002. fationist
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▲ I want to start this review with a comment on how cute JB is. He's so cute here omg ANYWAYS. The genre of this poster is clearly fluffy/cute, and its good that I got the genre right at first try because that means your poster obviously suits the theme and gives off the theme its supposed to. Good job with that. Next thing I want to comment on is the number of JBs. I mean I love JB but I didn't think it was necessary to put in two of him. One would be enough, and I would personally choose the first one over the second one in terms of this poster. I like how you put Jessica (?) up in the clouds. You matched it with the title, and that's good. However the way you put her is not so convincing. The shadows under her, I think, shouldn't have been there because they make it look like the clouds are 2D and Jessica is 3D. Another thing is her hand positions. I know you wanted to make it look like she's resting her hands on the clouds but that's kinda not what I see because it's like she's just doing a penguin pose. Its a little awkward. ^^" Hmm, next is the photo quality, which is good, because they're all HQ and rendered quite nicely.
The font for the title is okay; not exactly "wow I love it!" but just "it's okay". I don't know what to say because it IS suited for a cute poster, however there's just something missing. Now, I have a complaint for the credits ("story by, art by"). I seriously don't like the font
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