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First Impression (8/10) 
Imagine waking up in the morning and your eyes was directly on the sun and you immediately squinted to clearly see the beauty in font of you. Yeah, that's how I felt literally. After a few seconds though, my eyes adjusted to some faulty things but the poster looks really nice. Good job.  
Mood/Genre (9/10)
I definitely could feel the soft romantic vibes that you are trying to portray coming out of the poster. The poster is also nice to look at too and if you look at it, you wouldn't doubt that the genre of the story for the poster is romance.     

Technique (18/20) 
The blending is really nice and clean but then there's this one thing that bothered me the most in the whole poster - Minho. Minho's head, to be specific, is kinda cut off and it looked really awkward to me. Maybe you could smudge it or you could have chosen another photo for him but other than that, the blending looks awesome. 

Pictures (3.5/5)
Well, I love the pictures that you chose - except for like what I said before about Minho's head. Sulli looks gorgeous and Minho looks very handsome and base from your description about locking eyes with each other and then falling in love - I think it would have been better if you chose pictures of them looking right into each other's eyes. It would have made more sense (I'm not saying that your poster doesn't make any sense, it does but you know what I mean). 

Quality (4.5/5)


Yay! I love love love the quality of the poster - it's not overly sharpened and it's not blur. It's just the right amount of sharpening tools otl.  

Coloring (9/10) 
I also love the coloring of the poster. It's very clean and simple and sophisticated and I like how it's tinted with only one color - a color between orange and pink (I couldn't tell). The poster looks good. Well done. Although I think the poster is too bright though...or maybe it's just me.   

Placement (12.5/15)
I like the placements of the characters and fonts. It's a very simple poster though so I don't have much to say although I sort of wished you included a stock below Sulli and Minho's body. I think the stock would make a great addition considering that the lower half of your poster is looking pretty empty but the poster looks awesome as it is. 

Resources (14/15)
Well there's not much resources used (am I right?) because the poster is looking simple but I think it's a good thing because adding some unnecessary textures might make the poster I don't know...crowded, dirty? 

Typography (4/5)
I like the typography in the poster. I like the font you used for strangers although I think the font should be a little bigger but it's nice. The credits was also nice, it's simple and it compliments the title well although I would have opted for a darker color but it's okay. Good job. 

Bonus (5/5)
Hey, I hope you find this review helpful. Thank you for requesting from us. You're a really good designer. Fighting! 
 

Total: 87.5/100 
Reviewed by: khlozzer

 

 

 

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CupieCakesx3
#1
Chapter 9: Omg thank you so much for the review!
:D
I will totally take some suggestions you said when I make more posters like this^^
HusnaHmzh
#2
Chapter 8: Hey, thank you mate for the review! I'll work harder next time :3 *bows*
Nesnesa
#3
Chapter 5: thank you thank you thank youuuuuu so much acupofdeerslove! i'll keep your tips in mind and I am kinda confused when I had to place Myungsoo's photo lol anyway thank you thankyou thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kkai_otic
#4
Chapter 6: thank you for reviewing my work!! :DDD
I will keep your tips in mind!! ^^
CupieCakesx3
#5
Username: CupieCakesx3
Graphic Link: http://i.minus.com/iogJZKTvdYeNJ.png
Mood: Angst
Summery: I guess I just did it for fun? To improve my skills?
HusnaHmzh
#6
Username: HusnaHmzh
Graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/7958PnZ.png
Mood: Action, mystery
Short summary of the plot for the said graphic: Ehem, it's from the poster shop. (The story link = http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/124037/ancient-to-present-day-adventures-adventure-amber-chunji-ljoe-ricky-supernatural-teentop)
jaehoya
#7
Chapter 4: thank you for the review ^^ will keep your tips im my mind. :D
king-gyu #8
Chapter 3: Thanks for the review :) The thing was I couldn't read the description and I asked for it to be translated but I didn't get a reply so all I knew was that one English phrase that was stated :/ I also tried to put more colour in it...I just didn't know which...