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First Impression (7/10)

Well, I'd give a 7 to my impression gull. I was partly impressed and partly unimpressed. Some effects in the poster really did make my left eyebrow raise. I hope you know what I'm talking about though. But overall, you did one good poster and you deserve some recognition for that. Yaay!

Mood/Genre (7.5/10)

Raawr! Finally an action poster to review. I like how you made this poster because I can feel the action indeed. Well, for me, Teen Top really does have that 'cool', 'gang', 'action' or even 'angst' feel. So yes, a 7.5 to the mood and that guy just below Amber?? He made me feel it's more related to 'gang' instead of 'action' but that's alright. Thus, as I opened the story link though, I saw that it's supernatural and adventure.. Hmm, I understand but it could've been better if the poster was related to some supernatural feeling.. Because for me, the poster is just too 'gangsta' but since you said the mood is action & mystery, so it's still okay. Your effort for the poster to link w/ the mood was still good & I can see the efforts you did. Kudos!

Technique (16.5/20)

I think the word 'partly' is my word for the day. OTL. Okay, so I partly like your blending and partly, I don't like it. Honestly, I don't like how Changjo's face in the bottom left is so... Dark? It makes me feel like t'was burned too much. No, I think the whole Teen Top boys in the bottom looks like you used the burn tool on them or maybe it was something you did. Second of all, your poster looks a bit messy. But OTL that's okay. Your poster still looks good though. But I can't say it looks neat and that's a minus. You could've did something to it. And probably you used layer mask to the pictures on top, am I right?? I might tell you something on that later on. It's something related to the Pictures and not the Technique. And also, I don't get why the sides are dark. Amber's right part and Beside Ricky to the left w/c is I think Chunji?? Is also dark, which is the cause of why Chanjo's face was partially dark.You could've did something to this before the whole poster was made but, since it's finally finished, it's okay. But really, the dark parts on the sides? I don't really like them. Also, you could use some PSD and I already placed one and I'll post it after the review. But still, I appreciate your efforts for the poster. I still like your blending skills though but you could do something about it to make your future posters look.. Nice and neat at the same time.

Pictures (2/5)

Tan tananan! Here we are with the pictures baby. The pictures, I must say, is what makes the poster look disorganized by a tad bit. It looks messy because that's a lot of pictures you piled up there. Honestly, too many pictures can make it messy baby. You could've only placed the two main characters in the top and the rest of Teen Top below the story title. But OTL. Do remember that was just some suggestion because this is what made it look messy.

Quality (3/5)
Well I don't any problems with the quality because quality looks good but, I just don't like the bottom part at all. Especially Ljoe and Chanjo?? Both of them looks dark and being burned out with the burn tool. But naah, the quality is still awesome and cool so, no worries for this.
Coloring (8/10)
Well, I think the coloring is good.. But I did try doing some stuffs to it like changing the color lookup, adjusting the Exposure, Brightness, Contrast and stuff thus adding a PSD, I think it enhanced up a bit. I'll show the result after this review but as for YOUR coloring, I like it. Not much of a problem to this so, Kudos!
Placement (12/15)
Hmmm for me, the placement is okay but, I don't like how you placed some pictures in the poster especially the ones on top but, it's okay. The poster still looks good.
Resources (13/15)
I think you didn't use much of resources like textures or PNG's & many more but, I like all the pictures you used for the posters. But they are too many for pictures. OTL. But still hooray for your resources.
Typography (4/5)
OTL. I like the typography. I like your choice of fonts and I just like how you made some of it blurry. I think it's cool and legit. Plus, I think where you placed the title and stuff is alright so, hooray!
Bonus (5/5)
O MY GULL! I'm sorry if I was being HARSH. Damn!! I don't know what is wrong with me but, I still hope I wasn't being to harsh on you baby. HAHA. I enjoyed reviewing yours and I still admire your editing. I hope you still got some things from this review and fighting to your other works gull! You're a designer in Azuline too, right?? You're obviously one great designer too. Fighting girl! I know you can do many many more beautiful posters in the future! Love, reviewer.
BTW, I edited some stuffs to your poster and added a PSD and OTL here's the result:I know this really . Haha! <3


Total: 78/100

Reviewed by: acupofdeerslove

 

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CupieCakesx3
#1
Chapter 9: Omg thank you so much for the review!
:D
I will totally take some suggestions you said when I make more posters like this^^
HusnaHmzh
#2
Chapter 8: Hey, thank you mate for the review! I'll work harder next time :3 *bows*
Nesnesa
#3
Chapter 5: thank you thank you thank youuuuuu so much acupofdeerslove! i'll keep your tips in mind and I am kinda confused when I had to place Myungsoo's photo lol anyway thank you thankyou thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kkai_otic
#4
Chapter 6: thank you for reviewing my work!! :DDD
I will keep your tips in mind!! ^^
CupieCakesx3
#5
Username: CupieCakesx3
Graphic Link: http://i.minus.com/iogJZKTvdYeNJ.png
Mood: Angst
Summery: I guess I just did it for fun? To improve my skills?
HusnaHmzh
#6
Username: HusnaHmzh
Graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/7958PnZ.png
Mood: Action, mystery
Short summary of the plot for the said graphic: Ehem, it's from the poster shop. (The story link = http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/124037/ancient-to-present-day-adventures-adventure-amber-chunji-ljoe-ricky-supernatural-teentop)
jaehoya
#7
Chapter 4: thank you for the review ^^ will keep your tips im my mind. :D
king-gyu #8
Chapter 3: Thanks for the review :) The thing was I couldn't read the description and I asked for it to be translated but I didn't get a reply so all I knew was that one English phrase that was stated :/ I also tried to put more colour in it...I just didn't know which...