002. fationist

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   ▲ I want to start this review with a comment on how cute JB is. He's so cute here omg ANYWAYS. The genre of this poster is clearly fluffy/cute, and its good that I got the genre right at first try because that means your poster obviously suits the theme and gives off the theme its supposed to. Good job with that. Next thing I want to comment on is the number of JBs. I mean I love JB but I didn't think it was necessary to put in two of him. One would be enough, and I would personally choose the first one over the second one in terms of this poster. I like how you put Jessica (?) up in the clouds. You matched it with the title, and that's good. However the way you put her is not so convincing. The shadows under her, I think, shouldn't have been there because they make it look like the clouds are 2D and Jessica is 3D. Another thing is her hand positions. I know you wanted to make it look like she's resting her hands on the clouds but that's kinda not what I see because it's like she's just doing a penguin pose. Its a little awkward. ^^" Hmm, next is the photo quality, which is good, because they're all HQ and rendered quite nicely.

The font for the title is okay; not exactly "wow I love it!" but just "it's okay". I don't know what to say because it IS suited for a cute poster, however there's just something missing. Now, I have a complaint for the credits ("story by, art by"). I seriously don't like the font
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sehununnielol
#1
Chapter 2: ❝ Username: sehununnielol
❝ Graphic link: http://imgur.com/gO3fih3
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: cute
❝ Years of experience: a few months
❝ Extras: Lol idk how to edit pics professionally.. kkk
kim-shoemin
#2
❝ Username: happyasian777
❝ Graphic link: http://imgur.com/je9xkoy
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: Romance
❝ Years of experience: 1 year and a couple of months
❝ Extras:warning: BEWARE OF A REALLY BAD POSTER! I'm really bad at typography so the title is really bad, so I tried to make it simple! So I really hope that you'll talk about that in my review. Also, I know this poster is very simple because I'm not very good at blending. Anyways, looking forward to your review!
lexxxi16
#3
❝ Username: Zinni-
❝ Graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/FUOhN7E.png
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: Happy, Cute
❝ Years of experience: 2 years
❝ Extras: This is just a random poster i made, it's not related to any story at all, just fyi.
AsianNoodles
#4
❝ Username: AsianNoodles
❝ Graphic link: http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t496/The-Or/TBWNF.png
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: horror, mystery
❝ Years of experience: 1 1/2
❝ Extras: totally sorry for requesting another one right after I requested >< lol once again on pixlr, and y but I want to see how I can start improving myself! X]
AsianNoodles
#5
❝ Username: AsianNoodles
❝ Graphic link: http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t496/The-Or/COM-1.png
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: Mystery, action
❝ Years of experience: 1 1/2
❝ Extras: I actually use neither photoshop nor gimp haha, so the quality is bound to be significantly lower than I could be hehehe. I use pixlr, since my dinosaur of a computer refuses to be compatible with both gimp and photoshop. And take your time! haha!
teenme14
#6
❝ Username: Teenme14
❝ Graphic link: https://24.media.tumblr.com/0f860851171e43a58966b1a275404bb4/tumblr_n6nn8d0S8a1to9q10o2_1280.png
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: Romance, Autumn
❝ Years of experience: 2
❝ Extras: Take your time! ^^
fairykyu
#7
❝ Username: fairykyu
❝ Graphic link: ❝ Username: minideer
❝ Graphic link: http://i.minus.com/iZclbM9eA33gR.gif
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: angst, supernatural
❝ Years of experience: almost 4 months
❝ Extras: Thank you! take your time <333
YOOMESBOND
#8
❝ Username: minideer
❝ Graphic link: http://i.minus.com/iZclbM9eA33gR.gif
❝ Graphic type: Poster
❝ Genre: Romcom, cute
❝ Years of experience: 3 months
❝ Extras: Thank you! And this is heavily inspired by Vanivici.
ChemicalLuvs #9
❝ Username:ChemicalLuvs
❝ Graphic link:http://i1296.photobucket.com/albums/ag13/Dyo_omma/tumblr_mwei3nF5PS1qh1cveo1_500_zps1ec4e173.png
❝ Graphic type: graphic contest
❝ Genre:mystery,action(?)
❝ Years of experience: A year
❝ Extras: My newest graphic contest poster. This is a different style from my usual poster. I do hope I did good for this. I really like your review and hope you mind reviewing another of my poster :))
ChemicalLuvs #10
Chapter 12: Hi! Sorry for the late comment. I just got into internet today. Thanks so much for the review!! I knew the font are off somewhere -.-
I'm glad you didn't think its a complete failure OTL
I'll try to fixed my poster with this :))
Thanks again