Hanging On The Promises (in songs of yesterday)

Description

In which Do Kyungsoo goes back home, reconnects with old friends, meets new people, and realizes exactly how much can change within six years.

or, the story in which i try to be all reminiscent and nostalgic and stuff and it ends up like angsty kaisoo. like, wtf.

Foreword

For ON CLOUD NINE ~ A WRITING CONTEST

title from "Here I Go Again" by Whitesnake

not really related, but a bit

because I don't know when I shouldn't write and stuff

yeah so uh sorry

i think i'll prettify this later

mebbe

reviewed by:

 

✪ Pastel Love Request Shop ❥: very quick, thorough - good review, good grasp on grammar (but less allowance for stylizations, parentheses, etc.)

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JEONJUNGK00K #1
Chapter 1: Sigh, I thought they would somehow ended up back together. But I kid you not, kaisoo is always full with angst and here I am trying so hard to get used with it.

Anyways, this is beautiful. You wrote the words so beautifully, alright. I'd love to hear more brilliant stories from you soon! xx
Roochi #2
Chapter 1: I HATE YOU! I really do.
Nah, just kidding.
Seriously, i'm not even a fan of Exo, still i read this pleasantly lengthy oneshot, and enjoyed it to the extremes!

It was amazing, from the title which i found interesting.
To the characters who were so vivid.
And the flow of the fic that is so smooth and enjoyable.

The storyline was quite interesting. And i like your imagery and how everything is so detailed.
You captured the mood very well in your writing and i felt like i could see,hear, and feel everything!

Honestly, i like everything except for the ending, but it was perfect like that, because six years really is a long time and not everything stays the same.
(In my mind i've created my own alternate ending; "i'm sure i can bring back that someone, someday," Kyungsoo says, his voice raising slowly, as the new-born hope in his chest does.)lol, because i just died a bit inside when i read your end! *pouts*

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!
adilah #3
Chapter 1: stupid jongin.
nocturnalrescue #4
Chapter 1: >~<
Amazing...
*dies*
nya049 #5
ooooh myy,
you broke my heart

it's a really really nice fic
good luck with the contest, hwaiting...!!!
toxicology #6
also i subscribed even though it's a oneshot because i <3 you so much. now give me food.
toxicology #7
Chapter 1: this looks much longer on aff than it did on the docs -.-

but no unhappy family pointy feels. just kidding :D it's wonderful
boolProp269 #8
Chapter 1: ME GUSTA ME WAAAAYYYYY GUSTA
u have some awkward kinda-tangent sounding stuffs but they're nice.
D: sad ending... im sad.. time to go read fluffy fic
DUDE CHANGE THE TITLE THIS IS GOOOOOOOOD CALL IT MYOSOTIS CUZ THAT WORKS
ME GUSTA
Corrupted-Rainbows #9
Chapter 1: did you seriously title it "why i shouldn't write, period"? >.< you're worse than xiumin in the 12th floor of apartment e fic. seriously though, this is decent stuff.
but it is kind of the length of a college thesis paper (well not really but still)
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