
edit properly and maybe readers wont be turned off completely by the lack of a thorough editing job.<br />
btw..this is just a ff so people dont have the guarantee and security that this ff is a good story and that they arent just wasting their time, therefore a description and foreword are need.
pauline33
#4
umm..ur first chapter doesnt start off really interesting, so it doesnt capture the reader's attention. secondly, there are a lot of mistakes e.g. "Don't take her wrong" how can yu take her wrong?? dont yu mean "Don't misunderstand/misinterpret her" or something like that?? and also "...to come with something original..." are yu saying that they physically approach yu and give yu something? if not, yu should have said "...to come UP with something original..."<br />
there are a lot of mistakes, this is just a few.
pauline33
#5
yur poster isnt very good since it doesnt really tell yu anything bout the story and it doesnt reveal some of the characters in it so the reader doesnt even noe wat they are reading,
Miyoko_Kato
#6
hmmp. NO>.< <br />
I didn't read it. I swear I do not know that Onew's present was a star. I do not know that she tried so hard to leave hints on what she wants as "surprise". No. I didn't 'cause I'm not reading any OnewXother-people fic, I swear. TT^TT<br />