005. bluesnickers364
❝macarooooons : reviews : officially re-opened!
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▲ Hi there! Thank you so much for sending this in. Let's begin now, shall we? :) Okay so first thing that caught my eye when I saw this was your name. XD lol or should I say your "credits" (in my terms, "credits" are the "art by" and "story by" stuff in posters). It's a little... large, and in my personal opinion, credits are not supposed to be that large! They should be small and simple and readable. They should be the words people go and look for when they see a good poster and I think they shouldn't be all up in your face. In fact, they don't even have to be decorated that much. (I see you put some text styles there.) They shouldn't be emphasized that much either.Your credits are even stylized the same style as the title and I think that shouldn't be.
Okay, next is the photo of the character. (I don't know who that is sorry. I will just call him Bob for ease.) So the idea of having the two Bobs face each other is pretty nice, since you have a side-view photo of him. That would probably be a move I'd make too. What's wrong with Bob's photo is that he's over-saturated. His face is too light. I think the Bob on the right is white enough, but then I look at the Bob on the left and he's even more white! I think you should avoid over-saturating photos because they are really hard on the eyes; and they don't make good effects either.
The font of your title is okay but it's not centered. Maybe that's
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