The Calmative

Kakaotalk and Jung Daehyun

It's finally here!! This is in celebraton of ‘Jongup's senior project’ and BAP's comeback! 

Make sure to check out the endnote!

 

Jae: Were you ever serious about me?
Jae: You could’ve ruined me, you know
Jae: You forgetting about me, it kind of saved us both
Jae: Did you know what I would’ve done for you?
Jae: I would go to war for you
Jae: I would die thinking that your side was the only side I wanted to be on
Jae: It has to be right because it was yours

Upp: wow
Upp: um hyung

Dae: i’d prolly go on my knees for u
Dae: did u know u could have tht
Dae: i’d b good at it u know i wud

Upp: hyung, please

Dae: have u ever washed me like i washed u
Dae: ?

Zelo: …omf-
Zelo: washed

Jae: Wow
Jae: I’m impressed
Jae: Guys, Daehyun finally learned how to type full sentences

Upp: …hyung?

Jae: Oh right, sorry
Jae: But seriously
Jae: Don’t you think they’re too cheesy?
Jae: Who would read these stuff?

Dae: i wud

Jae: Do you even know how?

Dae: why d u always pic
Dae: pick on me????

Jae: Don’t worry, I would never pick you

Upp: youngjae hyung?

Dae: fu

Jae: olo

Zelo: um

Dae: hahahahhs U IDIO
Dae: t
Dae: you spelled LOL wrong

Jae: Oh for gods' sake
Jae: That’s it, I’m leaving

Upp: but hyung

Jae: Okay, look
Jae: How about I text you 1:1 later?
Jae: Work on some other part for now

[Jae (Yoo Youngjae) has left the conversation]

Dae: lol hes dumb

Zelo: washed


Upp: i survive just sometimes
Upp: every night I drown and every morning I wake up struggling to breathe

Bang: What even

Upp: do you like those lines hyung?

Bang: How far are you?

Upp: well i’m just starting but
Upp: noona said there were writers who’d begin from the ending

Bang: Interesting
Bang: So you’re looking for the last line or something?

Upp: yeah
Upp: something sad

Bang: Okay how about “Eyes are distracting. You see too much. You don’t see enough”?

Upp: wow that’s good hyung

Bang: I don’t think that should be the last line though
Bang: It’s not sad enough

Upp: how about
Upp: you never realise the holes a person leaves behind until you fall into them

Bang: Brilliant
Bang: Sounds like a war movie thing

Upp: but this is kind of a love story hyung

Bang: Chyeah
Bang: They’re pretty much the same thing

Upp: um okay

Bang: You don’t believe me?
Bang: Look at Troy
Bang: Look at Romeo & Juliet
Bang: Look at all the ancient wars fighting because of love

Upp: how is troy about love hyung?

Bang: They went to war fighting over Helen of Troy

Upp: whoa

Bang: Besides, all is fair in love and war

Upp: I don’t get it

Bang: It’s a quote, kid
Bang: It just means nothing is out of bounds when it comes to love and war
Bang: Love and War kind of make unacceptable things acceptable, get it?

Upp: um..

Bang: Okay, look
Bang: The only two areas of life that you can be forgiven for playing dirty or playing hard are love and war
Bang: Say, if someone kills one of their relatives on the battlefield, it is more ‘acceptable’ than in usual circumstances, get it?
Bang: Hm, but in your case would be love
Bang: For instance, stealing a friend’s lover is seen as more acceptable when it’s out of love, instead of, say, just wanting them for money
Bang: But yeah, in real life, try not to steal anything though, got it?

Upp: yeah guk hyung, thank you
Upp: by the way, how do you know what my story is about?

Bang: I guessed

Upp: wow

Bang: Any story about love is kinda like that

Upp: don’t tell youngjae hyung but actually
Upp: I’m basing a character on him

Bang: Oh that’s good, then you won’t have to get to know your characters if you base them on people you know
Bang: Just try not to make it too obvious

Upp: he’s the love theif

Bang: Thief

Upp: thief*


Upp: do you want to play the stupid bully who only cares about his looks?

Chan: what

Upp: okay never mind

 


A/N:

Reconstructing because I think it . (It doesn't but yeah, it should be in Livejournal, not AFF)

MY HORRIFYINGLY LOVELY MINIONS! THE TIME HAS COME. LO AND BEHOLD, EIGHT APOCALYPSES OF THE HEART!

Okay, so last year, I was drowning in clinical depression, and I thought of how when you get older, people start to look at you and treat you differently. And I realised how the cause of doomsday won't be because of climate change but simply because people don't care. So, I came up with this idea to show how the things we cannot see can also ruin us too. I've been planning this for so long and I was too afraid to do it because I'm not popular on AFF and what I really want is to reach out to people. But I'm afraid it won't work because, yeah, why would anyone care about people they don't know, right.

Just like what BAP is doing with their music, I want to spread awareness of the corruption in our society, how simple things in life, like love, can get twisted by our society until it also twists who you are as a human being. 

To anyone at all who are interested, it's going to be romcom, haha. Yeah, I promise it's not as depressing as it sounds, there is fluffy romance and the cliche high school au, kind of. Oh yeah, the most important thing, it's a slash/het story and Zelo is the male lead as you may have guessed. And haha, the rest is everything Jongup has just said above. I have mixed feelings about this. Poor Youngjae playing the bad dude (because 'guy' is too overrated).

It would mean the world to me to see this project being spread around; If you could share them with your friends or on twitter, tumblr, etc. I don't expect much, I just want to write a good story that will teach readers something at the end of the day. Thank you so effing much if you have read to this far. You are an absolutely wonderful person. 

Here is the link to the story in case the one above cannot be clicked: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/661474.

Thank you again! 

PS. Anything you have to say—advice, feedback, (encouragement)—means a lot to me. Suggest what I can do to reach out, or if it's interesting at all, because if nobody likes it then there's no point.

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yoowifeu
#1
Chapter 7: hahaaha dumbdae is just plain dumb
OhDweam
#2
Chapter 7: Omg hahahaha this is really, really funny xD
I adore it haha Daehyun is really dumb xD
aee_eusebio
#3
Aww,,how cute Jongup to adore his Juniel noona XD

and Daehyun,,you.. smh.. XD
onionroot #4
Chapter 6: So funny this is so funny hahaha please write more if you would :D ahahaha
TheonecalledLeo
#5
Chapter 6: This was brilliant! Made me laugh so hard :'D
anim0ni
#6
Chapter 6: wow! its been a while since the last update!!! you remiind me of JongUp and Juniel again
Jpd0824
#7
Chapter 6: this was really good =] 6 worded stories =]
BaraBaraBap
#8
Chapter 5: omg i love this! it's so funny XD im laughing my of! and its so speical and on top of all its deep as well :D wow im so impressed *^* ~ * huggles author-nim *
Jpd0824
#9
Chapter 5: Loved it!!! :)