Review

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T i t l e ❧  5/5 

The title is very interesting! nice. nice. 

P o s t e r & B a c k g r o u n d ❧ 8.5/10 b u l g e s

Can i just say that the background is super adorable omfg. And you know what, the poster actually makes sense so, it's good!

P l o t & o r i g i n a l i t y ❧ 7/10  t h i g h s

Alrighty, even though you got the other bits high, I'm not so sure about the plot and originality because it's a common storyline to us fangirls, i have to admit but i like how you made some small changes to it. So extra point for you!

G r a m m a r & s p e l l i n g ❧ 10/10 b u t t s

 Perfect spelling and grammar. u v u 

W r i t i n g  s t y l e & s t o r y  f l o w ❧ 10/10  a b s

Simple writing style, nothing wrong with it though. It's your word choice. The story flowed well, despite only reading 3 chapters but 1 and 2 flowed well so i'm just assuming the rest is great. 

C h a r a c t e r i z a t i o n ❧ 8.5/10  n e c k  v e i n s 

I suggest you express the characters' feelings more but i'm happy with the first chapter because you introduced the main characters well. 

O v e r a l l  e n j o y m e n t ❧ 87/100 

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A/N : sorry for the wait~