006. kariwinn
❝macarooooons : reviews : officially re-opened!
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▲ So hey there thanks for sending this in. :D I want to start off by saying that this poster is really neat. And it's so nice! It's simple and subtle and sweet and I like that. There may not be a lot of decoration and texture but it still looks cute. The photo quality is alright, but the rendering is a little "off" because I can still see some white stuff around the characters. When you're rendering, remember to remove them so they look smooth and not like cut-outs.
The candies were really cute. :3 And they did match the title, so that was good. Your typography is okay, but a little messy. It's okay to have that three-types-of-fonts technique, but your words are placed quite far from each other. And there seems to be no impact on "I'll be Trouble" while the "Candy Lips" stands out. The "Candy Lips" font is cute and sassy which is good for this poster. However it's "I'll be Trouble"'s fonts that are not cutting it for me.
Your "storyline by blah blah" thing is overlapping on the girl's foot haha I think it would have been better if it was nudged a bit to the side and the letter spacing was decreased.
I like the style of the quotation marks you put on the quote. I've been wanting to try that. XD Uhh so what else is there to say? The border is cute, but there is more of it at the bottom than at the top. I think it would be better if they were equal. ^^ Still, its not such a big factor and i
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