003. jinjinjin
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▲ Why did you ask for a review jinjinjin. (If you didn't know, jinjinjin is my sister.) Why! Since you are my sister and I hate you I will make this review super short. Okay let me get started. The typography is pretty good; it suits the poster well. Obviously because it's pink ("stawberry") and sweet. Good job with that. Additional kudos to that strawberry vector. Next thing is the photo quality - good because they are HQ and blah blah blah Luhan is rendered well blah blah blah.
Complaint time! My favorite segment. Okay, first of all I want to complain about the strawberry pattern. Its cute but it's low quality. The rest of the poster's quality is good so that pattern actally and factually decreased its overall quality! Another thing I noticed about that strawberry pattern is that one strawberry is cut! May I direct your attention to the upper left corner. Then move your attention a teeny bit to the right. See it? If you don't, you can tell me at dinner and I'll point it out for you. ^^;;
2nd complaint! Though this would not be an obvious fact to a normal aff user, it is to me because I am your sister and I remember you telling me this before: Luhan. Is. Not. The. Main. Character. Of the story. With that note said, he shouldn't be the main focus of the poster! You made it look like he was but in fact he isn't. That's quite a flaw because he's just a supporting role. It would be like putting an e
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